Where Do You Think Herobrine Went? TFmel Asks i dont know hey maybe in went in the oak wood forest up there. YEA LETS GO! TFmel And Peter Run Into The Forest! Later That Day... i didnt know this forest was so big! Peter Says. im getting tired TFmel Says. Tired!!!??? WHA..... WHO SAID THAT!? peter says.
The Person Jumps Outta The Tree. ITS ME GABE! Gabe! its u! TFmel Says. oh hey gabe. peter says.What The Heck Are You Doing In The Forest. TFmel Says. came to visit WitherVille. Gabe Says. Ok Gabesers Galleryia Lets Just Keep Walkin And No More Talkin Peter Says. Did.....You Just Call Me Gabesers Galleryia Gabe Says. YES PETER SAYS. ARE YOU CRAZY!? or just stuipid GABE SAYS. WHA.....YOU JUST CALL ME!? PETER SAYS. GUYS STOP. TFmel Says. NO. THE GUYS SAY. i called you CRAZY! no the other one. PETER SAYS. I CALLED YOU STUIPID! o...........thats it!!!
Peter Takes Out His Fists! Gabe Tries To Punch Him But Misses...Peter Tries To Punch Gabe But TFmel Tackles Him! What The Heck? STOP! ok ok we were just having a little fun right gabe Yea a LITTLE.
so what are you guys doing in the forest anyway. gabe says Well Heres The Story. FIVE MINUTES LATER! SO HEROBRINES BACK AND HE STOLL BOOM? Yep. THAT LITTLE! *beep* IT looks like you guys need a team and i'll be on it! WHAT? i dont want you on it. Peter Says. Yea Ya Do. No i Dont. Yea Ya Kinda Do. NO I DONT. Yea Ya Do. NO I DONT!!! Guys Really? fine i need a team. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH I LOVE YOU! dont get to close Dx. Later That Day! Well Its Night Now So At Night! Mmm Smores I KNOW RIGHT? xD . Hey Guys i Think i heard something SOUnded like a spider...THERE HAS NOT BEEN SPIDERS HERE IN MONTHS. SPIDER!!!!!!
Yay!! Gabe's in =D SPIDERS!!! D= Btw Peter just a small tip when writting. Try using these " " when someone's taking.like this "This story is awesome!" TFmel said =D It'll make it easier for people to read and know who's talking. Hope this helps ^-^ Can't wait for part three!!
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15 Aug, 2013, 11:00 am
Where Do You Think Herobrine Went? TFmel Asks i dont know hey maybe in went in the oak wood forest up there. YEA LETS GO! TFmel And Peter Run Into The Forest! Later That Day... i didnt know this forest was so big! Peter Says. im getting tired TFmel Says. Tired!!!??? WHA..... WHO SAID THAT!? peter says.
15 Aug, 2013, 11:09 am
The Person Jumps Outta The Tree. ITS ME GABE! Gabe! its u! TFmel Says. oh hey gabe. peter says.What The Heck Are You Doing In The Forest. TFmel Says. came to visit WitherVille. Gabe Says. Ok Gabesers Galleryia Lets Just Keep Walkin And No More Talkin Peter Says. Did.....You Just Call Me Gabesers Galleryia Gabe Says. YES PETER SAYS. ARE YOU CRAZY!? or just stuipid GABE SAYS. WHA.....YOU JUST CALL ME!? PETER SAYS. GUYS STOP. TFmel Says. NO. THE GUYS SAY. i called you CRAZY! no the other one. PETER SAYS. I CALLED YOU STUIPID! o...........thats it!!!
15 Aug, 2013, 11:13 am
Peter Takes Out His Fists! Gabe Tries To Punch Him But Misses...Peter Tries To Punch Gabe But TFmel Tackles Him! What The Heck? STOP! ok ok we were just having a little fun right gabe Yea a LITTLE.
15 Aug, 2013, 11:22 am
so what are you guys doing in the forest anyway. gabe says Well Heres The Story. FIVE MINUTES LATER! SO HEROBRINES BACK AND HE STOLL BOOM? Yep. THAT LITTLE! *beep* IT looks like you guys need a team and i'll be on it! WHAT? i dont want you on it. Peter Says. Yea Ya Do. No i Dont. Yea Ya Kinda Do. NO I DONT. Yea Ya Do. NO I DONT!!! Guys Really? fine i need a team. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH I LOVE YOU! dont get to close Dx. Later That Day! Well Its Night Now So At Night! Mmm Smores I KNOW RIGHT? xD . Hey Guys i Think i heard something SOUnded like a spider...THERE HAS NOT BEEN SPIDERS HERE IN MONTHS. SPIDER!!!!!!
15 Aug, 2013, 11:23 am
------End Of Chapter 2------
15 Aug, 2013, 11:55 am
Yay!! Gabe's in =D
SPIDERS!!! D=
Btw Peter just a small tip when writting. Try using these " " when someone's taking.like this "This story is awesome!" TFmel said =D
It'll make it easier for people to read and know who's talking. Hope this helps ^-^
Can't wait for part three!!
15 Aug, 2013, 3:12 pm
"THANKS FOR THE ADVICE" PETER SAID. :D
15 Aug, 2013, 4:00 pm
"Exactly!!" TFmel exclaimed happily seeing that her friend Peter had taken her advice =D
lol sry i'm a bit hyper =)
15 Aug, 2013, 6:56 pm
LOL Peter "Laughed Out Loud" "am i still doing it right?" Peter Asked Confused XD
15 Aug, 2013, 7:23 pm
"Yep" she answered =D
15 Aug, 2013, 7:32 pm
LOL Peter Laughed Out Loud :)
25 Aug, 2013, 12:29 pm
XD Im just like, "HI THERE PEEPUL!"
25 Aug, 2013, 12:31 pm
XD Me & Peter arnt best friends in the story it seems XD
07 Sep, 2013, 10:31 pm
lol yep looks that way XD
20 Jan, 2014, 3:12 pm
LOL, LOL, LLOOLL, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! :D