First Novel Synopsis by Tropeifier
So, I was wondering if you all would be willing to read the blurb (brief description on the back cover) for my first novel. Since none of you have read the novel, it'll show if the description alone creates enough interest for a purchase. As a draft, I'll improve it based partially on your reviews.
(Novel rated #mature for vio.len.ce.)
Any and all feedback is appreciated.
#novel #question #help #book #feedback #review #thanks
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30 Dec, 2013, 6:24 pm
"The dead have risen Who will fall?
Bill Kennedy is in trouble. Set to live out his days in a prison for a heinous crime, Bill is abandoned in the building while all the other prisoners are taken to safety as a disaster strikes. A strange outbreak of a horrible disease is causing people to die and return as terrifying flesh-eating monsters. With each passing day, the number of infected swells and all hope seems lost. Trapped behind the walls that continue to imprison him, he must ponder the fate of those he loves. With the arrival of two mysterious survivors, Bill must put his faith --and his life-- in the hands of strangers to continue on in this new world. Tormented by visions of his past in the nightmare that is the present, Bill and his new allies will stop at nothing to find a way out of this bleak new life. But in the quest for answers, he must ask himself another question: Is it worth surviving another day if you must lose your humanity to do it?"
30 Dec, 2013, 6:27 pm
(For those wondering, no, this Bill isn't the one I draw on here. The Bill I draw here is named to reference Novel Bill.)
Additionally, I plan on calling the novel "Starved for Life". Thoughts?
30 Dec, 2013, 6:36 pm
looks pretty awesome!
what about...'The last survivors'? <:3
30 Dec, 2013, 9:00 pm
A Novel? How old are you? sound cool though
30 Dec, 2013, 10:58 pm
I'd totally read this book! And I love the name too!
31 Dec, 2013, 2:17 am
good. The title is good, but maybe take out the "THE" and make it "Life Starved" Also, my names Billy :D, hopefully im a survivor. Also, maybe on their journey, they come acrosd a kid. The kid is still human, immune to the strange disease for some reason, but is also carrying it. The kid is bit by these flesh eating creatures, and survives, but one of the group members thinks the child is a weird breed of intelligent ones a chases him off, destroying hope of finding a cure. Just an idea. :P
31 Dec, 2013, 2:19 am
also, do u have a wii u?
31 Dec, 2013, 4:41 am
That sounds awesome.
31 Dec, 2013, 4:42 am
This coming from a guy who's read a lot of books.
31 Dec, 2013, 5:40 am
"Derenting the Dawn of Dew"
01 Jan, 2014, 1:41 am
I was just wonderin impressive novel though lol reminds me of Abe Lincoln vampire slayer lol
15 Feb, 2014, 6:34 pm
Name it, " One Hope " mabey?