"Herobrine" Part Thirteen Broken Brotherhood by TFmel

Sorry it took so long. My mum took my ds =/
The Story So Far
After arriving in Dead Stone Valley, the team managed to defeat the mutant zombie and obtain the second Neather Star, bringing them one step closer to stopping Herobrine.
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#story #fanfic #minecraft #herobrine

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28 Aug, 2013, 9:40 am
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TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 9:49 am

As Notch approched the cave enterence, he knew it was as far as he could go. For the mysterious Neatherack Ridge was not in the cave, but in the Neather which could be reached by the large Neather Portal that he knew was at the end of the tunnel, left unactivated for 500 years. But as Notch got closer, he realised it had been opened.
Suddenly, he felt a dark and evil presence, one he had not felt in a long, long time. Notch realised he had been too careless.
His brother had finally found him...

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 9:58 am

Notch turned to face Herobrine, who stood a few blocks away. "It's been too long, Notch" he said "Herobrine! How are you even here?! I removed you!" Notch exclaimed "Ha ha, you see Notch, just like you, I am part of this world. I cannot be removed" Herobrine answered as an evil smile crept across his face. "I believe it's about time we finished this" he added, bringing out his Obsidian sword. Taking out his Gold and Lapis Lazuli sword, Notch silently accepted Herobrine's challenge. "I'm going to k.ill you, Notch. Here and now!" Herobrine announced and with that, the two brothers charged into battle.

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 10:11 am

Both were highly skilled, each blocking the other's attacks. However, without his power, Notch was at a disadvantage. As he went to attack, Herobrine suddenly dodged it and struck him, sending him flying off to the side and crashing to the ground. "Ha ha ha! You're not the fighter you once were, Notch!" Herobrine said mockingly. Notch didn't reply as he pushed himself up of the ground. In a sudden burst of extreme speed, Notch ran and hit Herobrine with such force, that he crashed into a tree way behind him. Picking himself up, Herobrine said "Hmm, prehaps I spoke too soon. But enough games! I've toyed with you long enough!" With that, Herobrine suddenly vanished. Notch quickly picked up his sword, getting ready for his brother to attack again. But, nothing could have prepared him for Herobrine's next move..
Notch suddenly felt a horrible surge of pain in his upper body. Wide-eyed and gasping for air, he slowly stared down at the blood covered tip of the Obsidian sword..

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 10:26 am

He yelled in pain as Herobrine roughly pulled his sword out. Notch fell to his knees, using his right hand to hold himself up while the other clutched the wound in his chest. Herobrine came around and stood in front of him, his eyes glowing intensely. It was then Herobrine realised it. Notch wasn't dying. In anger, he cut his brother's right arm. Blood began streaming from it also.
"....Y-you can't k.ill m-me Herobrine....Like you said b-before, you and I are p-part of...this world. I cannot be killed, just as y-you cannot be removed..." Notch told him. Hearing this, Herobrine grabbed Notch by the throut and lifted him up of the ground. "If I can't k.ill you, I'll trap you! And, if you think the one you've chosen stands a chance, you're dead wrong!" he exclaimed, evil in his voice. Herobrine threw Notch to the ground. He blacked out.

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 10:27 am

===End of Part Thirteen===

EnderGirl

28 Aug, 2013, 11:32 am

sssssuspenseeee!

PETER!!!!!

28 Aug, 2013, 2:09 pm

u know what i didnt like this part... I LOVED THIS PART BUT JUST A LITTLE (2) SHORT I LIKE LONG PARTS :D

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 2:28 pm

thanks guys =D
@Peter
i know it was shorter than 11 and 12 but i'm slow at typing so yeah the next part will hopefully be longer

savethemanatees

28 Aug, 2013, 2:42 pm

awesome!

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 3:30 pm

thanks ^-^

CaptainDiscord

28 Aug, 2013, 5:20 pm

Intense battles... never get My father in there. Why? Because he always wins >:D

TFmel

28 Aug, 2013, 5:55 pm

XD Yep!!

TFmel

01 Sep, 2013, 9:44 am

@Commander Simon
Sorry but i'm too far on in the series to add anyone else. Other ppl asked already so it wouldn't be fair. sorry again

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