The team had made it to the end of the passageway. It had opened up into a completely dark room. Suddenly, one by one, the redstone torches that lined the walls burst into flame, slowly lighting up the chamber. The torches at the back of the room were the last to light. They saw a familiar face. Notch was still trapped in the Obsidian chains. And, level with him, on a high platform stood Herobrine. He turned to face his "guests".
"Welcome" he said

"You've done well making it this far. I'm surprised some of you are even still alive! Also, your plan was quite good. Too bad it fell short at the last minute. Looking for this?" he ased, holding up the third Neather Star. Four of them stared wide eyed, realising they'd played right into Herobrine's hands. Notch had also come to this painful conclusion. His brother had planned this from the begininng. "But why?" Notch thought as he unwillingly watched the final events unfold. "Why lure the only one who can stop him to him?" he thought.
Herobrine took a step forward. "I believe it's time we end this. You can either face us in battle, or you can surrender now. Either way, it's the end of the road for you!" he announced. The team knew their answer "We fight!" they replied at once. "So be it!" he replied before quickly spreading out his arms. Suddenly an array of mobs spawned. "Go!" he commanded. With that, the mobs attacked. The five brought out their diamond swords and charged into the fight.
The final battle had begun and Herobrine was prepared to win it by any means.

Alright! :D Nice plot!

The five were almost overpowered by the onslaught of mobs. Each had wepons in hand. But the team went all out, killing the mobs left right and centre.
Unwilling to be allowed to stay back and watch the fight, Notch tried to break free once more. But, once again, it did no good. Herobrine came towards his brother. Seeing him, Notch narrowed his eyes and clenched his fists. "What are you planning?!" he demanded "Humph. Confused? Time will tell" Herobrine answered menacingly and turned his attendtion back to the raging battle.
It was time to put the next phase of his plan to action

The team were spread out among the army of mobs which was slowly but surely getting smaller. Herobrine wasn't spawning anymore mobs. But the ones he had spawned were strong and the five were havi g trouble taking them down. The mobs were the least of their problems. Things were about to get much, much worse.
Just as Carina killed another mob, a diamond blade suddenly crashed against her own. "Fantasy what are you-" she stopped mid sentence, her eyes widened as Fantasy's white eyes stared back at her. At the same time, Herobrine's evil smile grew wider. For him, the fun had only begun.

===End of Part 18===

@everyone above
thanks guys, but next time could you leave your comments til the end please? it just makes it easier to read thanks =)

mine's here #TFFC
What's the start of it? i think i deleted it by accident
i'm from Donegal btw ^-^

OHMYGOSHNESS

Epic!

added you ^-^

thanks!! =D

I could imagine coming in on this.
MCNick: WA CHA!!!

^ lol XD

AMAZING MEL!

u should make a 5 part story of the Nether

^ thanks i might but i've got other stuff planned ;)

Do you think you can post an RP roon sometime today?

^ i'm at my latest one now! Viper's on too =D

thank you ^-^

no prob ^-^ thank you =D

Who won #TFMC ?

@ilmf
nope didn't see it =/
Up Dun na nGal agus Cork!! =D (sry i 4get how to spell cork in irish =/)
@Matt
they're up! congratz =D

EPIC :D