first off all. people. STOP STEALING FROM ME! (has nothing to do with this particular pic, just though deja vu should come back from the world of unused chara's)
song Rihanna & Mikky Stay
#dejavu #havoc #story #pokemon #typhlosion #leafeon #WSshorts
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more happened the night of the forest fire than you realize
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30 Aug, 2013, 4:32 am
Smoke poured through every gap, creva,sse and opening in the once luscious forest. The leafeon stumbled through the burning air that stiffled his lungs. He Choked and sputtered, ash and black sludge coming out of his maw. His eyes stung and were specked dark by dirt and grime; his lungs were barely working due to the excessive amount of smoke. All around trees fell, spraying sticks and burnt debris, becoming the next victim to the consuming fire that approached.
The smoke was thick, and the air hoy, blazing white fire circled around threatening to close themdistance between it and him. His bright lavender eyesnsearched desperetly for his lost companion, refusing to leave without her. "CLAIRE!" He yelled as best he could through his choking, scanning around for any telltale signs of hid umbreon friend but she was nowhere to be seen.
Before the fire had erupted they had been relaxing in the sunshine within the forest. Then they saw a sudden blaze aproaching and ran, but the flames had managed to split then apart. Now as the white blaze shot through the smoke he could see stantler and deerling fleeing, burning, and some dying. "CLAIRE!!!" He yelled again, tears of black ash ran down his face as he feared the worst. As he was about to search another part of the forest a scre,am shot through the woods. It pained him to hear Claire in such pain. "I'm coming!!" He yelled, andshot off into the forest.
The flames grew worse and worse as he followed the struggled scre,ams of the umbreon, but he didnt care about them right now. Something was off about them however; they weren't thr familiar orange and yello colour, but of a blimding white. As he marvelled at the pecualiar flames a tree toppled over, nearly taking him down! Jumping back slightly he refocused on finding Claire and lepy over the blazing log, charging through the bying forest.
30 Aug, 2013, 4:47 am
Finally through the smoky haze he found a large toppled tree and under it was a familiar shiny umbreon. Her legs her crushed by wood, a branch jarred into her thigh. The leafeon ran over to Claire as she let out another yowl of pain. "Claire. I *cough* I'm here...It's *cough* its gonna be okay." He stammered and choked, trying to breathe properly but the smoke was so thick he could barely see the tree! 'just be glad the fire has left this spot' he thought to himself. Then turning to Claire, who was in a state of rather delirium, tried to figure out how to save her. 'maybe i could use cut and split the log in half...' it was worth a shot. So slowly but deliverately he focused his power, then with a fluid motion cut the burnt log in half, splitting mere imches from Claire's struggling body. He then used his paws and managed to heave the log away from the umbreon who in return bolted up and clung to the leafeon. "Deja" she gasped, choking on the smoke as well. She wrapped her arms around him tightly; her fur hot snd singed just like his only her her thigh was bleeding heavily now. "It's okay. Let's get out of here." he spoke trying not to choke.The heat was getting unbearable.
They began walking, the slender umbreon her right foreleg over Deja's back as he hurried along trying to search for an exit that wasnt consumed by flames. He rounded the corner of a thick area of trees, Claire struggling to keep up whe a tree fell down spraying ash and sparks at the two. Deja turned around to find an alternate route but in his way was a colossal figure.
30 Aug, 2013, 5:05 am
Large black eyes glared down at him as a smile of white canines flashed. Deja let Claire fall to the ground and stood in front of her in protection. As he did the the massive pokemon let out a thunderous, frightening laughter. "FOOL" He thundered as that mur,derous grin widened. "YOU ACTUALY THINK YOU CAN RUN" And with that the typhlosions vent lit ablaze with a blinding white light that burned the leafeon's skin even from the distance. The typhlosion dropped on all fours, turning hid to the side as one dead black eye stared at him threateningly. his smile even more horrifying with the white glow of the exploding flames. "im going to mur,der you. But first." He turned his gaze to the blue umbreon shaking behind Deja. "I'll let you watch her die."
