WHOOPS NOT PART 11 REALLY PART TEN LOL SORRY XD READ INTRO
Update:TFmel's name will now be typed in as carina
INTRO:after the team has just been attacked by the mutant redstone ripped spider they flee from battle into an underground cave
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07 Nov, 2013, 9:24 pm
Peter Yawned "HUH? Wha-Where Am i?" "am i in Heaven?" Peter Looked Around Confused "There's Nothing But White?" "HELLO?!" Peter Yelled! "Hello" a freaky voice said "Yes hello where am i? and where are u?" the roomed then turned darker than night pitch black "YOUR IN NIGHTMARE AND I'M RIGHT HERE!" the voice said two huge glowing red eyes appeared "WHAT NIGHTMARE?! you mean i'm just asleep?" "YES AND I AM UR NIGHTMARE! you fainted cause i made you faint" "Wha-Wh-What? my nightma... Wait what do you mean i made you faint?" Peter said confused
07 Nov, 2013, 9:32 pm
"I MADE YOU FAINT CAUSE i used the mutant redstone ripped spider i can control body's. i stared right into your dreams that's what made you faint" the voice said "WAIT W-Whu? WAIT WHO ARE YOU I WANT ANSWERS!" "i'm your worst nightmare but my real name is death dream" "DEATH DREAM? death dream?" Peter Said "YES BUT I HAVE BIGGER PLANS to end you and your friends notch and everyone! but your first! but you might wanna wake up and run cause i'm coming for you!" Death Dream Said his eyes got even bigger "Ho-How do i" Peter Was Cut Off By a Voice Yelling At Him saying Peter Wake Up!!!
07 Nov, 2013, 9:45 pm
(15 Minutes Ago) "i need to rest can we stop here carina?" Vipor said "Fine but put Peter down" "ok i cant beleive he's still asleep it's like as if that spider went into his dreams ya know stare into his soul" "MAN THE TIME I SEE THAT SPIDER I'M GONNA KICK HIS!" "WOAH! Carina no reason to cuss" Blaze said "yea sorry but i'm still gonna beat him so hard he's gonna... you know what i'll just k.ill him!" "ok then you k.ill him but i dont think this path is safe for us to go down" Zeldakid Said "what do you mean?" carina said "Well it leads right to ender caves one of them does" "Ender caves? what's that?" Fantasy asked "it's the caves under ender forest remember we were at ender forest fighting off that mutant enderman four months ago" gabe said "OH YEA now i remember XD "what's that i hear something" carina said "it sounds like" "it's" "IT'S" "IT'S!" "THEM!" stm said "i'll wake up Peter you Get your stuff guys" carina said "But What Cave down there!" zeldakid said "WHAT EVER ONE'S AVAILIBLE NOW GO" Carina said "PETER WAKE UP!!!" carina yelled 3 times!
07 Nov, 2013, 9:52 pm
"Whu-whut? WAIT CARINA RUN THERE COMING!" PETER YELLED "I KNOW BUT wait how do you... JUST RUN!" The team ran as the zeldakid stopped them "What it's the flower it will heal Peter!" Zeldakid ran to it but a redstone ripped spider picked it up and ate it "NOOO THAT LIL'!" "JUST RUN!" carina yelled but then right in front of them were three redstone ripped spiders and behind them were thousands more and the mutant redstone ripped spider "Welcome to the caves" death dream in the form of the mutant redstone ripped spider said "WAIT YOU CAN TALK YOUR JUST A SPIDER!" Fantasy said "there's much more to know about me but there's one thing i'll tell you now I'M YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE! GET THEM!
07 Nov, 2013, 9:58 pm
They faught the spiders hard but they were not doing as good as before "There's To Many!" gabe said "just keep fighting!" carina said Peter sliced three spiders there was a clear path right in front of him "PETER RUN!" carina yelled "but i dont wanna leave you guys!" "we'll be fine! just run!" "NO I'M NOT LEAVING YOU BEHIND!" "THAT'S AN ORDER PETER!" a tear came from peter's eye "ok!" peter said and ran!
