Story o' Zaelon PT. 2 by Fort Zinder-Flash

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#zaelon#STOZ#NateNewt

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
20 Dec, 2013, 1:27 am
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Fort Zinder-Flash

20 Dec, 2013, 2:34 am

The next morning, Zaeolon told Nate "Nate, we're leaving."
Also, Zaelon felt the need to travel north for some reason. And since his good friend #Fornua . (and i mean REAL good friend.) But he doesn't get too see her much because she lives in the #Drosike territory (because she's part Drosike) and other species arn't allowed there. But we're not following the rules here, let's go!
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'Hey Fornua.' 'Zaelon! What are you doing here in Drosike territory?' she asked. 'I thought i'd just come for a visit here while I was on my way too...' 'On your way to where?' 'Umm... The Marolian Desert?' -he guessed 'Well if youre going there youre gonna have ta cross the Megaptian marshes which is waaay dangereous.' 'Well yeah but-' 'Im coming with you, for saftey.' -she protested. 'Alright then, OK.' -Zaelon agreed.
(that was a short chapter, & still no commenting.)
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Fort Zinder-Flash

20 Dec, 2013, 4:13 am

(continuing tommorow)

Fort Zinder-Flash

20 Dec, 2013, 1:39 pm

'And We're off!' -anounced Nate. 'Uh, Zaelon?' 'Yes?' 'Who's that little gecko you have with you?' 'Im Nate, Nate the newt actually, pleased to be in your presence, milady.' 'Well isnt he the well-mannered one.' 'Um, yeah. Aaaaand oh! I can see the marshes up ahead!' -Zaelon exclaimed. 'Well we of course shouldn't charge STRAIGHT in there or we would get mauled by those horrid creatures.' 'Uh, Zaelon?' 'You've a lot of questions in you.' 'Do you think i'd be safer if we kinda just, veered around it?' 'Well of course it would be safer to do that! Those megapti are too high leveled for us.' -said Zaelon. '...level?' 'Oh never mind, lets just go.'
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'Oh no, OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO!' -screamed Nate 'Naaate!' *gulp* A large tough megaptos had swallowed nate. And now Fornua and Zaelon are vicousley <(spelling) clawing, biting, sta.bing (with tails), and fire-breathing at it. 'Do not worry mates, i will defeat this monster from the inside out!' And Nate began clawing and biting it on the INSIDE.
'SHHCCCCRRREEEAAAAAARRRRRKK!!!' '*gasp* The dea.th shreik! Its the dea.th shreik Zaelon!' Nate had hopped out of the gills of the beast. 'Now my friends, Let us go to the great desert!'

-END OF PT. 2-
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Radiant Raindragon

20 Dec, 2013, 1:49 pm

Great battle description there. :)

And yes, I will draw the drosike. I'm working on a group picture for all my OCs, and he will be in there.

behemoth125

27 Dec, 2013, 8:09 am

awesome possum.

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