Short story by Blue_Eyes

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28 Sep, 2013, 12:10 am
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Blue_Eyes

28 Sep, 2013, 12:39 am

chapter one....It was new years eve and just like every year tony had a huge party , every one was there , clint, natasha, steve, bruse, thor, loki, and sarah , [sarah is my chara] and of corse tony and pepper and a bunch of other people . It was 6:00pm at stark tower and every one was having fun ither dancing or just mingling , the only ones who werent where loki and sarah , loki was in a corner and sarah was on the couch being bored. ''Hey sarah'' a man with a kind shy voice sed , sarah looked over and saw it was bruse , ''Oh hey bruse'' ''you look bored out of your scull'' ''yup'' , sarah huffed smiled at bruse and sed sarcasticly ''really fun party hu'' bruse giggled ''yeah im having a blast you'' bruse handed sarah a drink that looked like coke but tasted like alchol probably rum-n-coke her favorite drink ''oh yeah best party ever'' bruse was about to sit down when clint waved him over ''*huff* im being paged'' ''ok see ya'' ''im comin im comin'' .It was now 8thertypm and sarah and barly taking a sip of her drink so she put it down , she looked around to see where every one was and saw tony with pepper talking to some friends , clint telling thor jokes , bruse and natasha chating , and steve with a few people at the bar ''probably fans'' sarah thought to her self , the only person she didnt see in the croud was loki . Sarah and loki always got along loki doesnt like her but he tolerates her since she under stand what he has gone through [sarah was born on a different planet that was home to fire bloods they could control fire and had the soul of a phenix but it was invaded by an unknown enemy , she was only 8 when it happened but she is the only fire blood left in all the nine relms , she landed on earth and had meny croll foster parents but when she terned sixteen her powers came in and she cilled the last crol set of faster parents , phill had found her and brout her to S.H.I.E.L.D. but she ran away ] . ....tbc

Blue_Eyes

28 Sep, 2013, 1:02 am

chapter two .... Sarah got up and started twords the hall to the bedrooms [she lived at stark tower with every one] she stoped and saw loki in the hall in the corner along so she walked over to him ''hi'' loki huffed as if he was saying leave my along but sarah ignored it ''you as bored as i am ?'' loki just terned his head and huffed agian , when sarah got to loki she uncrossed his arms loki didnt stop her cuz she wispered to him ''c-mon grouchy lets go out to the porch'' sarah took lokis hands in hers , led him out of the hall still looking at him , when they got to the end sarah terned around but kept lokis hand in hers a walked to the huge porch . When sarah and loki made there way through the big crouded room and on to the porch sarah checked for people and when she was shor there was no one she let go of lokis hand ''well that was a battle just getting out of thete hu'' sarah had sed hoping to at least get a grine but loki just kept walking the the eg of the porch and leend on the short safty wall ''why did you pull me out here sarah i was quite happy where i was '' growld loki ''ya know thats really hard to beleave cuz you where in a dark corner in the hall'' loki huffed agian ''i just thought it would be nice to get out if that noisy croud and come out here , it is a beautiful night out dont you think'' ''yeah i guess'' ''awwh so he does see beauti in some things'' sarah teased loki just roled his eyes '' arent you could sarah ?'' loki asked ''loki havnt you notest im whereing shorts in the middle of winter'' ''your point'' ''wow your dense'' ''im just joking sarah yeesh'' ''well your good at playing a moron'' loki wasnt afended cuz there always saying mean things like that to each other and he likes how gutsy she is for calling him names ''oh good you notest'' sarah laughed and loki smiled cuz he loves making her laugh ''HA YOU CAN SMILE and not just an evil smile'' loki roled his eyes so sarah stuk her toung out ''god your such a brat'' sed loki ....tbc

