The snow looks amazing! I also love Wartortles :3

Okay,got quite some motivation to get started on PMDRP 8.Planing out each panel,trying to make it short.
So basically,Team Star will be thrown off track,following the wrong kidnapper to Juan's fortress,where Popcandy is,trying to find a way into Juan's treasureroom.When they see Star,they turn all attention to them somehow,where Juan's minions attack them.But since Juan is a dealist,he orders them to cease attack at once and question politely why Star is there.Meanwhile,Popcandy snuck through the gates,passed the guards and prisoners and found the treasureroom,a underground entry.Meanwhile,the Magikarp stares with wonder and greed as they make their way out of there.Meanwhile back,Star somehow gets thrown back on track to find their missing partner.
How's that?

I might draw Shoga getting chased by Torchic in her turkey outfit while shooting at him with Flamethrower.XD

Alright,your role is up on my part.
As the Persian takes her leave,and the Meowths suffer disapointment of food,Lilly comes charging out in the open,calling out for Dex in whatever way you discribe as Bella tries to keep up and tell her to slow down.The Meowths turns to Lilly's comotion and freak out as the black one starts to yell out,it is not their fault and that the Persian took him.As he turns,hoping the Meowths backs him up,he sees that they abandened him as they run off.Lilly then tackles the black one to the ground saying,you're gonna tell us everything.
I need you to translate all your scenes on what you think she should say and react like.

Okay!I thought out my part into mix,and planed it out!I'll be sure to have this last page branch directly to Juan's fortress on your part.Take as many pages you want for it!>w<

Awesome!