"Herobrine" Part Twelve Burning Flames by TFmel

Over I45 Followers Special =D
I never thought it possible. But this part turned out even longer than the last one =D
The Story So Far
After defeating the mutant enderman of Ender Forest, the team obtained the first Neather Star
#TFHerobrine
#fanfic #story #minecraft #herobrine

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21 Aug, 2013, 5:55 pm
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TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 6:04 pm

As the five left Ender Forest, they looked at the map to see where they should go next. "Well the closest to here is in Dead Stone Valley" Fantasy said pointing at the second star on the map. "Wait, DEAD Stone Valley?! That place is full of zombies!" Jake exclaimed "Jake! Herobrine probably has the entire sever filled with mobs by now! There's not much difference" Carina told him "She's right. Besides, Notch'll probably leave something for us like he did last time" Viper added "Right! Let's kill us some zombies!" Gabe put in. With that, the team set off east for Dead Stone Valley.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 6:18 pm

Meanwhile, in a dark, distant place, Herobrine was pacing the floor, lost in thought. "It would appear I've underestimated those five. Not only did they survive the siege of Witherville, they've now defeated the mutant enderman and obtained one of the Neather Stars! How did they even know about them?!" he thought as he continued to pace across the dimly lit room. He suddenly stopped as the only possible reason dawned on him "Of course! There's only one way they could've known. Notch has revealed himself!" he said aloud before throwing his head back in laughter "That fool actually thinks he can stop me?! He's powerless!" he exclaimed, an evil smile on his face. But then, Herobrine's expression changed as another thought occured to him. "Hmm, Notch may still have enough power to aid the five he's chosen. So until my 'dear' brother is dead, he poses a threat to my plans, as do those five..." he paused and glanced at his obsidian sword that lay against the wall, an evil smile returning to his pale face.
"Notch is first to go!"

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 6:29 pm

The team soon reached Dead Stone. As they looked down into the valley, they saw a load of zombies. Then, glancing to the left they saw a chest It was surrounded by four torches and once again there was a note on top. To their surprise, it was much shorter than the last. Fantasy took it and began reading
"In this valley of the dead, the second Neather Star lies in wait.
Defeat it's guardian in burning flames, or he shall seal your fate"
Viper opened the chest. Again not as much as last time. There were five flint and steels, a few dozen arrows and, wait what?! A small bottle of blood! "O...kay! Did not see this coming!" Carina exclaimed holding up the bottle. "Well take it anyway. It might be useful" Viper told her. Taking everything, the team went down into the valley.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 6:49 pm

No sooner had they reached the bottom, the zombies had sensed them and were now on their way to attack the five. The team brought out their diamond swords and began fighting the walkimg dead. They managed to take out quite a few of them but soon there were just too many of them. The five re-grouped behind a large rock. "What do we do now? There's too many of them!" Jake exclaimed. Suddenly Gabe stood up "Don't worry! I came prepared!" he announced in a cool voice, holding a TNT over him "....Uh, this looked a lot cooler in my head, so..i guess i'll just throw it now" he said "Wait not yet! They're to spaced out. We need a way to lure them to it" Fantasy replied "Hmm, i was wondering why we needed this" Carina answered holding up the blood bottle "Alright! Quick pour it on!" Gabe replied, before throwing the now blood covered TNT into the middle of the zombies. They gathered around it. Jake used the flint and steel to light an arrow which he shot into the TNT causing it to explode, killing almost all the zombies at once.
Seeing their chance, the team ran into a cave figuring it must be where the Neather Star is. They were right. After following a wide tunnel they came into a chamber and at the back of it the Neather Star lay on a three block high redstone pyramid. "Alright! We found it!" Viper exclaimed. Suddenly,a strange scrapping sound and the strong smell of rotten flesh filled the chamber. The team looked behind them to see a massive, dark figure dragging a stone sword.
This Neather Star's guardian was a mutant zombie.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:05 pm

"Stupid humans! You too late! Me no let you take Herobrine's Neather Star!" the mutant zombie said as he slowly walked towards them as they slowwly backed up. Thinking fast, Fantasy and Jake made a run for the redstone pyramid, but the guardian didn't even try to stop them. Jake grabbed the Neather Star, but it didn't budge. "Huh? It's stuck! I can't lift it" he exclaimed "Let me try!" Fantasy told him. But it was no good. "Ha ha! My dark soul tied to Neather Star! Kill me, Star yours. But that not going to happen!" the zombie raved lifting his sword and suddenly, to their surprise, he charged towards them! "Oh c.rap! He can run!" Carina exclaimed, but before she, Gabe or Viper could get out of the way, the mutant swung his sword down. The trio blocked it with their diamond swords, but they could feel them pushing down against them. Suddenly, Jake shot an arrow hitting the mob in the arm, causing him to stop. He kept firing arrows then, remembering what Notch's note had said, Jake got Fantasy to light the arrows on fire with the flint and steel. The flaming arrows did far more damage.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:17 pm

