The Escapees: Chapter 1 by MaximumZelda

Chapter 1:
I sat at the one table that was in our huge room. I was writing my story. Us. I knew it would never be published, but it's good to have something to do while we're stuck here. I heard footsteps. "Watcha doin, Maxy?" asked a familar voice. I sighed. "Chemical, you know what I'm doing. You've been teasing me for months now about my book." "Yeah, because it seems like that's all you ever do. Take a break! Have some fun!" He snat.ched my book. Cont. in comm. #TEStory #TheEscapees

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30 Aug, 2013, 12:26 am
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MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 12:32 am

"Hey! Give me back my book!" I yelled. "Not until you agree to take a break!" He held up the book. His other hand started to glow acid green along with the crystal around his neck. "Chemical. Don't. You. Dare." "Try me." My hand gripped the pencil so hard it snapped. My crystal flickered. My eyes flashed from bright blue to gray.

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 12:40 am

My wings spread out and I lunged toward Chemical, being careful to avoid his hand. He turned around to face me, but was too slow and I grabbed the book and flew towards the ceiling. I stuck my tongue out at him tauntingly. He stomped his foot angrily, but his glow faded away. I swooped back down to the table, found a new pencil, and continued writing. Ironicly, I was writing about him.

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 12:48 am

Chemical is one of the Experimented, like all of us here at the Facility. I'm Max, the first Experimented. I'm a bat hybrid. Then there's Chemical. He can create any affect of any chemical or acid. There are a lot of us here. But we come in, and never see the light of day again.

Sunburst

30 Aug, 2013, 12:50 am

>u< Your good at writing!

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 12:51 am

Thanks. ^u^

Mission

30 Aug, 2013, 1:11 am

Laboritwas and faciliritys!

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 1:27 am

Yep! ^u^

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 3:01 am

Thanks guys! ^u^ Dadgumit, I keep forgetting to say this: "End of Chapter 1" Now, It will switch to the other persons point of veiw. (Read prolouge) It'll do that after every chapter. It's sorta like an intermission.

TheUltimateHylian

30 Aug, 2013, 3:13 am

You have 2 left hands?? O-o

MaximumZelda

30 Aug, 2013, 10:04 pm

Thanks! ^^Whoops! No, I don't. I just wasn't paying attention.

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