It all started on a stormy day.A Quilava curled up on a bed,staring out of a window in the rain.He glanced towards a pedastal at the bottom of his bed,but more at what was on it than the pedastal itself.On it was a red cushion,gold laced along the sides,and on top of it was a gold crown,with rubys,saphirres and emeralds.With a heavy sigh,he stood up and walked out of his door of the room,looking for his mother.

Not over yet,I was drawing.

Neat! : )

Nice, Very Decent.

Re: I know i worded dat wrong i meant it'll become a thing of my gallery now, and i actually got the idea from Moni. I didn't mean to steal ideas, i just thought they were cool

RE: ...Is there something wrong?

Cool :3

He walked through the hall,peering through the doors on his way.He eventually came to a giant door,imtimidating and tall,to fit the biggest Pokemon,such as Tyrantrum and Tyranitar,Aggron and Dragonite.
He opened it and immediatly regretted it.It was like stepping in under a waterfall,execpt that in a waterfall it wasnt muddy and dark.He quickly went back inside,and was closing the door when he heard a voice.
"Hey!Whachoo dooin oot dayr?"It was a gaurd,one that the Quilava knew well.
"Nothing,Tan!"
"Thoots Tanishi too yoo,master Miles"
"Dont call me that Tan!It's not my name!People aren't called by there middle names anymore!"
Tanishi grinned his toothy grin.
"O.K,whatoover choo say.See choo 'roond,I supoose."
"Yeah.See ya!"

It was when Tanishi was round the corner that the Quilava heard a shrill,girly giggle.He jumped,and his vents flared up."Who-who's there!"He looked around,then spotted some muddy tracks.He followed them up,up up,and saw her.It was a cute Glaceon girl,and she was grinning from ear to ear."Did you hear his voice?!That was hilarious!" The Quilava was sligthly taken abake,but then regained his thoughts."Who're you?Why are you here?How did you get here?!"
She was purple and red,and was very jolly."I'm Ayumi.I just folowed you in,you werent paying much attention...I'm here for shelter...it's wet outside,and I was wondering could I stay the night.Can I?"
The Quilava grinned:He had decided he liked the girl.He held out his paw."I'm Lotus"

(-End of chapter one-)

I like the story so far! : )

Cool. ^^