Dude... that griffon is as big as a truck.... They make better mounts than meals. Their meat is VERY tough & is slightly poisonous... (glad you like the wings, they took me awhile to do. I've been fairly good at wings in general.)
(Zaydn stares at the ceiling... he doesn't speak... he looks very frail & thin accually. He blacks out and re-awakens. He looks terrible. It is now evening.)
(Zaydn slowly attemps to sit up, wincing... He eyes the food... he rubs his eyes...) Zaydn: "bleh... I can't see very well... I'm seeing double... What food did she bring...? .......and thank for giving me a room to rest in..."
Zaydn: "ah... I grabbed the wrong thing... I can't eat bread... or vegtables ....or anything that's not meat... Caelians strictly eat meat. I was going for the bison meat next to it. If I eat anything not meat I can get deathly ill..."
(Two female Caelian doctors are standing there.) Doctor 1: "Hello there! We were sent by the Warden to check on Zaydn... He also told us to operate on Zaydn's back while we have the chance. Perhaps we can fix his... problem." (Zaydn eyes them.) [He eyes everyone.] ^^'
Zaydn: *grumble...* (the doctors step inside.) Doctor 2: "I'm sorry, but we ask that you leave. We must try to keep the area sterile of any more possible germs. You understand... right?"
(the doctors put Zaydn under and turn him over. They remove his bandages. He had been whipped to the bone, so they don't really need to cut him open any further. They begin to operate, rearranging his nerves and some of his messed up bones... When they finish they put on new bandages and wash their hands of blood. They quickly run outside to a waiting griffon and leave, giggling. Zaydn moans as he starts to wake up....)
(As soon as he puts any weight on his legs he falls...) Zaydn: "...! ....dam.n it... I.... I can't feel my legs..... ah.... I can't feel my... my legs.... no.... No.... NO!"
Doctor 1: "....It's irreversible..... if he ever walks again it will be of his own will-power. Frankly, I didn't want to do it, but...." Doctor 2: "....But we were threatened by a Lord. We couldn't say 'no'." (they look sad & shameful...) Doctor 1: "If we didn't... his Drake would have eaten our children alive while we were away....."
Doctor 2: "...You wouldn't know him. His is Lord Kevin the Bloody. His Drake is Skev the Ripper. They enjoy ripping other's throats out...." *shivers* Doctor 1: "Believe us or not... We are telling the truth... We were laughing a laugh of relief: that we would come home and our children would be safe... that my five year old son would be alright..."
Zaydn: "....rat bast.ard..... of course I know him... *he yells at the top of his lungs* HE'S THE ONE WHO MADE ME A CRIPPLE IN THE FIRST PLACE! I SHOULD IMPALE HIM FOR ALL THE HE.LL HE'S CAUSED ME!" (He struggles on the grond angrily, trying to pull himself up, but he triggers another siezure and curls his body up... This one isn't as bad, but it still sucks. He has a deep scowl on his face and just takes the pain, causing him to get even angrier.)
Zaydn: "Caelia is VERY far away. Not to mention it's near impossible to navigate. You'll get lost in a heart-beat. I'll get him someday....." (pure, unbridled hate pours from his eyes...)
Zaydn whispers: "...get out and leave me alone until I say so..."
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07 Oct, 2013, 1:12 am
Dude... that griffon is as big as a truck.... They make better mounts than meals. Their meat is VERY tough & is slightly poisonous...
(glad you like the wings, they took me awhile to do. I've been fairly good at wings in general.)
07 Oct, 2013, 1:18 am
great job. your getting better everyday. keep it up. :)
20 Oct, 2013, 6:36 pm
(Zaydn looks deathly pale...
he breaks out into cold sweats...
Much later he wakes up.)
[bleh, it was a boring trip...]
20 Oct, 2013, 9:02 pm
(Zaydn stares at the ceiling...
he doesn't speak...
he looks very frail & thin accually.
He blacks out and re-awakens.
He looks terrible.
It is now evening.)
20 Oct, 2013, 10:22 pm
(Zaydn slowly attemps to sit up, wincing...
