Finisheddd
It was my #oc, #AkiraK 's #birthday a few days ago, the rascal.
on the 16th, he's officially 18. XD
Please dismiss the random people,
it's supposed to be a park. XD
Please excuse me for my realllyyy crap quality work!
:D Bye!
Oh, and if you could leave me some CRITIZISMS....
; w ; please.
#Gentleoc
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Comments
20 Oct, 2013, 7:03 am
Ooooh, love this Yuuki-chan, specially the colors. >v<
Hnnng, critiques...mmm, well, I honestly can't pinpoint anything major. <XD
Just little nitpicky things, but they're part of your style soooo, can't really call them flaws. <XD
I think everything looks great though, honest! ovo
20 Oct, 2013, 7:27 am
; w ;
Thanks, but..,
w h a t
n i t - p i c k y
t h i n g s ?
20 Oct, 2013, 7:28 am
In the end, I really just want to know what throws you off so I can stop that and fix it so It's better for others.
:D
20 Oct, 2013, 8:26 am
Well...uh, the neck starts out thick and then gets kinda skinny downwards. <XD
Then where his shoulder blades conn.ects, to his neck.
Well, I dunno how to explain it but, the part of his shoulders looks too high closer to his neck...yeaaa, I dunno how to explain it. ^ ^'
And his neck looks just a wee bit too long.
Like I said though, those things are more style traits rather than mistakes. ovo
So yea, like I said, nitpicky things. <X3
20 Oct, 2013, 8:28 am
She made me. <XD
20 Oct, 2013, 8:51 am
//cries
The truth, it hurts.
<X'D
So bad..
Ok, I know I made those mistakes, but I refrained from fixing them...
because I was lazy.
D'x
But the shoulders thing....?
Not sure about that...
._.
lemme turn my head.
.-.
Nope.
20 Oct, 2013, 8:52 am
[Silent] Dun hella jeff face me. XD LOL.
20 Oct, 2013, 9:02 am
But please, don't take it to heart, these are only things I'D change. ^ ^'
I think this look awesome Yuuki-chan, I mean it is anime, doesn't have to be 1OO percent perfect.
; v ;
Just look at my art! XD
If I was trying to go by anime standards i'd have tons of flaws. XD
But I don't, we just have our own anatomy styles. >v<
20 Oct, 2013, 9:06 am
No, no.
I am taking it to heart, but in a good way!
You were nice enough to tell me your honest opinion, so I'll make sure to always keep that in mind!
And i'll strive to fix the mistakes.
vwv
So, thank you!
20 Oct, 2013, 9:16 am
Well, okie. <X3
Just promise not to let your style choices alter too much 'cause of what others think. ovo
20 Oct, 2013, 9:19 am
0-0 Either way they'll change.
If you haven't noticed, my style changes in every paint. XD
20 Oct, 2013, 12:20 pm
The hair, the hair! *o*
The hair is so detailed and looks so awesome uvu
29 Nov, 2013, 6:13 am
Woah, Dang OwO Thats awesome man...