Whispers of the Broken
In this rp your character has been betrayed by either a trainer or another pokemon. So much so that they have lost the ability to trust and are beginning to lose their very sanity...
I will be using a character known as Veri, a young cubone whos mother died in the hands of humans...Team rocket. She was then taken by a grunt and trained. The grunt was cruel and volitial, and then she was seemingly ignored when the member of team rocket acquired a purrlion,(Continued below
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Comments
13 Aug, 2013, 2:10 am
Omg I have to be in! This is kinda like that creepypasta o.o
So...Im in :P
13 Aug, 2013, 2:12 am
i'll make a liepard named Scritch :)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:13 am
I'm in, if you'll have me :)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:15 am
i know XD i just love to rp and make new ocs even if i get rejected i had a good run right :)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:16 am
I would be so honored if i could be in. I love to RP x3
13 Aug, 2013, 2:17 am
so is it a try out?
13 Aug, 2013, 2:17 am
Oh sad...
13 Aug, 2013, 2:19 am
Raven is probably going psycho xD
13 Aug, 2013, 2:19 am
@Rain- lol x3
13 Aug, 2013, 2:21 am
I'd love to join this rp, if you would have me, ofcourse! I would be using Silhoutte ( my black and white jolteon ). Her story fits perfectly into this rp and it sounds perfectly fantastic! May I?
13 Aug, 2013, 2:21 am
Yea...If im in I definetly want to be a Houndoor to evolve :3
derp. :/
13 Aug, 2013, 2:22 am
XD @rain! lol
13 Aug, 2013, 2:24 am
The Purrlion mocked her, saying how weak she was, and how weak her mother was for being k!lled by team rocket...The feline pokemon would even steal Veri's meals. Veri, starved, broken, angry, tried to run away, but the Purrlion trapped her until the Grunt got there and demanded the Purrlion to attack "My pleasure Master!" She had purred as Veri cowered in horror.
That night Veri was left with scars all over her lower arms. (Not pictured here) She stopped eating, fighting, speaking...She felt dead, numb. She did not want to exsist...The other pokemon mocked her for being an orphan...Finally she snapped, sick of the t0rture and abuse. With a sickening crack her club slammed down on the Purrlion, leaving it like her mother...cold and lifeless...
When the Grunt found her, he tried to capture the cubone in her pokeball, but Veri smashed it to bits...The grunt let out a shriek and ran away "It's gone mad!"
Veri then dragged herself away from the city, amd regained her senses...Guilt surged through her body as she realized what terrible sin she had commited..."I'm....I'm a monster..." She whispered...Rain fell heavily upon her skin...As Veri grabbed her club and began to carve a heart into her chest..."Love me...Love me..." She whispered, then with a swift motion she crossed out the heart..."No one could love a monster..."
-End of Back story-
Please tell me which character you would like to use, and give me an rp sample...And use proper grammer! Paragraph form only!
13 Aug, 2013, 2:25 am
You must have good knowledge of the pokemon world! And don't be offended if your comment is deleted, I need to make room.
13 Aug, 2013, 2:26 am
I would use Fog for this, if you'd have me :)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:29 am
okay i'll make an oc named Scritch and at first her trainer loved her but then a shiny purlion came and captured her trainer's heart as soon as Scritch evolved she was put it the pc box for months then she snapped. (rp sample my next comment)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:31 am
Omg Flicca if you are accepted Vira would hate Scritch lol
13 Aug, 2013, 2:32 am
Hounddour
Female
Ill make up a name (dont ki.ll me ;w; ill use Cheza for now...)
Cheza walked throught the dark forest, shivering at the cold breeze that ruffled her pelt. She missed her pack...her mom, her brother...everybody. Cheza stopped at a steep trench and gazed down, Hoping tp find a way around. Chezz saw nothing but gray, endless waves rippling at the rocky bottom. She wanted to be home. Cheza closed her eyes for a brief moment, cherishing the old times she had. "I miss you, mom." She muttered. Cheza opened her eyes, got up and slowly walked away.
