Feedback? Critisism? by Oodles of DoodlesC
I would love some critiques from you guys on my comic! Gimme the facts here! Be completely honest! Don't just say you like it, say its strong points and places to be improved on. Idc if it sounds rude. I would prefer if you were very frank.
#critique#please#help#feedback#needed#and#appreciated!
Yes, I stole Sparkleworks from my bud #iamrealdumb! Muah ha ha! I needed another guy and some1 who could be an asset for the revolution! Now Sparkle is manly (actually a man now XD) and even more badass.
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28 Dec, 2013, 7:12 am
Hmmmm okay well let's see.....
Strong points, The plot. Definatly one of the coolest things.
Other thingssssssssss.....
-Maybe a liiiiiiiittle more detail on the characters (but I get it's a comic and such so yea. They're never detailed XD)
-I think you should put like a lot of thought into cities and such there because that would be AWESHUM and shiz.
So yes, that is my feedback.
Also Orchid says hi :3
28 Dec, 2013, 7:16 am
Wow! You got me on the detail XDDDD Ha ha! Ok! I will definatly do that! Also more symbolism and some references too!
28 Dec, 2013, 7:24 am
HECK YES *falls from sky* REEEEEEEEEFREEEEEEEENCEEEEEEEEES! IT'S GONNA BE AMAAAAAAAAAAAAZING :'D
28 Dec, 2013, 7:29 am
ooooh u should neeever ask for criticism! D:
Ppl get carried away.
28 Dec, 2013, 7:33 am
Really? ^ Hmmm? Oh well! XD Its ok if they do! As long as its not too much! e3e
Also, I'm thinking of a lot of good ref uses! Rosebud is one of them! (Citizen Kane) Also Samurai Jack and plenty of others!
28 Dec, 2013, 11:37 am
I'm strangely okay with this XD
My manly girl has become a man, this is beautiful ;_;
28 Dec, 2013, 12:30 pm
I did a thing XD XD