So..? by TFmel

any fav parts or stuff from "Herobrine"? Just asking
well actually, knowing what you guys liked and disliked will help me write better in the future ^-^ so yep just let me know

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
06 Oct, 2013, 9:50 pm
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TFmel

06 Oct, 2013, 10:07 pm

yay!! =D thanks guys! Feedback helps a lot! ^-^

Blazetail typhlosion

07 Oct, 2013, 5:44 am

To be honest, there was nothing I could pick out that was badly written. So then epic job!

TFmel

07 Oct, 2013, 6:50 am

@LucasD
i liked that part too it was fun to write and draw =D thanks ^-^
@Blaze
really? thank you!! ^-^

thugisa17

07 Oct, 2013, 6:59 am

The whole thing was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Unlike my story.......

FinnickMaster

07 Oct, 2013, 9:49 am

Incorperate a begining question into a suprising ending. Keep the suspense rolling @ all times! If there's no supense, readers will eventually drift away!

TFmel

07 Oct, 2013, 3:22 pm

^ i hear you =D suspense needed XD Thanks

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