Peter was falling to certain death! in a ravein bigger than any other!!! "HA HA You wise you would have dodged my blindness poison cause now u cant see ur friends fighting till the death for you! >:D" carina and the others were fight a ton of spiders on the bridge to ender caves in the ravein Screamz! "ITS THE HUGE BIG SPIDER WHO'S TRYING TO K.ILL US" stm threw her sword at death dream in the form of a spider falling by! {XD SEE WHAT I DID THERE falling by? XD} zeldakid got startled by stm's s.c.r.e.a.m.i.n.g and shot an arrow off the bridge right into death dream's eye! "0_0 it's. it's. Peter! falling! D:" carina said. with eveyone off guard startled by peter falling with death dream Ten endermen grabbed each one of the team "What!" gabe said being grabbed by an enderman "Let me go" "UGGH" eveyone unhappy but then a 4 block high endermen walked over with a iron hand a glowing purple ender pearl around his neck and a huge purple scar on his left arm "remember me carina?" the enderman said smiling "no. No! it cant be! your not. you cant be!" carina freaked out "yes i'm Void the enderman the one who k.illed Peter's parents and made u have to watch after him in wither ville!" void said his smile grew bigger "You k.illed Peter's Parents!" blazetail angered "yes and next i'm gonna to k.ill all of you!" "you little!" iViporboy said "i'm just kidding i'm here to capture you by order of death dream i know you know who i'm talking about carina for you have heard of the death dream before >:)" void threw a splash potion of knockout at them and they ofcaurse got knocked out!
Death got hit in the neck with stm's sword and shot in the eye by zeldakid's arrow "UGGGGH My neck!" death dream cryed as both parts of his spider form are bleeding "huh who hit you?" Peter asked "UGGGH your friends your so weak you call your self a hero but all you are is a weakling!" death dream said yelling at peter "no. i'm no hero but i'm not weak and if i die than your dying with me!" Peter yelled "YOUR BLIND YOU CANT SEE ME ONLY I CAN SEE YOU" "Even if i'm blind i have my ears i can hear you talking my and my nose and you smell bad!" Peter said death dream scileced Peter threw himself forward running into one of the falling spiders peter smelled stm it was her sword in death dreams neck and he smelled zeldakid it was the arrow in his eye peter threw the spider at where he thought death dream was he didnt hear anything hit him he felt blood on his head it was death dream behind him he threw himself backwards kicking death dream in the face pulling the sword out of death dream's neck death dream screamed it hurt peter's ears making peter lose his hearing but he didnt give up! he threw himself at death dream slicing his neck off death swung his spider arm at peter cutting his nose off making peter lose his smell peter then blacked out.
Peter blinked over and over again he saw two purple eyes that were blocked by sunglasses his hearing smelling and eye sight were healed "ender. EnderMan!" peter yelled! "no it's an enderman but dont hurt him he saved your life i think you know me" he said smiling "Notch!? is it really you!?" "yes this enderman's name is EnderDude" notch said "hey EnderDude nice to meet you! btw thanks for saving me. hey i'm not redstone ripped anymore!" "yes your not ripped anymore" he handed peter a black jacket with a blue 11 on it "thanks i was cold!" peter said then notch handed him a sword "this is the most powerful diamond sword of them all use this to survive" notch said "thanks hey it has a symbol of a diamond on it" peter said the the roof of the ravein busted open there was a loud scream in the air the almost never ending floor of the ravein lit up dark red! "what's going on!" peter said "the nightmare times are beginning death dreams not dead he's still alive but now his black shadow of evil shall show and reveal his true form peter you must defeat death dream and rescue boom and endie!" notch yelled to peter "wait they got endie to!" "yes they do now go into that small cave it leads to the ender caves which is where herobrine death dream and enderon are going to have a meeting and they will have your friends and boom and endie with them! peter run! and save the world from that nightmare!" notch said vanishing the ledge cracked "you heard him run peter!" enderdude said running with peter than they tripped of a huge rock and land in front of a pitch black spot all they could see was a blue twinkle and two glowing red eyes!
holy fudge!!!! 0_0 "TFmel was slain by epic suspense" xD oh my gawd!!! that was awesome!! =D i seriously can't wait for part 12!! btw have you read part three of Rise of Enderon yet?
@TFmel XDXDXD thx it makes me feel like i'm really good at writing story's also yes i just read part 3 yesterday : ) am i gonna be in it soon? @Blazetail Thx XD Xtreme cliffhanger's :D also since school is back on monday i might do part 12 today or tommarow o^o
@TFmel I AM :D I GOT THE PIC DONE ALREADY :D you wait almost two months for creeper quest part 11 and then u get part 12 also XD SO AWESOME if i was you i would love my story even more than you XD LOL
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04 Jan, 2014, 12:56 pm
Peter was falling to certain death! in a ravein bigger than any other!!! "HA HA You wise you would have dodged my blindness poison cause now u cant see ur friends fighting till the death for you! >:D" carina and the others were fight a ton of spiders on the bridge to ender caves in the ravein Screamz! "ITS THE HUGE BIG SPIDER WHO'S TRYING TO K.ILL US" stm threw her sword at death dream in the form of a spider falling by! {XD SEE WHAT I DID THERE falling by? XD} zeldakid got startled by stm's s.c.r.e.a.m.i.n.g and shot an arrow off the bridge right into death dream's eye! "0_0 it's. it's. Peter! falling! D:" carina said. with eveyone off guard startled by peter falling with death dream Ten endermen grabbed each one of the team "What!" gabe said being grabbed by an enderman "Let me go" "UGGH" eveyone unhappy but then a 4 block high endermen walked over with a iron hand a glowing purple ender pearl around his neck and a huge purple scar on his left arm "remember me carina?" the enderman said smiling "no. No! it cant be! your not. you cant be!" carina freaked out "yes i'm Void the enderman the one who k.illed Peter's parents and made u have to watch after him in wither ville!" void said his smile grew bigger "You k.illed Peter's Parents!" blazetail angered "yes and next i'm gonna to k.ill all of you!" "you little!" iViporboy said "i'm just kidding i'm here to capture you by order of death dream i know you know who i'm talking about carina for you have heard of the death dream before >:)" void threw a splash potion of knockout at them and they ofcaurse got knocked out!
