Rise of Mortalitas part one by Mob_Master

ok this is part one
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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
07 Nov, 2013, 1:28 pm
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Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 1:36 pm

James did not understand it. Why had a nether portal appeared in front of him when he was trying to cut down a tree for his house. Its not like this ever happened befor,or had it? He had thought he heard some thing like this happen in the village last week. James returned to the village late in the evening. As he got there he heard a loud commotion in the center of the village.

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 1:42 pm

He saw all the villagers and someone he had never seen before. He wore a blue sweatshirt and gray pants. He had black hair and blue eyes. James cloud not hear what he was saying ,so he pushed his way through tne villagers. And what he heard him say shook him."The nether has been taken over."

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 1:50 pm

What!! had he heard right,had the nether really been taken over. Who? How? When? wasn't her... no he wouldn't say his name. But wasn't he the ruler of the nether? After the crowd had settled down, the stanger continued."The nether has been taken over by someone called Mortalitas. He took it over useing the army of the Fallen Ones."

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 1:51 pm

.....END OF PART ONE.....

Glitch_Block

07 Nov, 2013, 4:09 pm

cool 8D

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 4:31 pm

Thanks

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 4:32 pm

@shiny mew what can I call you in the story?

TFmel

07 Nov, 2013, 4:50 pm

awesome!! =D can't wait for part 2!

Mob_Master

07 Nov, 2013, 6:22 pm

Thanks

_-Shiny Mew-_

07 Nov, 2013, 8:33 pm

Awesome, the story sound awesome, idk how you can call me, his name could be Michael (my real name) or you think of something. =D
(I love bows)

_-Shiny Mew-_

07 Nov, 2013, 8:35 pm

Sry if I makes mistakes, I can´t speak english very well, but I understand everything. =D

_-Shiny Mew-_

07 Nov, 2013, 8:39 pm

I can´t wait for part 2.

_-Shiny Mew-_

07 Nov, 2013, 8:46 pm

I like the name "Sky".

_-Shiny Mew-_

07 Nov, 2013, 9:14 pm

I´m the bow-pro! XD

Gary!

07 Nov, 2013, 9:35 pm

Good job! And really like your blue mech. (Because it's blue and a mech.) It's not perfect, but you have the concept down very well. Nice job!

Mob_Master

08 Nov, 2013, 3:05 am

Thanks

KxThorr

08 Nov, 2013, 9:07 pm

AWESOME

Mob_Master

09 Nov, 2013, 12:43 am

Thanks and I'll try to have part 2 out soon

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