XC by AcidWolf

As you all know I dont draw humans often, if ever. Im trying to learn but I just can't! If anyone could please critique this and tell me whats wrong with it and how I could improve I would apriciate it. This is probbaly the best human ive drawn but im still not happy with it. Any sugestions?

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
10 Aug, 2013, 12:05 am
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BlueJayfeathers

10 Aug, 2013, 12:07 am

It looks perfect, you did well :)

magicspell

10 Aug, 2013, 12:11 am

This is really really good u v u If you are going for a cartoony style this is perfect. If you want it to be a more realistic-y cartoon you should make the nose and eyebrows bigger and make the eyes smaller. But it looks fantastic as it is, and I don't think you should change anything ^^

AlwaysLive

10 Aug, 2013, 12:12 am

i do draw humans, so here is some cunstructive critique:
the head shouldn't be too big. the shoulders should well expand pass the earlobs. the hight of the head should be large. when drawing hair, don't be afraid to add detail. it shouldnt look like 5 locks of hair, unless completely intended. and always make the chin soft. you dont want the lines too sharp or else it'll look completely fake, even if its a cartoon.
hope that helps! :)

AlwaysLive

10 Aug, 2013, 12:13 am

height of head should NOT be too large***

PegaseGamerish

10 Aug, 2013, 12:13 am

i find it butiful...i hate nothing in this o3o its amazingly nice!

Oodles of DoodlesC

10 Aug, 2013, 12:41 am

I think this looks great if you are going for more of a chibi style! The placement/anatomy looks good. If you want it more realistic make the chin ever so slightly bigger, make the nose closer to the mouth but not too much, make the eyes and mouth a lot smaller. The shoulders look very chibi too, just make them larger and to prevent anything from being too big or too small, try sketching people's faces and look at yourself in the mirror :) Remember, practice makes perfect, you really can't hear that enough XD

NioXoiN

10 Aug, 2013, 12:43 am

^^^what livelife said^^^

CutieBeast

10 Aug, 2013, 1:28 am

This looks adorable! If you're going for the chibi look it's perfect and it's 100 times better than how I draw people

Caracal-Bear

10 Aug, 2013, 1:48 am

Whats wrong with it?
absolutely nothing.

jwolf4444

10 Aug, 2013, 1:49 am

Oh wow this is amazing Acid!
Do you think you can enter my contest? The cover of it is purple and black. :)

Plagued Pride

10 Aug, 2013, 2:06 am

for a cartoon like style like this is, its wonderful! :D and for more realalistic i suggest the eyebrows be a tad bigger and the shoulders should be a little wider. but it dose look absolutely splendid as it is :D

wolf girl

10 Aug, 2013, 3:12 am

Chibi Acid equals Epicness!

Emaginary

10 Aug, 2013, 4:42 am

i dont see anything wrong, and im not just being nice, i seriously dont see any errors

StreetJazz

12 Aug, 2013, 9:01 am

If that OC looks anything like you,you are cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!

monster224

28 Aug, 2013, 2:38 pm

it looks really good, Acid.

DJ Party

27 Nov, 2013, 8:00 pm

I agree with that guy ^

evilskull3

26 Sep, 2014, 1:17 pm

that's awesome! :D

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