It doesn't suck, it's awesome!

cool =D

let's hope he doesn't mess with paradox

Thx u 2. :) Glad u like the thing. XP

Well Paradox shouldn't touch his stuff. >:D @Drat

he can touch anything he wants. he's not like crystal he'll go in higher rage then tokage.

Ya i bet. Paradox is abit of an impatient child. :( @Drat

he has a little anger problem so yeah you'll could say that be he still cares about his friends and mostly the girls also his girlfreind

Well good. Cause if he yelled at Zodi she'd probably cry and Slap him across the face. XD @Drat

well how about this witch part of the scene coming up do you want me to do the betrayal of mazerack or the part of where para's yelling overdone.

Mazerack Betrayl. Because Zodi Almost D!es in This Coming scene. So not good for her to hear Paradox yelling. :) @Drat

but in mazeracks betrayal para almost dies

Ok.....So wut happens in the yelling one?o-o' @Drat

paradox is messing with tokages things paradox accidently breaks one of them he get's mad at paradox para apologizes but tokage is really mad say the same thing as he said to crystal. that triggers him para goes higher rage then tokage. tokage get's scared zodi comes in the middle of para yelling. zodiac calls his name and taps on him. para turns around still in yelling mode yell's what at her she smacks para rans off crying para say that he didn't mean it he cries he run away from infinity later on cause of zodiac breaking up with him. later zodiac goes to paradox's room knock on his room calling him calmly but para never answers cause he's not there she get's worried that he'd k.i.l.l himself she goes inside. para is not there zodi panics she goes find him even she has to get a pelican and to go the planets infinity stops to have fun and missions. she found the one that para's in she sees him d.e.ad in the middle of the city she screams para's name she goes to him and tries to get him not to die by saying do die paradox plz don't die,shaking him,blocks the ble.eding from bullet wounds all over

the mazeracks betrayal scene tho is when mazerack disguised himself as paradox and successfully fooled the ones who cares about paradox like tali mazerack starts r.a.p.e.i.n.g tali next zalo next suki and beats up yukari and concordcia and last but not least r.a.p.e.s zodiac. after all that during the day time para wakes up comes out of his room no one is around para walks to garr's room all marines there cept for me/drat and clumsy para goes in garr's room zodiac is crying cause she actually think is paradox who did this everyone is mad para keeps saying he didn't do everyone in the zw thinks he's lying he tell zodi to say to everyone that he didn't do it but she hesitates and she say's get out very silent para says wut she yells it paradox is shock para say's but zodiac and she says that we're through and para is saying but zodiac and zodi say get out again para say's but sweet I and she yells get out and don't call me sweet no more para said's but sweet and zodiac put up his claws and attacks paradox cause she was really mad. then kitsune and all the other girls not tali yet. after that para goes to tali to get patched but once para asked her to she explodes on him attacks him wit a scal.pel after all that para runs away later para gets in a battle with the s.l but loses by getting sho.t to de.ath later on in some random thing mazerack appers talks evily and amits to the betrayal and framing paradox and show him de.ad blood every where everybody looks at him. The girls who cares about paradox who also now yelled at him freaks including zodiac so zodiac goes to find paradox and finds him in a s.l planet and she just cries and saying that she's sorry and needs him to come back even saying the others needs him back and mazerack appers both talk zodiac start aggressively she asks aggressively why he betrayed the u.n.s.c maz explanes ant the end he calls para a stu.pid cat then she get very mad like rage mad maz calls the squad but a pelican comes and takes out the s.l squad but maz flees. now for the endings

yelling ending:is just when zodiac take para home and get him to tali so she can patch him up and tali and zodi can take him to his room and zodiac takes care of him.

maz's betrayal ending:kit,garr yukari in teen form and garrana comes and stares at para for awhile the others help zodiac take him home and take him to tali and this is where the irony comes tali freaks out cause on of the scalpel's she's using to patch him up is the one she used to attack him she screams and cries zodi conferts her so she can get on track the every of the everyone stares at them almost all are crying for him and zalo did something very polite she decorated his room with flowers and stuff and she got para to his room and now zodi can take care of him other girls can come in the males can confert zodiac it will take a few weeks for para to recover and his broken heart to be fixed so zodiac can do what ever she can to make him better even if she has to take him to training with her on a rolling stretcher.

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