Hope im in :P
13 Aug, 2013, 2:32 am
(This will be a flashback)
A young evee with sky blue eyes bounced out of her home den, following her brothers and sisters. "Hey guys! Wait up!" She beamed. "Hey Fog, come up here!" She smiled at her red eyed brother and scrawled her way up the cliff. A mischevious gleam shone in his eyes and he suddenly shoved her off the shark-shaped cliff overlooking the ocean. She closed her eyes tightly as she sailed to the water. He looked over the edge, instantly regreting his decision. He bounded away from the cliff edge, fear in his eyes. She slammed into the water, the icy waves like cement. She sputtered as she attempted to stay afloat, sobbing the whole time. "Help me!" She cried, but no one came... She was alone...
13 Aug, 2013, 2:33 am
I'd love to enter with Duke! Here's a sample--
Duke's hind leg itched at his unnatural Zorua ear that had just recently been sewn onto his head. The seams were still uncomfortable. Suddenly, a door open and a blinding light flickered on, revealing the presence of the hell-spawn he was forced to call a master. His white lab coat was stained with the blood of another poor canine Pokemon, and a Houndoom paw was clenched within each of the human's hands. Duke's eyes widened with fright, as he new he was about to lose his natural forepaws. "No..." He breathed. "Oh Duuuukeyyy! I've got a new improvement for you!" The human sang-his voice eerily jovial. Duke saw the door behind the human closing rapidly, and bolted for it, streaking between the person's legs. Before Duke knew it, he was out in the open, tearing through the forest that surrounded the abandoned insane asylum that kept him trapped for over a year. "Never will I trust another living being..." Duke panted, still running for his life.
13 Aug, 2013, 2:34 am
Raven, ever since that breakdown in my rp...I have studied pokemon ;w; hoping to be a better rper....I know ALOT more xD thankyou for that ;w;
13 Aug, 2013, 2:35 am
Scritch stared with icy cold eyes at the capsule that incased her. She hissed and attacked it furiously but it was a master's ball so it was unescape able. She paced back and forth then she heard the pc box beep "yes" she hissed grimly as the trainer picked her but the trainer traded her to an old coot. "he never loved me" she snarled her teeth barred. Then the man let her out "that was your mistake" she hissed. She turned around and attacked him, blood splattered on her coat, matting it to her dry cold skin. "yes" she cackled creepily "this is only the start" she smiled grimly
13 Aug, 2013, 2:38 am
(I know to much about pokemon... But it's to awesome to not know about XD)
13 Aug, 2013, 2:38 am
hopefully you like it raven i worked hard
13 Aug, 2013, 2:43 am
i would like to use sui,cide. but if you dont want a suicune in i could always use my vaporeon...which would you prefer cause i know many people dont like legendaries though she isnt op or strong at all..
13 Aug, 2013, 2:44 am
( I'm using Silhouette for this ) Night. The forest was dark, quiet, calm. Crickets chirped. Varios Normle type pokemon settled into their nests and holes. It was late. The moon rose. A breeze rustled to cool green grass. Something moved. Something breathed. Something sniffed. Something ran. It's mane body was a streak of white in the night. The black sp'ikey mane a rear fur stood out among the white of it's body and the green of the grass. Two dia'moned-shaped ears perked up, listening as the wind howled through them. Black eyes darted from one sight to another. Soft paws flew across the ground. It was a jolteon. It was an outcast. It was Silhouette. She skidded to a halt, leaving scr'ape marks in the firm dirt beneath her light paws. " Sil must escape! Sil must escape! Sil must escape ," she kept repeating, her nose high in the air, her ears flicking wildly. Her head sn'apped to one side. " Silhouette must flee that way! " Sil bolted, running ever faster. Her heart raced. Her pulse quickened. Her fur stood on end. It was coming! She knew it was coming! She could sence that it was coming! She could hear it! The pokemon raced up tree, pa'nick in her dark eyes. Silhouette clawed her way to the top of the emmense fur tree, her sharp claws digging into it's hard side. Sap oozed slowlu onto her delicate paws, but she didn't notice. The jolteon eventualy, thankfully, amazingly hopped onto the very top of the fur. Sje scanned the area, her nose twitching from side to side . . . " Nothing? . . . " " RAAAAAWWRRR!!! "
13 Aug, 2013, 2:48 am
This is creepy...My 3ds is only focused on the words e.e
ima restart it....o.o
13 Aug, 2013, 2:54 am
(Character: Rajha
Species: Poocheyena)
Rajha's eyes slowly opened to a haze of darkness. She couldn't recall what had happened, or why. Her vision was pure black, and she could hear a faint screech of metal in the vicinity. Trying to see where she was, she moved her paw to feel, to realize her paws were shackeled to the cold, steel floor. Her claws scraped the Floor, causing an ear ringing shrill from the enclosure. Rajha's mouth was clamped, so she could only struggle. Her body was stiff and sore, and her stomach was a snake- constricting her in knots, from repetitive hungry nights... Her only choice was to scream, even if she couldn't move her mouth.
