Babylon Candle by Febe

There is no faster way to travel then by candle light...

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
20 May, 2012, 8:38 pm
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Sono.

20 May, 2012, 8:42 pm

awesome! i love the 3D effect!

cat's

20 May, 2012, 8:42 pm

nice^^

JL Trickster

20 May, 2012, 8:47 pm

Hmmmm is it ok if I can critique this drawing of yours? If you are let me say first it's a wonderful drawing and I like the dark feeling it has to it! Nice detail on the wax for the candle and what a awesome fire ypu drew!

But I think the candle light should be a bit brighter because it's somewhat hard to see the candle, but it's not too hard to see. Also I think this drawing feels a bit empty...(if it's supposed to be that type ofn
feeling for this drawing then well done on that part) this is only a suggestion you don't have to change anything if you don't want to but I was thinking maybe adding a few things in the background but making the candle the center of the drawing like overlapping the things you know what I mean right?
But this is still a very good piece!

Febe

20 May, 2012, 9:04 pm

I agree. Thanks. What sort of things would you draw in the background?

JL Trickster

20 May, 2012, 11:56 pm

Well, judging by the color choice you did for the background I'd say put something really old fansion say like....an old attic or maybe even a very VERY old library, or a tree-house that has been abandoned, and since it's a dark atmosphere to it I'd make that background with something grey in it the type of grey that is glowing around the candle only a bit brighter so it won't blend in with the candle. Are those good suggestions?

Oceanikk

21 May, 2012, 12:52 pm

beautiful my sweet *-*

Super_K.A._13

22 May, 2012, 7:23 pm

looks great!and thx for your comment!

Rush-In Roulette

23 May, 2012, 12:29 pm

Beautiful. Great use of depth and lighting as well.

Van Domar

02 Jul, 2012, 2:49 pm

I think you captured the feeling pretty well. Just wondering what is the white line next to it?

j.car

04 Jul, 2012, 11:56 am

wow amazing

jacksparrow

14 Jul, 2012, 6:32 pm

very nice effect

Van Domar

14 Jul, 2012, 10:19 pm

Maybe the white line is some kind of moster druling over the candle. Man my spelling is horrible!!!

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