Universal Smash 111 by ZenkaiPawa

The group is surrounded by bulborbs! UWAH

pit: hey sonic, ever miss your friends?
sonic: yeh sometimes

Sonic: like, tails, knucklehead, maybe even amy...maybe.
*crack*

Pit: that was... loud. Did you guys hear that samus?
Sonic: its nuthin!

Samus: yes...I did pit.
Samus: pikachu use FLASH

Samus: Watch out!!

#pikmin #pokemon #pikachu #samus #metroid #sonic #pit #universalsmash

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
22 Oct, 2013, 4:47 am
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KloobFH

22 Oct, 2013, 5:29 am

I would love to have yo friend code

I swear i never knew you followed me

ZenkaiPawa

22 Oct, 2013, 7:13 am

Its in ma gallery description dood. I'll get yours too.

ABdow uNite

22 Oct, 2013, 8:41 am

Scorchy, this is brilliant as ever. Do you post this material to sites where it can be more greatly appreciated?

-Super Blast-

22 Oct, 2013, 9:51 am

A wild bulborb appeared.

Kyoskue

22 Oct, 2013, 4:13 pm

Samus seems oddly proficient in Trainer-speak, considering that she calls Pikachu "Chupika".
By the way, did it lower the Bulborbs' accuracy?

Kyoskue

22 Oct, 2013, 4:14 pm

By the way, you forgot the "universal smash" tag.

ZenkaiPawa

22 Oct, 2013, 6:05 pm

Thanks bro, if you ever notice any of these pages not tagged with universalsmashnplez tell me, ive forgotten it before

AngelGamah

22 Oct, 2013, 6:35 pm

Nice! :D

origin

22 Oct, 2013, 8:56 pm

Can u write down what there saying

ZenkaiPawa

22 Oct, 2013, 10:08 pm

^ are you havin a hard time reading it? Not pickin on yah im sincerely wondering, its important to me that its enjoyzble to read. I can do that if youd like

Kyoskue

23 Oct, 2013, 4:42 pm

Protip: The positioning of speech bubbles is _highly_ important to the order that the panels are read.
Remember, top-left to bottom right.

In the first panel we have Pit asking Sonic if he misses his friends, and Sonic replying that he does sometimes.
...Or rather, that was your intent.
In actuality, we are reading Sonic's reply before Pit even asks him the question.

Remember: the top-most speech bubble takes precedence. If there are multiple at roughly the same height on the panel then the left-most is read first.
Paneling works exactly the same way: Top, left, right, bottom.

On a side note, the last panel in particular probably could've benefi.tted (stupid sensors) quite a bit from some clever use of 3D.

Kyoskue

23 Oct, 2013, 4:53 pm

Oop; last reply for now, I promise.

Considering the number of people having a hard time reading the comic, I recommend having a transcript inside of your comment, written something like as follows:

----------------------------------
*Insert your comment stuffs here*
----------------------------------
-1st-
Pit: Hey Sonic, ever miss your friends?

Sonic: Yeh, sometimes.

-2nd-
Pit: Like Tails, Knuckle-head, maybe even Amy.... maybe?

-3rd-
SFX: CRACK

Pit: That was... loud.
Did you guys hear that, Samus?

Sonic: Its nothin'!

-4th-
Samus: Yes... I did, Pit.
Pikachu, use FLASH!

-6th-
Samus: WATCH OUT!!
----------------------------------

While not a real fix (you will still have tiny words written on a small picture that can't be zoomed over), it will ensure that everything can be read.
You don't even really need tomwrite which lines come from which panel, most of the time it'd be obvious.
I would do the transcripts for you myself, but I can't edit your comment, obviously. :/

ZenkaiPawa

08 Nov, 2013, 5:44 am

Huh, yeah I might do it for really complicated pages. Thanks dood

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