Girl With Headscarf by Cydnie

From a lesson on the game #artacademy I fixed the painting of this I posted earlier because it was an epic fail... please give your honest opinion.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
21 Aug, 2013, 11:27 pm
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Mister_Mo_Original

21 Aug, 2013, 11:43 pm

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Mister_Mo_Original

21 Aug, 2013, 11:45 pm

yes, i was the first! i´m soooo happy! :D this pic is very pretty, i like it :D

i forgot... WELCOME JAPAN! *v* xD

Mission

22 Aug, 2013, 3:51 am

How many lessons are there? I like this allot. You should touch it up by adding some hair, and getting rid of the bandana... It looks a little awkward.

mcollins

22 Aug, 2013, 6:09 am

Captured the skin tones very well. Great job :)

Abstractio

22 Aug, 2013, 12:16 pm

good shading but her neck is too rough on the left side

Mirdawg.

24 Aug, 2013, 1:00 am

In my opinion, I think the headscarf is fine since it serves as a human accessorizing decoration. But for some reason, I think the headscarf is proportionally off.....maybe round it off a bit and it will look more complete or do what @NM said ^-^ Btw its a wonderful painting! :) Hope you understand.

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