Abruptly, a tall Team Magma grunt turned on the lights. 'Hush you little Varmin! Make any more rustle, and I'll beat you with my metal rod!' Frightened, Rajha yelped. 'What was that? Was that a peep?' He threatened the Iron bar above her cage. Rajha felt dizzy, and felt something in the air she couldn't describe... but she was determined to find out what it was...
Hope you enjoy! It would be so cool to be in!
13 Aug, 2013, 2:57 am
ugg i probably wont get in but im proud of my sample
13 Aug, 2013, 2:58 am
i'll join my rp will be about a Quilava named Meko.
13 Aug, 2013, 3:06 am
lol Flicca you are in x)
13 Aug, 2013, 3:08 am
heres my sample, from sui,cides past.
Thick trees were now a blurred wall of brown as she ran. her paws protested at the speed she was going but the suicune didnt care anymore, she had to keep going until she was far away from her parents and siblings and everyone who had taunted, bullied and attacked her. The moon was a pallid white despite being full. it matched the crescent bore upon her cheek /freak!/ the words of a psychic legendary shot at her, forcing the suicune to stumble and fall. the ground met her and dirt, bark and leaves came up in a flurry. She curled up right there not wanting to go any fa,rther, she had past the barrier and was now in the realm of normal pokemon and not of legendaries. Now she didnt know what to do. No one wanted her, No one loved her, She was a freak. A mistake. Maybe her name wasnt an accident.
she howled into the night, letting out a mournful, cry of notes, tears raining down upon her paws, soaking the grass.
this, was insanity
13 Aug, 2013, 3:11 am
Woah. Wolf Soul's RP, is like, Woah. 0.0 *high-five bruh!*
13 Aug, 2013, 3:11 am
lol sorry Raven...I didnt show Chezza's history :c ... Ill make it xP brb (next comment)
13 Aug, 2013, 3:12 am
ok here it goes.
Meko a broken Quilava was stolen from her trainer by Team Rocket and tested on. She meet a male Quilava and fell in love with him, but Team Rocket saw them together and saw they where happy. They where upset with them and punished Meko dut not the other they k.lled him then put his body in a pokeball and then droped it in the ocean. Meko was left to suffer here flames turned grey and her pelt turned black and blood red. she went crazy and evil, she k.lled the grunts that came in her way. she was let go by the Team and sent to the wild. but that was a bad mistake she now huntes for the one who k.lled her only love.
