hm, may as well starts a story here while i have a chance.
As a young eevee, Dusk was always had a spark of curiousity at new things. He went to a cave, wich he had no recordance of its name, wich was home to a very larg Druddigon. As he explored the caves many wonders, the Druddigon laid in the darkness, waiting to strike. Dusk stumbled upon a small stone, known as Saphire, he picked it up and began to leave when the Druddigon came between him. " Get out now before i kick you out myself puny brat! " it said. "B-but..." Dusk stuttered, taking a step back. The Dusk realized, this was no ordinary Druddigon, it was the one that took his parents away from him. A surge of anger and revenge burst through Dusk. " but..i'm not going to" Dusk scoffed. " Oh really then?" the Druddigon saod, before Dusk could respond he charged a dragon claw right across Dusk's left eye, leaving a large deep gash straight to his skull. In fustration Dusk pounced onto the Druddigon, digging into his neck with his fangs, ignoring the Druddigons ability Rough Skin, and stayed there till no pulse was felt. At his realization of what he has done, he took his mouth off, and ran out of the cave into the moonlight. Then he glowed a whitish color, and once it faded he was an umbreon. At the moment the evolution stopped, a large net covered Dusk, and he blacked out. At the moment Dusk awoke, he was looking in a green liquid, he saw wires stretching all around him. he noticed his paws and saw dimly gray glowing rings around them. startled he began pawing the green substance, a large beeping in the background. Fustrated and frightened he let out a pulse of pure darkness at the glass containing him and it sha.ttered. He flowed out. 'run' he said in his mind, and he dashed out an open window. He continues running as far as possible, as soon he collapsed near a pond. He dragged himself near it and looked into the reflection of the water. "arceus..." he whispered to himself as he discovered his new form.
He looked closer into the reflection. he twitched his ears showing the two gray rings around them, he looked at the markings on his shoulders and hips, showing diamond-like figures on them, when they're supposed to be oval shaped. his tail had three rings he noticed, and his fangs, they looked sharpened and ready to kiII. his eyes glowed too, a deep crimson. "what have i become...." he said to himself. Soon a large rush of energy overcame him and he began running, running to something he didnt know would change him forever.
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31 Jul, 2013, 8:19 pm
he should be your pokasona ^-^
(a pokasona is a pokemon you make to represent yourself ^-^)
31 Jul, 2013, 8:32 pm
hm, may as well starts a story here while i have a chance.
As a young eevee, Dusk was always had a spark of curiousity at new things. He went to a cave, wich he had no recordance of its name, wich was home to a very larg Druddigon. As he explored the caves many wonders, the Druddigon laid in the darkness, waiting to strike. Dusk stumbled upon a small stone, known as Saphire, he picked it up and began to leave when the Druddigon came between him. " Get out now before i kick you out myself puny brat! " it said. "B-but..." Dusk stuttered, taking a step back. The Dusk realized, this was no ordinary Druddigon, it was the one that took his parents away from him. A surge of anger and revenge burst through Dusk. " but..i'm not going to" Dusk scoffed. " Oh really then?" the Druddigon saod, before Dusk could respond he charged a dragon claw right across Dusk's left eye, leaving a large deep gash straight to his skull. In fustration Dusk pounced onto the Druddigon, digging into his neck with his fangs, ignoring the Druddigons ability Rough Skin, and stayed there till no pulse was felt. At his realization of what he has done, he took his mouth off, and ran out of the cave into the moonlight. Then he glowed a whitish color, and once it faded he was an umbreon. At the moment the evolution stopped, a large net covered Dusk, and he blacked out.
At the moment Dusk awoke, he was looking in a green liquid, he saw wires stretching all around him. he noticed his paws and saw dimly gray glowing rings around them. startled he began pawing the green substance, a large beeping in the background. Fustrated and frightened he let out a pulse of pure darkness at the glass containing him and it sha.ttered. He flowed out. 'run' he said in his mind, and he dashed out an open window.
He continues running as far as possible, as soon he collapsed near a pond. He dragged himself near it and looked into the reflection of the water. "arceus..." he whispered to himself as he discovered his new form.
31 Jul, 2013, 8:36 pm
He looked closer into the reflection. he twitched his ears showing the two gray rings around them, he looked at the markings on his shoulders and hips, showing diamond-like figures on them, when they're supposed to be oval shaped. his tail had three rings he noticed, and his fangs, they looked sharpened and ready to kiII. his eyes glowed too, a deep crimson. "what have i become...." he said to himself. Soon a large rush of energy overcame him and he began running, running to something he didnt know would change him forever.
31 Jul, 2013, 8:45 pm
(to be continued in a million years probably...)
31 Jul, 2013, 8:47 pm
oh and Grin, is this allowed???
31 Jul, 2013, 9:02 pm
bleh..this is horrible on closer insepection...
31 Jul, 2013, 9:37 pm
Yup. GRINNY SEAL OF APPROVAL AND ALL THAT JAZZ!
31 Jul, 2013, 9:59 pm
yesh :3