Mist's story 1 by Forever Warrior Cats

When i was a pup, my mother fed me last and my brother and sister treated me badly. I was dying.My mother saw this and abandoned me. I heard her tell me that i was a discrace to the wolf race. That if I'm lucky, I will die painlessly.
" I love you and I only want the best for you. It's the alpha that is making me do this. I hope a she wolf finds you and adopts you." She whispered. Years past and I taught myself.
"grrrrrrrrrrrrr!" I heard a growl then evertything went black.
"Hehehehehe!" sorry

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07 Oct, 2013, 1:35 am
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Forever Warrior Cats

07 Oct, 2013, 1:46 am

I ran outta room.
"yeah no thanks to you, you old terd! Ur a r.e.t.a.rd!" I said, panting.
" Never use those words to a vora!"
" A vora? What the heck? Your stupid!"
"Resh ki mesh uppae! Uglier than a lie, worse than no numon! That is what you are."
" Excuse me? What does mesh ki ka..... Whatever even mean?!"
"You dont listen well do you pup?" The strange wolf said.

Andy123

26 Oct, 2013, 6:12 pm

nice job

Forever Warrior Cats

27 Oct, 2013, 2:09 am

Thnx.

Forever Warrior Cats

04 Nov, 2013, 4:00 am

"no not really. I grew up without a mother or father, an orphan." The wolf's gaze rested on a deep scar on my neck.
"what the fur are you looking at?" i followed her gaze and slid my paw tword it,
"it.....hurts." I said, feeling my neck.
"I see. Come, Star." The vora told me.
"Star? Whos that?" I asked, like a pup again.
"you." She replied.

Forever Warrior Cats

04 Nov, 2013, 4:01 am

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Forever Warrior Cats

28 Nov, 2013, 4:44 pm

"why me?" I asked.
"A star is an individual. Many skies but all stars are different." Her gaze was looking at me. My neck stung as pain shot through me. A vision appeared and a white wolf with white eyes. The wolf was me.

Forever Warrior Cats

29 Dec, 2013, 1:39 am

I looked through the milky gaze and saw my past. I stared blankly at what I saw.

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