"Herobrine" Part 14 Into the Neather by TFmel

Sorry it took so long =( i've been busy with school =/
The Story So Far
After finally tracking his brother down, Herobrine engaged in combat against Notch
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#minecraft #herobrine

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08 Sep, 2013, 9:35 am
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TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 9:39 am

Unaware of the battle that had taken place, the team continued onward to the destination of the final Neather Star- the mysterious Neatherrack Ridge. None of them knew a thing about it, only that it was the last thing standing between them and Herobrine.

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 9:54 am

They soon came to a large cliff face, and in it was a cave, and in front of the cave's enterence there were four torches, just like there had been in Ender Forest and Dead Stone Valley. However, this time, instead of a chest, the five found a blood stained note in the middle of the torches. Confused and worried, Carina lifted the note and began reading out loud.
"What's this? No chest? What a shame. Notch didn't leave anything to help you this time. Well, he didn't exactly get the chance.
As the name would suggest, Neatherrack Ridge is in the Neather. Defeat the Wither if you can! I'll be waiting.
-Herobrine"
As Carina read the note, Herobrine's voice echoed through her head, saying the words as she read them. Suddenly, the image of Herobrine stabbing Notch flashed in her mind. She dropped the note in surprise. It landed on one of the flaming torches and immediatly turned to ashes. Looking ahead, she saw what must have been the aftermath of a battle. There were cracks in the cliff face's stone walls, a nearby tree had been split and on the ground there was a pool of blood, and in it lay a gold and lapis lazuli sword. "Herobrine! He, h-he's killed Notch!" Carina exclaimed, her voice shaking

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 10:06 am

"What?!" the others shouted at once. "I saw it! Just as I finished reading the note, an image flashed through my head..." she told them "Wait! You don't know if it's true. Herobrine could just be messing with you..." Fantaay answered, sounding more sure than she was. "Or it is true and we're next!" Jake exclaimed "...Even if we are...we have to go on!" Carina replied, clenching her fists. She knelt down and lifted Notch's sword from the pool of blood. "Guys, everything we do from here on in, is for Notch and anyone else who's fallen by Herobrine's hand!" she announced, holding the sword up high. The others shouted various things in agreement, punching the air.
That was it. They we're going to stop Herobrine. Turning back was now completely out of the question.

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 10:14 am

Staying close together, the team made their way down the tunnel to the large Neather Portal which was the gateway to Neatherrack Ridge. Without a word, they all stepped through it.
As the purple light faded away, they found themselves in the Neather.And standing before them was a large Neather Fortress. Suddenly, Viper shouted "Look out!". The team threw themselves to the ground as something exploded behind them. They got up and looked behind them. The Portal had been destroyed

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 10:27 am

"What the hell was that?!" Gabe exclaimed. They looked around, but saw nothing. Moving quickly, the five climbed the stairs into the fortress. They could hear ghasts flying around as well as blazes in rooms and hallways above and below them. There must have been a spawner somewhere. It was then they came across a long hallway. At the end of it, there was another staircase which lead to the rooftop. However, it was guarded by two Wither Skeletons. "I bet you five budder nuggets that's where the Neather Star is!" Viper said "Yeah! Let's try that way" Fantasy agreed. Not wasting any time, the team ran up and defeated the withers.
They made their way to the rooftop. For some reason, there were no ghasts or blazes. But more to the point, there was no sign of the Neather Star. Suddenly, an ear splitting screech echoed throughout the area. It was a sound the team had heard before, in Witherville.
Suddenly, the Wither Boss appeared above them. Then, three voices spoke in sync with each other, their message as clear as day.
"This is your end!"

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 10:27 am

===End of Part 14===

PETER!!!!!

08 Sep, 2013, 11:42 am

THIS IS SO INTENSE XD WHEN I HEARD THE END OF THIS PART This is ur end thats the name of one of my client servers xD can i be in ur next series PLZ!!! :D

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 12:03 pm

@Peter
thanks =D if i do another one then sure ^-^
@Krazykid
thank you ^-^ yep hopefully i will =)

Blazetail typhlosion

08 Sep, 2013, 12:17 pm

I wish I was in this story. To be honest you are a great author with potential so it would be an honour.

)Gabes Gallery(

08 Sep, 2013, 12:23 pm

I have a potty mouth :D

The Guy Frost

08 Sep, 2013, 12:45 pm

can i be in nxt 1 if u mke 1

The Guy Frost

08 Sep, 2013, 12:51 pm

also im srry TFmel but u no win contest but u wouldve but other peeps werent as popular as u on colurs i wanted 2 help them alittle kk

KxThorr

08 Sep, 2013, 3:21 pm

love it in THE NETHER CAN I JOIN U IN THE SERIES

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 5:01 pm

@Gabe
lolol XD
@The Guy Frost
it's ok =) that was the best thing to do ^-^
@everyone who's asked 2 be in next series
idk if i'm doing another series or a sequel to this. but if i do, i'll let you guys know =) also i'm not adding anyone else into this one. sorry =(

PETER!!!!!

08 Sep, 2013, 5:23 pm

@TFmel
dont do a sequal to this please thats basicly what Creeper Quest Is if ur gonna make a new series someday make it the sequal to creeper quest or something new :D

TFmel

08 Sep, 2013, 5:49 pm

oh yeah!! lol sorry i forgot "^-^ but yea as you can probably tell by now, i'm obsessed with Herobrine XD So yep if i do another series/sequel i want him to be in it!!

Corelight

08 Sep, 2013, 10:10 pm

well i've been kinda busy but good luck ok finishing the story like herobrine's return

TFmel

09 Sep, 2013, 7:01 am

thanks guys ^-^

headJoJogamer

13 Apr, 2014, 2:14 am

i wanna be in too! :(

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