anime fail? by BlackWave

i want to hear honest opinion and advice for me to get better.it'il mean alot to me.in my opinion i think my torso and the hair is my weak point so advice mainly about would help too. please and thank you //ovo//
#sketch #blond #anime #manga #learning #help #color #chibi #advice #honest #opinion

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
01 Sep, 2013, 8:58 pm
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shenlong977

01 Sep, 2013, 9:17 pm

Let me start off by saying it looks really nice! Way better than anything I could do.

For criticism, the outline still looks like a sketch; stray lines and inconsistant width. It might just be me but the hand looks off; maybe a smaller palm or longer fingers? (Sorry, I'm not that good myself and don't want to give bad advice. :x)

T.Gemini

01 Sep, 2013, 9:58 pm

and to add it looks like she's cross eyed

Infinite_Thoughts

25 Sep, 2013, 8:36 pm

U need to put each iris in the middle of the eye...just sayin...but other than tht, it looks amaZayn!

MEDZinc

10 Nov, 2013, 6:34 pm

great i could never draw something like that but one thing in my opinion (ps my opinions suck) is the nose really isnt a "V" shape more of a "L or II" shape finnally the eyes kind of look like they are crossed. all you have to do is center the puple and add a small hinge over the inwards facing part of the eye and everything else is perfect (these are my opinions and there is no wrong in drawing every body has talent and you have tons of it)

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