The Major by RackleArts

For MwWill:
During the Time War, her father escaped Gallifrey in a Tardis to Earth. (Mom died in war) Then dressed up as a Doctor and switched one couple's baby with Major. The father left for Gallifrey to keep fighting. This little timelord had a good normal human life. Although she felt something was...off. Not right. She'd often look up at the stars, feeling there was something important. Something important to remember.
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02 Sep, 2013, 3:43 pm
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RackleArts

02 Sep, 2013, 4:00 pm

Her life was going great. Until she recieved some sort of unmarked package.
It had no return adress and no name. It just was adressed to her. She was home when she openned it. Her human parents out for dinner. Inside she found some sort of lazer device, a blank piece of paper, and a small flask. The silver ingraving said "Drink me, and start anew" She was a bit puzzled at first.
So she texted some of her friends saying things like, "Ya know, you're a great friend! I just thought I should let you know. :)" and "Thanks for everything!" Just incase.
So she openned the flask and stared at it for a while. Then she closed it, thinking of her most prized possessions, and put together a pile of the things that meant everything to her. "Start anew?" she thought, "Pffft too bad." Then she put it in a bag and got ready for some cool adventure.
She picked up the flask, again, and drank it.Thinking it kind of tasted like some sparkling beverage. The kind that feels like it almost burns as it's going down your throat. So she waited a while and she felt something strange happening inside her. She dropped the flask and fell down. Her heart was started to race but something was happening on the other side of her chest. It hurt really bad.
She got up, shaking, picked up the laser device and blank peice of paper and put it safe in her bag. More v

RackleArts

02 Sep, 2013, 4:15 pm

She started to breath heavily.
"A-am I dying?" she asked herself. Her knees gave way and she grabbed for your heart. But that was the wrong side. 'What's going on?' she thought. 'I don't want to die. Who sent me this? What am I becoming?'
You could see the pain in her eyes. The fear. The frustration of her choice. Slowely, her eyes closed and she fell. After a few minutes she sat up. Looked around, confused, and shrugged. Now it felt like something was beating on the other side of her chest. It felt funny.
But now....it felt as if her body was burning. Her face. She looked in the mirror and it was glowing. She looked st her hands and they were glowing. A horrified look filled her face. She took a couple steps back and felt she was going to burst. Then BAM REGENERATION!
The house was now on fire, burning to the ground. She got out with everything she needed and fled the scene, crying. She didn't know where to turn. Where to go. What to do. The neighborhood she lived in had a bit of forest. She camped there and thought of what to do. Still crying. Then a shadowy figure aproached her ad hugged her tight. "I'm sorry," he whispered. "I'm so sorry"
Then she met
The Doctor.

THAT'S ALL YER GETTIN' >:U

inversense

02 Sep, 2013, 4:21 pm

nice story :D haha I like the "BAM regenereation" part

musicfox

02 Sep, 2013, 4:41 pm

D: Whaaaaaa... That was good ^^ had me interested.

swaggiestTimelord

02 Sep, 2013, 4:46 pm

hoLY SHI IIIT YOU DO BACKSTORYS REALLY GOOD????? Also the 1st Major's hair looks faboo!! ^^

Whovian272

02 Sep, 2013, 4:53 pm

nice backstory

MwWill

02 Sep, 2013, 4:58 pm

Oh cool!Perhaps I might take this as a flashback.Anyways,I started the comic.As the Master is approaching the front doors of the school,his attention turns to a voice."Hey you!"Turning,he sees it is the Major walking up while in a good mood."Are you ready to get whooped in science class?"Narrowing his eyes,the Master responded,"We'll see."
That is so far my success.They didn't mention their names yet.

The Echo

02 Sep, 2013, 5:14 pm

cool. the Echo was actually in the secret service of timelords and worked with rassilon in the end days of the time war.
but i think Echo's older than u if you were a baby in the war.

MwWill

02 Sep, 2013, 5:39 pm

What?XD,how'd you get that idea?

tripleB

02 Sep, 2013, 6:10 pm

thank yah

xXJa3Xx

02 Sep, 2013, 7:02 pm

O3O Ok....

Wait, I Thought Chu Were? Hm.

xXJa3Xx

02 Sep, 2013, 7:31 pm

Aah. Ok.

inversense

02 Sep, 2013, 7:35 pm

So is this a whole story? I have solace planned out for 4 seasons lol

inversense

02 Sep, 2013, 7:42 pm

oh no, I don't mean this specifically. I mean do you have a story for Major, like in your head or anything.

inversense

02 Sep, 2013, 7:53 pm

oh, lol I have the opposite problem, I need to come up with more mini bosses. My friend is helping me with that. After I told him the story he's become obsessed with it xD

Cruddie

02 Sep, 2013, 9:29 pm

nice story 0w0

Cruddie

02 Sep, 2013, 9:29 pm

dude btw wanna trade friend codes?

MwWill

02 Sep, 2013, 9:36 pm

Now why would the Master sabatage you?I thought he takes challenges serious.XD

inversense

02 Sep, 2013, 9:57 pm

haha thats the perfect idea for a boss, a bobble head serial kiIler

magicspell

03 Sep, 2013, 1:21 am

RE: Ah no problem! I thought I had followed you awhile ago, but for some reason I hadn't ._.' I love your art! ^^

Cruddie

03 Sep, 2013, 1:29 am

3711
seven four one three
nine zero nine eight
dont worry i have you FC

MwWill

03 Sep, 2013, 1:31 am

Fine,I'll make it a joke,that you slipped your toung saying as long as he doesn't sabatage you,then he's gonna look at you in a serious teasing look.
BTW,I decided since form three looks like a school uniform,I'm taking form four on the regular episodes and RP,kay?

MwWill

03 Sep, 2013, 3:32 am

The Master LL Regeneration
Name:Clause(Clouse) O'Neil
Eye color:Blue
Hair color:Light blonde
Personality:Socialpath
Scene:As Clause is building his device in science class,the teacher askes what he's making."A b0mb!"The whole c.l.a.s.s.room evacuated the room in a mad dash.Later in the Principle's office,Clause holding his hands on his head and legs on the table ignorantly stared at the Principle as he was yelling at him."You just can't say that stuff!""Well I didn't think they would take that joke seriously!"As the Principle continued to yell,Clause added,"Are you done?"Angerly the Principle responded,"Do you think you're some kinda God?!""Maybe I am.""What did you say?!?!""I don't like repeating myself."Then Clause started walking out the door."Hey!You get back here..."*Door close.And the Major was sitting outside waiting to catch Clause and question about his actions.

MwWill

03 Sep, 2013, 3:46 am

Isn't hypnotization part of his electrical powers?Cause he won't get them for a good extra pages...Maybe a bit longer.But he gets his powers by a timelord from the future before his device gets close to done.Then he turns a dog into a pup and says "Not quite to dust."

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