Dusk In...A Coma by Irken-Pony1117

Dusk is right now In a Coma or called Comatose #DarkZim

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
07 Oct, 2013, 8:49 pm
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Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 8:52 pm

*is by dusk in the hospital* oh dusk I'll save u!

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:03 pm

Melody: (.UnU.) *whispers to herself* It was me...

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:05 pm

*hears melody* melody did u kill dusk?

hvrricane

07 Oct, 2013, 9:08 pm

Robin: Its ok. *Puts hand on Melody's shoulder*

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:09 pm

Dusk -In Coma-: *Thinking: I hate feeling like this, So Tired...I'm sleeping and all i think of is you Melody...And i feel you & Random here by me and i wish i never was in this...I don't want to Live anymore...I don't want to Dream...I just wanna be with you...*

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:10 pm

(I mean made him like this ) I'll fix him to be Dusk.0 if ur ok with that nayeli?

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:16 pm

Melody: Huh? *looks at Random & Robin* oh...It was yesterday...I was just minding my time at the park...And i saw i strange guy With Guns, Knifes, and Bombs...I told him to stop because he was about to k!ll 17 kids...And he pointed everything at me...then I was to scared *starts to cry and gets a grip on Dusk's blanket* I could not move...Then...Dusk showed up Brave as ever...He went infront of me and covered me...and took all the HITS. *crying* He left and I...*hugs Random very tight* *muffled* I'M SUCH A COWERD! DUSK CAN TAKE HITS...BUT I'M ALWAYS SCARED! *crying more*

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:17 pm

*mind to dusk* dusk can u hear me? If u do plz respon to this*

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:22 pm

Dusk -in Coma-: *thinking*......Huh?

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:25 pm

It's ok melody I can make u defend for ur self if u r up to me making ur body strong? *mind to dusk* dusk this is random can u hear me?

hvrricane

07 Oct, 2013, 9:28 pm

Robin: Dusk's not dead. He's in a deep coma

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:29 pm

Melody: *still hugging Random* M-maybe...

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:29 pm

*Be right back!*

hvrricane

07 Oct, 2013, 9:30 pm

(Ok)

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 9:31 pm

Melody: UnU ....I just want to be brave like him...*looks at Dusk* ...He is always there for me And i want to do the same for him...

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:32 pm

Ok well I will be free. *hugs melody more*

hvrricane

07 Oct, 2013, 9:34 pm

Robin: Its ok... *Smile shyly and opens other eye soccet*

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 9:41 pm

*stops hugging* now if he can understand I might have to rebuild him.

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 10:44 pm

(I'm Back!)

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 10:48 pm

Melody: ?
Zim: *Comes in the room OUT OF NOWHERE* DUSK ARE YOU OK?!!! *jumps on the bed and shakes Dusk* WAKE UP DUSK NOW YA LOON! *shakes him more* OPEN THAT EYE ALREADY!
Melody: *slaps Zim* SNAP OUT OF IT!
Zim: *rubs his cheek* ooww...

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 10:55 pm

Hey zim I see u were being an idiot and he won't get up unless nayeli will apoves of me working on him.

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 10:58 pm

Me: *outside holding flowers for Dusk And knocks on the window*
Zim & Melody: ?

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 10:59 pm

*opens window and pulls u inside* hello!

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 11:02 pm

Me: *pulled in* WHOA!
Zim: Hi
Melody: Hi
Me: Hey guys *places Flowers near Dusk* There! ^^

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 11:12 pm

(Now got my 3ds! ^^) So nayeli can appove me of inproving dusk to Dusk.0?

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 11:13 pm

Me: Whats that?
Zim: Thats what i'm wondering
Melody: *hopeing that Dusk will be ok*

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 11:22 pm

(Gonna post blue print later!) He'll never die he'll be part cyborg-irken and have an eye in the eyeless socket on his face making his sight wide range.

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 11:30 pm

Me: ?
Melody: ......
Zim: *looks at Me*

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 11:47 pm

(Blue print is posted #projectDuskdot0) So can i get appove?

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 11:50 pm

Me: *looks at prints* hmm...

(You must not like my O.Cs much if you have UD dying in the future and forcing me to draw Dusk Differently if i say yes. e.e)

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 11:53 pm

(Nayeli UR INSPATION! That's why i doodle so often! yuy)

Robotic_Randomness

07 Oct, 2013, 11:55 pm

(And Ud will be back alive in the future inventurly <- Suck at spelling :l)

Irken-Pony1117

07 Oct, 2013, 11:59 pm

(So do i say yes or no?) .......