He eyes the food... he rubs his eyes...)
Zaydn: "bleh... I can't see very well... I'm seeing double... What food did she bring...? .......and thank for giving me a room to rest in..."
21 Oct, 2013, 12:11 am
(he reaches for some food and grabs some bread. He takes a bite and spits it out nastily.)
21 Oct, 2013, 12:46 am
Zaydn: "ah... I grabbed the wrong thing... I can't eat bread... or vegtables ....or anything that's not meat... Caelians strictly eat meat. I was going for the bison meat next to it. If I eat anything not meat I can get deathly ill..."
21 Oct, 2013, 12:58 am
Zaydn: "thanks..."
(he looks at it for awhile... He starts eating, shark-teeth sheering through even the thick bone as it were nothing.)
21 Oct, 2013, 1:11 am
*someone knocks on the door...*
21 Oct, 2013, 10:39 am
(Two female Caelian doctors are standing there.)
Doctor 1: "Hello there! We were sent by the Warden to check on Zaydn... He also told us to operate on Zaydn's back while we have the chance. Perhaps we can fix his... problem."
(Zaydn eyes them.) [He eyes everyone.] ^^'
21 Oct, 2013, 10:54 am
Zaydn: *grumble...*
(the doctors step inside.)
Doctor 2: "I'm sorry, but we ask that you leave. We must try to keep the area sterile of any more possible germs. You understand... right?"
21 Oct, 2013, 8:02 pm
(the doctors put Zaydn under and turn him over. They remove his bandages.
He had been whipped to the bone, so they don't really need to cut him open any further.
They begin to operate, rearranging his nerves and some of his messed up bones...
When they finish they put on new bandages and wash their hands of blood.
They quickly run outside to a waiting griffon and leave, giggling.
Zaydn moans as he starts to wake up....)
21 Oct, 2013, 8:17 pm
Zaydn: "I never trust others... especially my own kind... urrgghh... I don't really feel any different..."
*he starts to try & get out of bed*
21 Oct, 2013, 8:30 pm
(As soon as he puts any weight on his legs he falls...)
Zaydn: "...! ....dam.n it... I.... I can't feel my legs..... ah.... I can't feel my... my legs.... no.... No.... NO!"
21 Oct, 2013, 8:46 pm
Doctor 1: "....It's irreversible..... if he ever walks again it will be of his own will-power. Frankly, I didn't want to do it, but...."
Doctor 2: "....But we were threatened by a Lord. We couldn't say 'no'."
(they look sad & shameful...)
Doctor 1: "If we didn't... his Drake would have eaten our children alive while we were away....."
21 Oct, 2013, 9:05 pm
Doctor 2: "...You wouldn't know him. His is Lord Kevin the Bloody. His Drake is Skev the Ripper. They enjoy ripping other's throats out...." *shivers*
Doctor 1: "Believe us or not... We are telling the truth... We were laughing a laugh of relief: that we would come home and our children would be safe... that my five year old son would be alright..."
21 Oct, 2013, 9:58 pm
Zaydn: "....rat bast.ard..... of course I know him... *he yells at the top of his lungs* HE'S THE ONE WHO MADE ME A CRIPPLE IN THE FIRST PLACE! I SHOULD IMPALE HIM FOR ALL THE HE.LL HE'S CAUSED ME!"
(He struggles on the grond angrily, trying to pull himself up, but he triggers another siezure and curls his body up...
This one isn't as bad, but it still sucks. He has a deep scowl on his face and just takes the pain, causing him to get even angrier.)
21 Oct, 2013, 10:33 pm
Zaydn: "Caelia is VERY far away. Not to mention it's near impossible to navigate. You'll get lost in a heart-beat. I'll get him someday....."
(pure, unbridled hate pours from his eyes...)
Zaydn whispers: "...get out and leave me alone until I say so..."
21 Oct, 2013, 10:35 pm
[let's continue this on my lastest painting of Zaydn, ok?]
09 Jan, 2015, 6:47 am
Awesome/Cool! :D