Blue_Eyes

28 Sep, 2013, 1:21 am

chapter three ...Sarah and loki where still looking down from the porch when tony spoted them and tony being tony saw it as an opertonaty to prov the loki likes sarah so he went and got the guys [thor steve clint and bruse] and they all headed out to the porch ''Well well well looks like i win the bet legolas'' ''oh god'' wishpered sarah ''just ignor him i always do'' but sarah had already terned to tony when loki sed that ''yep your right stark our little spit fire does have a thing for loki '' braged clint and handed tony twonty bucks ''tony if you only draged me out here just to prove your right then im going back in '' sed bruse ''bruse if your going in could you take the a$$ with you '' sed sarah ''tony please leave my brother along '' ''yeah and stay out of my live '' sed sarah as she walked by tony but tony grabed her arm and pulled her back ''na-un little missy i think its time you and me had a little talk bou-'' '' tony im 24 so stop talking to me like a child'' '' sorry '' '' thor would you please controll your preshes human'' '' working on it brother'' '' loki did i see you pulling a move on sarah'' sarah heated her arm where tony was grabing and tony let go with a ''OW JESUS SARAH'' sarah herd loki giggled a bit so she smerked at tony ''HA so you do like each other '' ''tony not a good idea'' sed steve ''eh Hey if you to every wanna get hiched i know this grate little cherch off of-'' ''TONY STARK WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP ALREADY'' yelled sarah as her eyes went from gold to red in a split second , loki stormed off to his room and a few seconds later they herd a door slam , tony bruse clint and steve had gone back in ''sarah just mind tony hes just-'' '' thor please dont i know your just trying to help but not now'' '' ok im sorry but when your calm could you check on loki for me , your the only one he lissons to when hes upset'' '' yeah ok'' , thor went back in and sarah stayd out till eleven ....tbc

Blue_Eyes

28 Sep, 2013, 1:45 am

chapter four ..Sarah went back in and headed to lokis room ,she didnt knock just went in [loki never mind] when she got in she walk twords the bed where loki was lieing his back twords her,she lit the candle that was on his desk and went back to the door and leand on the corner and wated till he sat up,he huffed at sat up,he had taking of his dress shirt so when sarah saw his bere chest he was quite fit so that made her blush,loki had his head in his hands and sed ''what do you want ''''thor wanted me to check on you''''im fine now leave me be''''hey dont bite my head off im just doing what i was asked''''just like a little puppy'' sarah roled her eyes & sat on the bed next to him & put her hand on his shoulder '' dont worry ill get tony back for that '' wisperd sarah ''i know but thats not whats bugging me'''' then what is'' loki pused for a moment then looked at sarah ''i just hate it when my feeling can be seen''''what do you mean'' ''tonys right''''oh'' sarah blushed and was about to speak when ''5 4 3 2 1 HAPPY NEW YEAR ''every one was counting down and even at the back on the tower they could here then clear as day ''oh i forgot about that'' sarah sighed cuz watching the ball drop was the only thing she was looking forword to alnight since they could see it from the very top of stark ,loki saw sarah was sad so he took het hand and wisperd into her ear ''happy new year sarah'' sarah looked up at loki and got lost in his bright blue eyes ,she was speachles and some what shocked cuz loki sed he would never ever selabrate the stupid earthlin holidays and would never say those words ,loki smile at sarah and quikly but softly kissed her cheeck ,she blush ''thats not tradition'' loki smerked cuz he knew what she ment so he leand down to kiss her ''are you shor i dont want to hert you'' wispered loki ''loki you cant hert me remember'' sarah wispered back ''god why do you have to be so pervect'' loki sed be for kissing her softly on the lips ...... The end

Mission

28 Sep, 2013, 5:31 am

I am not a romantic person.
Takes one to know one.
Can you help me? o3o

ABdow uNite

28 Sep, 2013, 5:36 am

That was really cool and creative! Unfortunately, I haven't seen the Avengers yet, so I'm not sure which name belongs to Hawkeye and which to Captain America, between Clint and Steve. The others I'm largely familiar with from the other movies. I haven't seen Thor, but is your character Sarah kind of like Natalie Portman's character in the movies?

I have a bit of a story going on, in the description for all of my "Ring of Barahir" paintings. It's a bit disjointed, however, because it's split up between the different paintings. I should use your method, it's much better. :)

I hope a lot of people read this because considerable work manifestly went in to it. You are very good at creative writing. Feel free to delete my comment to save the story.

Later. :)

xXStarWolfXx

28 Sep, 2013, 6:40 am

W-what?! o.o You don´t must to! :oo I must MAKE you a gift Sissy X´333

MaximumZelda

28 Sep, 2013, 1:02 pm

I love this story! Especially since it has Marvel characters! It's very creative. :D

ABdow uNite

29 Sep, 2013, 9:07 pm

Sure thing! Maybe I'll try combiningthe story parts into one work. As it is, you can read them in the proper order by starting with my first "Ring of Barahir" painting and progressing in the order in which the works were uploaded. They look pretty much the same from afar, but have subtle and Stark {haha} differences when viewed up close.

CloakedInGravity

01 Oct, 2013, 6:10 pm

Awww! >w< I'm not a very romantic person, but this ish a cute story!

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