Sunset by Candlelight

How could it become better?
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#sunset #bird #sun

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
17 Sep, 2013, 3:12 pm
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usielx

19 Sep, 2013, 11:01 pm

If you let me copy this one and made one by my self I could show you how to improve it!

Candlelight

21 Sep, 2013, 8:55 am

You don´t have to, but thanks

Candlelight

21 Sep, 2013, 8:56 am

This means you´re allowed to ;)

caldrago

22 Sep, 2013, 8:07 am

I can't say much, barely any room for improvement, I couldn't do better!

caldrago

22 Sep, 2013, 8:10 am

but for the 3d, copy the layers then use a low opacity brush on the front layer and go over the further away parts more than the closer ones for a smooth effect. (sorry, I'm pretty bad at explaing...)

caldrago

22 Sep, 2013, 8:12 am

(it doesn't work well for lines though, just big, solid blocks.)

Candlelight

22 Sep, 2013, 1:29 pm

I know, but thanks :)
(I made this painting just to upload something)

JoshHook

12 Oct, 2013, 5:00 pm

Id like to think that the light rays are un-needed in this...and maybe take the color from the upper left corner (redish) and make some clouds in that there sky!

Candlelight

13 Oct, 2013, 7:05 pm

Thank you

Simeon

27 Oct, 2013, 5:11 am

The horizon line should be a bit sharper, other then that, this is amazing!!

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