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:01 am

(yes Dusk will live no he'll have to have his soul taking away and get put in his regular body)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:04 am

(........)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:06 am

(well ur chose i won't get mad)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:16 am

(......No.......)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:17 am

(BUT, That does not mean you can throw it out...)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:18 am

(Ok soul taking it is! ^^)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:22 am

(No, i mean it will not happen NOW but it will happen)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:23 am

(Lets just rp Nayeli!) Well do u like the blue print?

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:26 am

(O< O) ...(Pushie aren't we)
Me: *looks at it* hmm...I'll think about it
Melody: ...
Zim: :T

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:33 am

Ya Dusk if u can hear me Nayeli is desiding if i can rebuild u!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:43 am

Dusk -in Coma-: !

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:45 am

Dusk it's only on ur eye! o-o

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:48 am

Me&Zim: ?
Melody: Who are you talking to?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:50 am

I'm talking to dusk he can hear me!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:54 am

All: 0< O
Dusk -In Coma-: What are you talking about?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 12:57 am

Dusk they can't hear u but i can they don't understand.

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 12:59 am

Dusk -In Coma-: *sighs* ...I wish i was not like this right now...

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:02 am

I know dusk but i can 2 ways to get u out of the coma!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:04 am

Dusk -In Coma-: Hm?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:06 am

Well the first one will be easy just a quick fix and u will never be in a coma ever again or 2 i'll just transfer by ur to ur body before what happen when those humans attacked u.

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:11 am

Oh Dusty and Callie are here as well Dusk!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:12 am

Dusk -In Coma-: I think i wanna be like how i was before the humens attacked me...
Me: Hi
Melody: *giggles*
Zim: Why are you holding Dusty?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:14 am

Well everyone plz don't look at me ok?

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:16 am

Me: :T
Melody: *pets Dusty* *giggles*
Zim: HA HA!

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:16 am

Well dusk their fural! *turns to Slender form with mask on*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:22 am

Zim: AH!!! *jumps to Melody and has his arm on her neck*
Melody: *holding Zim* XD

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:24 am

*Opens Dusk's good eye and takes off mask, Stares at him to also steals Dusk's soul*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:25 am

Me: Random what are you doing?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:26 am

(listening to WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY! XD)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:27 am

Dusk -In Coma-: !

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:28 am

(CA-CACECE-CACA)...idk (XD)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:29 am

*Puts mask back* Dusk wanted his body back i took his soul i'll be back *takes dusk's body and teleports to the lab*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:30 am

Me: ....

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:30 am

-At lab- So ADDITING! *Starts eating dusk's body* :3

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:33 am

(Ew...you ate my O.C) XD

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:35 am

(He still ok) *stops* XC Why is this always happens *coughs dusk's soul* now we get that body *grabs a dusk's clone body before the humans attacked him* *puts his soul in it*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:36 am

(Still wired...XD)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:38 am

Zim: *Still Holding Melody & Shaking*
Melody: Heh...You scared?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:38 am

(Slendy eats people! XD)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:41 am

(So does that mean he will be normal looking?)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:45 am

(Yep! XP)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 1:54 am

(Good because, When i ever draw him i always almost Forget his hafe Antana...)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 1:58 am

(now we rp!) *Revives dusk*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:02 am

Dusk: ................
Me: *pulls Zim away from Melody*
Zim: -m-
Melody: I wish I can Hug Dusk...

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:07 am

*throw water at dusk* WAKE UP!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:08 am

Dusk: AHHH!!! *burning and falls on the floor* OW!

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:13 am

Just making sure ur alive! *gives dusk a towel*

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:16 am

Dusk: *glares at Random*

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:18 am

Well sorry i was just being skepical, I thought u were dead! -m-

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:20 am

Dusk: oh

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:22 am

*Hugs Dusk* I'm glad ur back! ^-^

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:35 am

Dusk: *looks at Random* Why how long was i gone?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:36 am

A few hrs

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:39 am

Dusk: (o<o) oh...

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:40 am

I think melody wants a hug from u!

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:42 am

Dusk: Well where is she?

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:45 am

At the hospital still.

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:47 am

Dusk: Ok. *grabs Random's hand and Teleports back to the Hospitle*

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:50 am

-at hospital- Hey guys looks whos back! ^^

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 2:53 am

Zim: *holding on to me*
Me: Dusk?
Melody: *hears me* !..........No i-it could not be...

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 2:56 am

Yes it is! XP

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 3:18 am

(I'm tired...)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 3:19 am

(Ur lucky i have MEAP tommarow! XC)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 3:21 am

(Whats MEAP?)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 3:23 am

(MEAP is a huge test that only michgan students take and theres reading, writing, and math! XC)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 3:28 am

(Well that sucks...G'Night & GOOD LUCK!)

Robotic_Randomness

08 Oct, 2013, 3:28 am

(Thx! ^^)

Irken-Pony1117

08 Oct, 2013, 7:52 pm

So how was your test? Hard?

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