How many lessons are there? I like this allot. You should touch it up by adding some hair, and getting rid of the bandana... It looks a little awkward.
In my opinion, I think the headscarf is fine since it serves as a human accessorizing decoration. But for some reason, I think the headscarf is proportionally off.....maybe round it off a bit and it will look more complete or do what @NM said ^-^ Btw its a wonderful painting! :) Hope you understand.
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21 Aug, 2013, 11:43 pm
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21 Aug, 2013, 11:45 pm
yes, i was the first! i´m soooo happy! :D this pic is very pretty, i like it :D
i forgot... WELCOME JAPAN! *v* xD
22 Aug, 2013, 3:51 am
How many lessons are there? I like this allot. You should touch it up by adding some hair, and getting rid of the bandana... It looks a little awkward.
22 Aug, 2013, 6:09 am
Captured the skin tones very well. Great job :)
22 Aug, 2013, 12:16 pm
good shading but her neck is too rough on the left side
24 Aug, 2013, 1:00 am
In my opinion, I think the headscarf is fine since it serves as a human accessorizing decoration. But for some reason, I think the headscarf is proportionally off.....maybe round it off a bit and it will look more complete or do what @NM said ^-^ Btw its a wonderful painting! :) Hope you understand.