i know it's really dark. :T
13 Aug, 2013, 3:16 am
Dang...I'm not gonna make it with ya'll's entries :[
13 Aug, 2013, 3:22 am
really clementinw? ^^' thanks! *high fives back*
13 Aug, 2013, 3:26 am
Moonlight lit the clearing, Chezza was on a hill with her trainer. She looked up at the sky, speckled with stars. Chezza turned to her owner, smiling. Chezza's owner smiled back, only to find a scared, wide eyed Chezza. All pf a sudden Chezza saw a Purrloin jump out of the bushes, snarling viciously. Chezza followed her trainers command to use Tackle, she was no match for the purrloin. The bushes shook again and two people stepped out. Chezza stared in horror as they dashed straight for her. She dodged and ran beside her owner. The wind started blowing viscously and knocked her off her feet. Winded, she got up and quickly returned to battling. She missed as the purrlion scratched her ear, leaving a V shape. Her trainer was captured and thrown in a sack, constantly being beaten. As her attention was focused on her trainer, the purrloin bit her neck and shook her vio.lently. Chezza was weak, but she kept pushing. She ran, avoiding the fight and hoping to escape. Her trainer was gone, possibly dead and all she could do was run. She ran until she saw the sun rise, panting she hid under a rocky overhang and tried to sleep. Chezza's disturbing thoughts finally drifted away and she let her fatigue engulf her.
there, her past o.o
13 Aug, 2013, 3:27 am
Oh! I forgot Rajha's backstory!-
Rajha lived in a cozy, rugged house on the Coast of an Ocean. Every day she got stunning views of glimmery sunlight cascading over the horizon. But, her life wasn't always so tranquill. As a pup, Rajha got tons of abuse at her first home. Her mom Mighteyena, Grunge, would mistreat her, and nothing Rajha did was good enough. So, one day, she took off running over the hills, and into a car ditch. Rajha lived in that ditch, only feeding of tiny Pecha and Bluk Berries she found on tiny shrubs. One sunny morning, two aspiring Pokemon Trainers (named Xander and Sheiyla) found Rajha, and took her home to their house. Rajha gained their trust over time, and you could feel the love in the air. Rajha was their pride and joy.
But one eerie evening, Team Magma Grunts had broken into their home, k.illed Xander and Sheiyla, and made off like the bandits they were, Rajha in their hands. They drugged her up on Tranquillizers, and threw her in a cellar, leaving her to be a prison puppet...
13 Aug, 2013, 3:30 am
Whoo lavendertown syndrome my fav creepypasta. hey raven can u draw jeff :3
13 Aug, 2013, 3:50 am
Violet Female Liepard. Violet is a pretty Liepard. Her ex-trainer trained her to think only about her vanity for she was a pokémon who was only good for musicals. Her trainer found a Sylveon who was prettier than Violet was and discarded Violet without a second thought. Since then, she has struggled to maintain her lushness and polish and therefor haven't had time for food or water. She slowly became insane about her vanity and nothing else. She sees hallucinations mocking her ugliness...... Yep... Hope that cuts it.
13 Aug, 2013, 4:11 am
Love the picture!! I don't have a pokemon oc... Oh well have fun rp-ing! :D
13 Aug, 2013, 6:15 am
i know! all of the people who didn't get in we could make a nother rp together :D
15 Aug, 2013, 2:55 am
That is so cool and sad at same time! My pokemon oc (havent drawn yet) is a Mew, mostly in Eevee form, named of course Usagi, who grew up in the wild and hasnt met any humans yet but tries. She was betrayed by her soul mate, Damian, when she caught him with another. She still has major trust issues and is always alone, except from time to time youll see her with her best friend in whole wide world. Her name is Spi.ke but she has a trainer and tries to get Usagi to trust him and join her. ^_^
27 Aug, 2013, 1:59 am
I want in! Heres my sample:
Flaeron
Girl
Age: Ten
27 Aug, 2013, 2:14 am
Chirei waited at the doorstep once again, waiting for her master to come. She'd been waiting five years for him to return, yet he never did. But she summoned her hope and kept waiting. But he never came back. So when her hope died down, she decided to run away. Cherei ran through the dangers of the city and ran to the forest. But before that, Cherei left a note, saying,
"I never gave up."
27 Aug, 2013, 2:19 am
Like it? I know its short, but rps are awesome
01 Apr, 2025, 2:53 am
WOW These comments are very long also this is a very sad story i love cubone :(