Let The Rain Fall Part 1 by RainWolf
Hello, My name is Rain, and this is my story.
That's me. happy, young and peaceful. The older wolves are my mom and dad, the little brown bundle of fur is my newly born brother Aspen. We are a happy pack, Always having enough prey to eat and the best places to sleep. We have views beyond imagination of the surrounding nature. All may sound and look peaceful, but their has been a disturbance lately. My mom says I'm to young to understand, but I have an idea of whats going on.
#LetTheRainFall
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14 Sep, 2013, 7:03 pm
PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT UNTIL I GIVE THE "Ok"
14 Sep, 2013, 7:23 pm
Although I was just a pup myself, one evening in the forest I saw a tall-legged creature with a long black stick. His pelt was brown and tan, with long messy fur on his head. He looked menacing so I ran. He heard me and chased me, luckily I found a crevice in a rock big enough foe a pup my size. As the tall-leg passed I sighed of relief. I dare not tell my parents about this, I don't want to be stuck in the den.
Last moon while my mom was pregnant, my dad came back with a scar on his shoulder, perfectly healed now. He went to get some prey for us, mostly for mom because she had Aspen that night. Gladly, she was full from the evening prey. I asked dad where he got the scar but he only replied "Holly bush Scratched me." Looking at me with amus.ment in his ice blue eyes. I Laughed but I knew a hollybush could not leave a scar that deep. I let it go and walked away, Wondering what really happened.
After that night, I woke up to a prod in my shoulder, It was my young brother, Aspen. "Rain!" Aspen said in a funny way. I jump up and run to mom and dad, mom already awake. "Mom! Aspen said his first word!" My mom smiled at me, full of joy. "What was it dear?" She asked as Aspen bu.tted in with another wierdly sounding bark, "Rain!" he barked. My mom gaped open her mouth in a huge smile and said "He likes you!" And I smiled at Aspen saying "Hi Aspen, glad you like me!" And giggled.
Rain's dads name is Oak.
Her mother is Mist
This story is in the past, so I use past-tense words c:
Rain is a pup here, about 5 months :)
Aspen is only 1 month
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14 Sep, 2013, 7:27 pm
Awwww! Aspen is adorable X3
Hey... did any of my charas get in?
14 Sep, 2013, 7:32 pm
This is so amazing! ^-^ You're a great writer!
14 Sep, 2013, 7:51 pm
xD oh I forgot to mention. While Aspen said his first word, Her dad was just hunting :3
morning hunting...xD
14 Sep, 2013, 7:54 pm
Awesome! I love this! I can't wait for the next part! : D ( you can delete this if you want. XD )
14 Sep, 2013, 8:29 pm
pretty ;w;
14 Sep, 2013, 8:55 pm
Awesome!
14 Sep, 2013, 10:51 pm
awwwwww aspennnn QwQ
14 Sep, 2013, 11:09 pm
OMG IMA CRY! so buetyful QwQ
15 Sep, 2013, 2:29 am
DAAAAAWWWWW HES SO CWOOT AND LITL ^0^ RAIN IS SO PWETTY ^w^ LOVE IT
15 Sep, 2013, 8:16 am
Ooo... :o
Btw did I get in? :D
15 Sep, 2013, 12:37 pm
Mist! :D *Misty jumps up and down with joy* This story is pretty good! You've got me interested! (And believe me, that doesn't usually happen very often)
18 Sep, 2013, 12:35 am
ASPEN IS SOOO TINY :3