TiM Chapter 2 by petetownshends

CHAPTER WILL BE IN COMMENTS! #mlp #fanfic #fanfiction #crossover #victorystar #TiM #MLFTiM #TeamworkIsMagic #TiMChapter2
Notes: None, really. :p This contains some mild language, and some v!olence. Reader's discretion is advised. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do not comment before I post this. Comment when it's all typed up. .w.b

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26 Jul, 2013, 3:46 am
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petetownshends

26 Jul, 2013, 4:05 am

For a few hours, Icicle Breeze was resting to calm herself down, and to gain energy. Suddenly, she was awoken by the train's whistle. "Wha...?" She shook her head in confusion. "This is your stop, right?" The male pony asked. "Yes. Let me grab my bags." Icicle Breeze carried all of her bags out of the train. She then waved goodbye to the male pony. The train door closed, then started to move slowly, and then to its regular speed. Icicle Breeze sighed. "Time to open the envelope." She said in a somewhat suprised voice. She opened the envelope. She carefully read the letter until she read the sentence, 'You are on team RED.' She gave out a small squeal and opened the suitcase which contained her outfit. Her outfit was a saddlebag with an emblem on both bags, which was her cutie mark. The bag was professionally made by one of her friends, whose name is Rarity. She quickly put on her saddlebag, suddenly noticing something sticking out of one of the bags. There was a map to lead to the 2fort locker room. "2fort? That's what this place is called-AH!" Icicle Breeze heard gunfires from far behind. "Oh, that was from...there..." Icicle Breeze felt a shiver down her back. She then looked at the map and carefully analyzed it. "Hm! Seems simple." She began to run at a steady speed, map in between her mouth. After countless times of being startled by screams of, 'Medic!', sounds of rockets, gunfires, and remarks of, "Well, I'm off to see your mother!", she finally made it to the locker room.

OK THAT'S ENOUGH WRITING. I'll continue tomorrow. Try not to comment as much tho. <:/
I already wrote the finished one on my iPod, FYI.

1quire

26 Jul, 2013, 4:43 am

:D I enjoyed this chapter too! Great work and keep it up! /)

-Super Blast-

26 Jul, 2013, 8:30 am

Spy: MEDIC!
Medic: Yes?
Spy: Slap my hand.
Medic NO!
Spy: ;(

petetownshends

26 Jul, 2013, 4:06 pm

chapter cont.

As she found a locker to put her stuff in, she realized there was a pink floral purse. Icicle Breeze squinted, as if she were looking at something with stupidity. "What is this purse doing here-" She was then startled by footsteps, then a voice. "Dam.mit. Where's my freakin' scattergun?" Icicle Breeze was too frightened to move. "God, aren't I lucky? 'Yittle Twinkle Toes lost his wittle scattergun, boo, hoo, hoo!'" This voice was coming closer. "I gotta hide!" Icicle Breeze quickly found a very crammed place to hide. The voice then became a shadow, then a human man. He began to rummage around, not noticing the pegasus hiding in a closed space. The human, who had a Boston accent, let out a sigh of irritation. "Well, I'm s.crewed. Might as well use my other godda.mn weapons..." His voice trailed off as he walked out of the locker room. "Phew. That was close." Icicle Breeze then looked to her right. There was a gun. The gun the human was talking about before. "A scattergun..." Icicle Breeze looked at it in awe.

THESE ARE NOT MULTIPLE CHAPTERS! I'm writing this in parts.

Robotic_Randomness

26 Jul, 2013, 6:39 pm

Your VIP! Great parts so far :)

petetownshends

29 Jul, 2013, 5:57 pm

chapter cont.

"I'll be needing this!" Icicle Breeze slipped it in her saddlebag, and ran out of the locker room. Soon she had made it out on to the battlefield. She then began to run to find a place to hide. "I assume the 'flag' is the 'suitcase', or 'intelligence', and I have to get team BLU's intelligence! Yes! I'm actually smart for once." Stealthily, Icicle Breeze grabbed the scattergun out of her saddlebag and started to take flight into the air. As she looked below, she took a quick glance at the room where the intelligence was kept, which was on team BLU's side. "On my way! On my way!" She said to herself. She then flew down at full speed, only a foot close to the ground. She was getting closer to the intelligence, but before she flew in, she saw something. "Oh snap..." Her voice trailed off. She didn't know what to do.

"What do I do-" She cut herself off. All she did was put away her scattergun in fear. She heard a scream from about a mile behind. She then saw a knife on the floor. It was there ever since she had got into the room where the intel was kept. "Is that a butterfly knife?" She carefully put the blood covered knife with her mouth and put it in one of the saddlebags. "Now my only question is...how do I get the intelligence?"

I'll finish this again, later.

petetownshends

07 Sep, 2013, 3:25 am

YAY I'M CONTINUING IT. :D

Icicle Breeze didn't have time to hesitate. She had to think fast. She then started to fly at full speed. Snow was falling out of her wings. She then nose dived to the intel and grabbed it. She then flew out, leaving a trail of snow behind her. "Hmm. I think I made it more complicated than it should have-" Suddenly, an intercom blurted, "The RED team has taken the intelligence!" "Bloody hell! Whot is that?" An Australian on team BLU cried in dismay. "What the hell was that crap? It has the intel!" The same person that Icicle encountered earlier yelled as he saw it from team RED territory. "Crap!" Icicle whispered.

eh it's not much, but still. :p

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