Panic filled Deja as he realized what was going to happen, without thinking he shot an energy ball at the typhlosion, hitting him square in the chest. The beast stumbled back a bit but he immediatly recovered. "You wanna play? lets play!" Letting out a safistic laugh he charged at him, passing Claire he swatted her aside and she slammed into a tree with such force it cracked and fell over, the umbreon girl falling to the ground limp. "NO!" He screeched, seeing her lifeless body. Rage filled him and he charged, slamming into the typhlosions side and using grass knot on him, nocking the pokemon over. But he only got up, unnaffected by the hit. "Thats all you've got?"mHe chuckled and white flames shot around them burning and blistering Deja's skin. "Maybe I'll just kiII you first." The beast chuckled. Suddenly the flames shot around the typhlosion, circling around as he used flame charge.
The move blasted the poor leafeon, he went flying backwards, but the typhlosion didn't stop there. He came loping to the fallen eon and, gripping his back paws tightly prepared to use eruption. White light filled hid mouth as the leafeon looked up. Closing his lavender eyes he braced for the life ending fire.
30 Aug, 2013, 5:18 am
He waited half a second, thats when the typhlosiom was nocked to his side by a powerful hit...Foul Play. Claire stood pantinh behind the typhlosion, blood spilling from her head. The typhlosion struggled back up, furious "You little b!tch!" he spat. "ill kiII you!!!" He charged at her, using flamethrower, blasting the umbreon. As this happened Deja charge, he leapt and bit the typhlosion's rough back, shooting sn energy ball straight through his skin. He scre,amed in utter rage. Swinging about he tore Deja from his back and through him to the floor letting his bones crunch painfully. He them crabbed Claire by the throat, picking her up and began choking her.
Getting up the leafeon struggled through the smoke to the gisnt tyohlosion but was thrown back again. He got up again from the dent in the ground where he had landed. Choking sounds were audible and Claire sounded like she was almost dead. Tears stre,amed down his face as he made his way back to the typhlosion, who shot him with s blast of fire
Once more, he struggled back up, but then he heard Claire, "g-go" she managed to spit out. "g-get out....while....you....can." At this the typhlosion smiled once more. Then, staring straight at the leafeon he lifted a hand to Claire, and in one fluid motion slashed open her chest blood spraying across his face. He then reached inside...a small gasp was audible and then he ripped out her still beating heart. Blood spattered everywhere and sprayed Deja, who stood there, wide eyed in shock. He couldnt move, he could do anything.
30 Aug, 2013, 5:27 am
The typhlosion began to slowly walk towards him, laughing maniacally. Then s voice filled his head 'go!' Claires voice rang through hid mind, tender but commanding. And he listened. Deja ran as fast as he possibly could through smoke and the flames. His ears and tail burned, thats when he realized they were ablaze. But he kept runninh, he couldnt stop, a tree toppled over, a branch flew and jarred his eye, blinding him in that eye. He kept running.
Through all the smoke, finally, a light emerged. Blinding moonlight through the smoke. He burst through the opening, fresh air shot through hid lungs without warning and he fell to the ashen ground of an open feilf. The flame on his leaves extinguished but the burns created a pain so intense he could barely move.
He was bleeding, blinded and burnt. he was dying, slowly, painfully and mercilessly. So he lay there, thinking about Claire, he cried, sobbed, choking up ash. Remembering her, how he should have died and not her, how he should have done more.
And as he lay there a paingully familiar voice filled his head. 'live. My beautiful, take thid znd you will live, take this and make the world more beautiful. Deja vu." As the beautiful voice floated through his head something materislized infront of him.
A blue ring.
30 Aug, 2013, 8:27 am
Omg the story is AMAZING!
You have such a great talent with writting ! (haha I´m jelly)
30 Aug, 2013, 12:30 pm
...
...there are...no words.
Wolf Soul.
...you need to write a book. I would read the hell out of it.
30 Aug, 2013, 1:17 pm
Im speechless. This is beautiful. There are no words to express how i feel right now, and how wonderful this story is. It saddened me so, but there's always a bright side. Great job wolf. :)
31 Aug, 2013, 3:02 pm
thank you very much
31 Aug, 2013, 10:48 pm
For some reason, I didn't see this in my feed! O-Q You need to write moar...
01 Sep, 2013, 12:31 am
weird .-.amd aha thanks ^^ i do write a lot but i only post o few of the things i write :T
03 Sep, 2013, 11:31 am
wow.........