"Is she awake yet mommy?"Flutters asked,"No not yet"thier mom replied.Phoenix opened her eyes to see what the commotion was about "She opened them!"Flutters squeeed with delight.Phoenix looked at her....//Why is she tallwer then mwe?//she thought.Soon she decided to go back to sleep "Aww shes sleeping!"Flutters said with a hmth.Thier mom laughed a little "Shes still a young,newborn filly"she said with a smile.She closed the door.
Phoenix woke up secretly without anyone knowing.She looked down,//Its so high!//she thought.Then had a idea...she was going to fly down to land //Perfect!//.Phoenix then got prepared she brought;her teddy bear,her milk,and her blanket.Phoenix was flying!Or so she thought.Soon she realized she was falling,Phoenix flapped her wings....they were to little to fly.Soon she was on the ground crying.Her mom heard her crying and raced to Phoenix."Phoenix are you hurt?!"her mom asked,Pheonix kept crying.
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22 Dec, 2013, 7:15 am
"Is she awake yet mommy?"Flutters asked,"No not yet"thier mom replied.Phoenix opened her eyes to see what the commotion was about "She opened them!"Flutters squeeed with delight.Phoenix looked at her....//Why is she tallwer then mwe?//she thought.Soon she decided to go back to sleep "Aww shes sleeping!"Flutters said with a hmth.Thier mom laughed a little "Shes still a young,newborn filly"she said with a smile.She closed the door.
22 Dec, 2013, 7:21 am
Phoenix woke up secretly without anyone knowing.She looked down,//Its so high!//she thought.Then had a idea...she was going to fly down to land //Perfect!//.Phoenix then got prepared she brought;her teddy bear,her milk,and her blanket.Phoenix was flying!Or so she thought.Soon she realized she was falling,Phoenix flapped her wings....they were to little to fly.Soon she was on the ground crying.Her mom heard her crying and raced to Phoenix."Phoenix are you hurt?!"her mom asked,Pheonix kept crying.
*to be Cont.*