04 Jan, 2014, 1:16 pm
Death got hit in the neck with stm's sword and shot in the eye by zeldakid's arrow "UGGGGH My neck!" death dream cryed as both parts of his spider form are bleeding "huh who hit you?" Peter asked "UGGGH your friends your so weak you call your self a hero but all you are is a weakling!" death dream said yelling at peter "no. i'm no hero but i'm not weak and if i die than your dying with me!" Peter yelled "YOUR BLIND YOU CANT SEE ME ONLY I CAN SEE YOU" "Even if i'm blind i have my ears i can hear you talking my and my nose and you smell bad!" Peter said death dream scileced Peter threw himself forward running into one of the falling spiders peter smelled stm it was her sword in death dreams neck and he smelled zeldakid it was the arrow in his eye peter threw the spider at where he thought death dream was he didnt hear anything hit him he felt blood on his head it was death dream behind him he threw himself backwards kicking death dream in the face pulling the sword out of death dream's neck death dream screamed it hurt peter's ears making peter lose his hearing but he didnt give up! he threw himself at death dream slicing his neck off death swung his spider arm at peter cutting his nose off making peter lose his smell peter then blacked out.
04 Jan, 2014, 1:39 pm
Peter blinked over and over again he saw two purple eyes that were blocked by sunglasses his hearing smelling and eye sight were healed "ender. EnderMan!" peter yelled! "no it's an enderman but dont hurt him he saved your life i think you know me" he said smiling "Notch!? is it really you!?" "yes this enderman's name is EnderDude" notch said "hey EnderDude nice to meet you! btw thanks for saving me. hey i'm not redstone ripped anymore!" "yes your not ripped anymore" he handed peter a black jacket with a blue 11 on it "thanks i was cold!" peter said then notch handed him a sword "this is the most powerful diamond sword of them all use this to survive" notch said "thanks hey it has a symbol of a diamond on it" peter said the the roof of the ravein busted open there was a loud scream in the air the almost never ending floor of the ravein lit up dark red! "what's going on!" peter said "the nightmare times are beginning death dreams not dead he's still alive but now his black shadow of evil shall show and reveal his true form peter you must defeat death dream and rescue boom and endie!" notch yelled to peter "wait they got endie to!" "yes they do now go into that small cave it leads to the ender caves which is where herobrine death dream and enderon are going to have a meeting and they will have your friends and boom and endie with them! peter run! and save the world from that nightmare!" notch said vanishing the ledge cracked "you heard him run peter!" enderdude said running with peter than they tripped of a huge rock and land in front of a pitch black spot all they could see was a blue twinkle and two glowing red eyes!
04 Jan, 2014, 1:40 pm
<><><><><><>End Of Part 11<><><><><><>
04 Jan, 2014, 2:33 pm
holy fudge!!!! 0_0
"TFmel was slain by epic suspense"
xD oh my gawd!!! that was awesome!! =D i seriously can't wait for part 12!!
btw have you read part three of Rise of Enderon yet?
04 Jan, 2014, 4:26 pm
Blaze: God I feel bad for that cheese.
Ty: You THINK?!
Blaze: o_o
Ty: what?
Blaze: I can't argue about the cliffhanger!!! It's too good!
Ty: o_o
04 Jan, 2014, 5:35 pm
@TFmel
XDXDXD thx it makes me feel like i'm really good at writing story's also yes i just read part 3 yesterday : ) am i gonna be in it soon?
@Blazetail
Thx XD Xtreme cliffhanger's :D also since school is back on monday i might do part 12 today or tommarow o^o
04 Jan, 2014, 5:59 pm
^ 0o0 please do!!! =D
and yep next part =) lol writting it on paper now xD
04 Jan, 2014, 6:32 pm
@TFmel
I AM :D I GOT THE PIC DONE ALREADY :D you wait almost two months for creeper quest part 11 and then u get part 12 also XD SO AWESOME if i was you i would love my story even more than you XD LOL
04 Jan, 2014, 6:51 pm
WOOOOO-' "I0 mimutes later"oooooo o oo ... ok i'm done xD can't wait!!
lol what?! XD
05 Jan, 2014, 5:40 pm
@TFmel
i might upload it later today if not probaly not until saturday
05 Jan, 2014, 11:46 pm
@iViporBoy
Thx Pt 12 is up now :D