Carina, Gabe and Viper joined Jake and Fantasy at the back of the chamber. "So what now? There's not much we can do while he's got that sword" Viper said as the zombie was now hitting away the arrows Jake shot. "Have we got any potions?" Gabe asked "We've got three. One speed, one strength, one regeneration" Fantasy answered "Strength should do it" Gabe replied "Yeah but who's going to drink it?" Jake asked, shooting another arrow. Viper had an idea. "Carina you should use it. It might have the same doubled effect the jump boost potions had" he explained "Hmm, alright! It's worth a shot!" Carina replied, as Fantasy gave her the strength potion. "Ha! Your silly potion do you no good!" the zombie jeered, seeing the empty potion bottle. "Oh yeah? We'll see about that!" Carina replied. With that, she, Gabe , Viper and Fantasy ran towards the mob, swords in hand.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:28 pm

Suddenly, the mutant zombie struck his sword into the ground, generating a shockwave that caused the ground to ripple. The force of it knocked the four of them to the floor. Pulling his sword out of the ground, he came towards them and prepared to strike. He was going to k.ill them all in one swing.
Or so he thought.
As the zombie swung his sword, Carina jumped up and hit it hard, the potion taking full effect. Smash! The mutant mob's sword fell to pieces. Backing away he asked "How you do that?!" "Like this!" she answered, striking him with her sword, sending him crashing into the rock wall behind him. The zombie fell to the ground. Before his health could regenerate, which it could, the five set him on fire with the flint and steels, defeating him in burning flames.
The Neather Star rose up from the pyramid and floated over to the team.
They were now one step closer to stopping Herobrine.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:28 pm

===End of Part Twelve===

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:30 pm

@The Guy Frost
Sorry i deleted your comments. Leaving them to the end makes it easier for people to read.

The Guy Frost

21 Aug, 2013, 7:31 pm

can u check out ur dare paintig i made a dare it bad 4 me but it funny lolololololol :P

The Guy Frost

21 Aug, 2013, 7:31 pm

and could i tho be a bacc ive always wanted 2 be a bacca

)Gabes Gallery(

21 Aug, 2013, 7:33 pm

Bloody TNT works like a monkey bomb :D IM DA NEW RICHTOFEN

)Gabes Gallery(

21 Aug, 2013, 7:35 pm

*if you dont know what a "monkey bomb" is, search it on youtube.

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 7:41 pm

Gabe lolol XD

The Guy Frost

21 Aug, 2013, 7:42 pm

do u like da idea

The Guy Frost

21 Aug, 2013, 7:43 pm

if uve watched the 10 top funniest minecraft vids on youtube dats where i got idea

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 8:52 pm

lol yes i do =) Zombie Steve!! =D

The Guy Frost

21 Aug, 2013, 9:18 pm

did u start da dare yet

savethemanatees

21 Aug, 2013, 9:19 pm

awesome story!

TFmel

21 Aug, 2013, 10:14 pm

lol yep!!i LOVE Steve's vids =D yay!! someone spotted the refrence XD
Thanks guys ^-^

PETER!!!!!

22 Aug, 2013, 6:44 pm

AWESOME!!! TFmel have u heard the minecraft song "one more fright" ITS AWESOME IT HAS HEROBRINE IN THE VIDEO BEST MINECRAFT SONG EVER!

TFmel

22 Aug, 2013, 7:55 pm

yes!! It's my fav Minecraft song!! i know the full thing off by heart =D

PETER!!!!!

23 Aug, 2013, 12:24 pm

i forgot it xD i just remember some lol and ill make some cake! when my heath goes down ill need a cow ill find some wheat and one egg now and the sweet sweet treat all i need is suger canes ill make some cake!

TFmel

23 Aug, 2013, 12:35 pm

wtf?? lol wrong song!! XD
One More Fright
"Everyday in this world of mine I keep on pacing the floor. There's this guy and he keeps on building things and slaming my door. He's been in my dreams and i'm sure i've seen him haunting before. Herobrine is real and i know i cannot take this nomore.
But oh man here we go again, here we go again, doing what you do.
And i've stopped pretending, stopped pretending it's not really you"
and so on =D

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