07 Nov, 2013, 10:42 pm
PETER HAD BEEN RUNNING FOR FIVE MINUTES Then he triped over a rock XD and almost rolled off the cliff he stared though the hole innthe wall leading to a ravein he saw thousands of ores but mostly redstone then he looked down it was atleast 10 thousand blocks deep! then he backed up a little and his eyes got huge the mutant redstone ripped spider was right behind him (REMEMBER FROM MY PAINTING LOOK BEHIND YOU Told ya something like that will be in Creeper Quest Season 2 XD) Peter then turned arouhnd there was nowhere to go "You got me i'm stuck now but not forever!" Peter said "i know what your scared of peter. SPIDERS! tons of them crawling up your back!" death dream said. peter flicked a spider off his shoulder "You think your powerful but i think your WEAK! but you cant be strong join me Peter you can be my second in command when we rule EVEYTHING!" "No i dont think i'm powerful but i know i'm stronger than you AND I WILL NEVER JOIN YOU and i will keep fighting until I. DEFEAT. YOU!" Peter said "OK THEN GET HIM MY SPIDERS THE SPIDERS CAME TOWARDS HIM! Peter knew that there was only one thing to do fall but jump into the ravein but jump as a hero! the mutant redstone ripped spider came right up to him "YOU CANT DEFEAT ME THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE JOIN ME OR DIE!" death dream said "No i wont join you i could attack you even if i was blind!" "let's see about that!" death dream shot venom into peter's eyes his eyes turned completly white he could not see at all "ok then!" Peter said as he sliced out two of his eyes and threw his sword into the ground "YOU WASTED YOUR FINAL ATTACK YOU ONLY CUT OUT TWO OF MY EYES! I Have Nine Eyes Left!" "i didnt waste my attack at all" the ground cracked open and peter death dream and a couple of other redstone ripped spiders fell off the cliff into the ravein!
07 Nov, 2013, 10:43 pm
<><><><><><>End Of Part 11<><><><><><>
07 Nov, 2013, 10:45 pm
so what did you guys think cliffhanger huh? : ) i bet you cant wait for Part 12 so how do u guys like this Part best Part ever huh? i think so : )
07 Nov, 2013, 10:57 pm
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AWESOME!! =D holy fudge that was epic!! XD Amazing job on the story, suspense and cliffhanger as well as the art! i can't wait for part 12! awesome job!!
btw have you added me on fl yet? i re-added you.
also, when i was reading this the dates of the comments pure glitched XD instead of the seventh of nov. twenty thirteen, it said the sixth of feb. 2IO5! XD But it's fine now!
07 Nov, 2013, 11:09 pm
@TFmel
OMI GOSH THAT'S THE BEST COMMENT I'VE EVER GOTTEN FROM YOU :DDD THANKS ikr i was working all day on this big twist right there with death dream!
07 Nov, 2013, 11:21 pm
no prob ^-^ it's just that i'm really happy for you! i mean you've come so far! and seeing this showed me just how much your art has improved not to mention your story writting skills! =D
07 Nov, 2013, 11:24 pm
@TFmel
Thanks that really means alot : ) XD 3D OFF HEROBRINE'S EYES SO 3D!
<>Peter<>
07 Nov, 2013, 11:35 pm
3DDEEEE XD Lol sorry!
08 Nov, 2013, 2:21 am
Thanks fer puttin mah oc Blaze in thar!
08 Nov, 2013, 3:06 pm
@MC-Matt
welcome dude thought he would be a cool charactor
@TFmel
XD IKR
08 Nov, 2013, 3:46 pm
This...... iss..... AWESOME!!!
08 Nov, 2013, 8:08 pm
XD THX
10 Nov, 2013, 1:17 am
epic!
10 Nov, 2013, 8:49 pm
THX STM :D