"A Christmas Without You" By: Ally Coffee ewe by CinnyWolf

1 christmas there was a girl. She lived in a small town, and next to her bestest friend, A boy. One christmas morning the girl woke up to snow covering the outside like a fluffy white sheet. She threw off her covers and ran down the stairs, under her tree were dozens of presents sparkling in the dawn light. Her mother stood by the fireplace, smiling "Good morning pumpkin" she greeted. "Good morning to you too, Mother, And merry christmas!" The girl ran up and hugged her Mother delightfully.

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24 Dec, 2013, 5:48 pm
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CinnyWolf

24 Dec, 2013, 6:07 pm

(Continued here)
There was a knock at the door and the girl opened it to find the boy all bundled up in a red jacket and a scarf holding a small gift. "M-mind if I come in?" he shivered "Its cold out here." The girl gigged and lead him in. "This is for you, Merry christmas" Said the boy handing the small golden box to her. "Thank you" She said as she unrapped it. Insidd there was a small music box, and when it opened, there was a happy tune that would play. "I have something for you too!" The girl walked past her mom and picked up a gift wrapped up in blue tissue paper. "I'll save this untill I get home," The boy took the gift and nodded thankfully "My father said come right back after I delivered that." He turned to leave and began to walk to the door ad the girl waved goodbye. She noticed some bruises and scratches along the boy's arms and legs but they were soon hiden by the clothes he wore. Later that day after all the gifts were opened, The girl went out to visit the boy as she did most days. Today the boy was out sitting in the snow. "Hi" She greeted sitting down next to him. "Oh, hey." The boy muffled from under the long scarf around his neck. After a few hours of talking, The girl mumbled quietly only for them to hear "I'm glad you're my friend. A christmas without you is like heavon with no god." The boy looked down and closed his eyes "Agreed" He mumbled back.
"Time to come in, dear!" The girls mother called. "I gotta go, see ya tomarrow!" The girl got up and ran to her mom. "Coming!" She called back. "Bye!" The boy yelled to her as she vansished behind the door to her house.
A few days pasted and she never saw the boy. She woke up one night to the sounds of sirens and flashing lights. She glanced out her window and the boys house was on fire. She could bardly hear anything over the sirens but she could see the boys mother and father crying and scre.aming at a police officer. She was only able to hear the boy's mother cry "My son's still in there!!"

Animals_N_Poke_Lover

24 Dec, 2013, 6:19 pm

:'''(

CinnyWolf

24 Dec, 2013, 6:23 pm

(continued here again)

A few years later, on christmas day, The girl visited the boy's grave. She had a candy cane, with a pink bow tied on neatly. And the music box, tucked under her arm. She layed the candy cane in front of the boy's grave stone and sat down next to it. Tears ran down her rosey cheeks as she opened the box, letting the soft tunes ring in her ears. It began to snow and a small snow flake landed on the bottem of the box. She looked down at it, and noticed a small string. She instantily pulled it up. The bottem easly peeled off as if a pice of paper had been layed down. She lifted it and words were on the back. It read

Dear ...,

I allways loved you. There was not one day that I miss you. I hope you know that.

With all my feelings,
...

The girl cryed. She felt the same but... It was to late
"Oh Jackson..." She began looking at the boy's tombstone "Everyday I've suffored. I miss you terribly. Christmas is never the same without you. It's like hell. With no god."

The End

CinnyWolf

24 Dec, 2013, 7:05 pm

yes

TavenXIII

24 Dec, 2013, 7:05 pm

....it made me cry.

usagidearest

25 Dec, 2013, 2:53 am

Awww...thats horrible!

Flickerr

03 Jun, 2023, 11:36 pm

@VIO_Felix_STAY143

*cries*

Flickerr

04 Jun, 2023, 7:34 am

@VIO_Felix_STAY143

Same T^T

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