Now THIS will be a grand tale! The picture is completely magnificent! The difference between his the past and present self is dramatic!

Lucas was a young boy at the age of 15, who lived in a nice house with a nice family. He was an only child and had a very small family who didn't come to visite much. He did well in school, and was very smart, but had only a few friends. He was considered very kind by many and he was very well behaved, always doing what he was told.
On a cloudy Wenesday morning Lucas was prepairing to go to school, puting on his favorite white hoody with 2 black stripes on each sleeve, light tan shorts and a pair of black tennis shoes.
His day went on as usual, the classes were slow and boreing and the clocks refused to speed up the time.
He sat quietly listening to lectures till the end of the day.
It was getting dark as he walked home and the strong, chilled wind blew at Lucas relentlessly causing his face to become numb.
As he was reaching his neighborhood he spoted a strange black van parked near the edge of the woods that surrounded his small town.
"Whats that doing there" he thought to himself as he began to get closer.
The car was a large black van with the letters V.I painted in white on the side.
Just as Lucas was about to turn into his nieghborhood, a loud metalic growl came from behind of him and he was about to turn around to investigate when a large black creature attacked him from behind.-End of part one :) I'll wright more later.

that was amazing! i love this painting and that story!

Part 2-
Lucas had no time to react as the dog like creature latched its razor sharp talons into his face and draged downward, tearing his cheaks and puncturing his right eye causing him to be blinded by blood.
He tried to run but as he turned to do so more and more dogs came out of seemingly no whereand circled him with a simphony of metalic barks and growls. With his now useless eye and the burning pain in his face he couldn't move, then a loud pop was heard from the distance before he felt a shrap object pierce his neck causing him to pass out.
When Lucas awoke he was straped down to what seemed to be a hospital bed.
At first he thought someone must have found him and called an ambulence, but his realief began to give way to panick as he took some time to notice his surroundings.
He was in a white room empty exept for the heart moniter he was hooked up to, his face was burning like nothing Lucas had ever felt before and he could feel his warm blood drip down his badly torn, right half of his face.
Then Lucas heard something that sounded like a door being opened. He tried as his best to turn his head toward the noise, but the restraints kept him from moving.
A man in a white lab coat came into the room, waled up to the bed and looked down at the bleeding boy.
"I see your awake" he said in a mocking tone.
"My name is Dr.Canis, and i'll be incharge of our little expeiriment".
"Expieriment?!" Lucas managed to choke out.
"What 'expieriment'? Where am I?"
" I know you must be vary confused right now, and i understand, but that feeling will go away very soon" Dr. Canis said in a low tone.
- End of part 2 :D

OH MY GLOB O_O NEED... TO... READ... MORE! O_e So fuc'king awesome! And he's so cute too! >//w//<

Part3-
Dr. Canis made a gesture to the figures in the windows obove them and 2 orderlies of sorts came in with stitching supplies, gause, and a saringe, a really big saringe.
The first orderlie held him down as the second injected the clear fluid into his IV. From what Lucas could read from the lable it was a strong sedative, or sleeping tonic as the lable read.
He felt the cold liquid flow into his arm before passing out again.
Lucas awoke again, this time there was no pain in his face, although he felt a tight sensation under his left eye. "probably stitches" he thought.
Apon remembering where he was he began to panic again, as he tried to struggle he discovered that he could see out of his once mutalated right eye.
It didn't matter anyway, the drugs they gave him caused his depth perseption to be blurred.
At that moment Lucas heard the door open again. Dr. Canis walked into the room holding a clipboard in his hand and a pen.
"So, how are you feeling?" He asked in a fake joyful tone.
"Like sh!t..."
Lucas spat.
" Oh, come now..its not that bad. Your face feels better now right? I'm truly sorry for the way the Trackers treated you, but they have'nt collected anyntest subjects in a while and probably got exited" Dr.Canis exclamed in a dry tone.
"Test subject?! I am no ones test subject!"
Lucas said in a panicked tone.
" You've not answered any of my questions, Where am I, What am I doing here, and What do you plan on doing to me...and..why me.."
He inquired in vien for the doctor only smiled and said-
"We chose you because your in perfect shape, your mind is stable, and you have a large of mental striength. You also just happened to walk right up to us, it was very convienient" The doctor chuckled
"As for what we'er going to do to you, its quite simple. We'er going to test some DNA here and there and maby if you hold out, we'll try boimechanics. We already gave you that new eye."
Lucas could only law speachless as the doctor held up a mirror to his face revealing

^Ha me too >w< i can't look away from it...

^ His horribly torn face and a horrid looking red iris surrounded in black with a white pupile that was his "new eye"
Lucas could only stare at his reflection as the doctor took notes and grinned a sligh grin at the boy on the bed. End of part 3

Omg the part when he injected the cold liquid into him O_e omg i could feel it >_<'

Dam it! it just earased a paragraph i was working on! DX<

This characters history is unbelievably amazing!!!

After my very epic rage quite moment here is part 4 X)
Dr.Canis once again gestured to the figures in the observation widows and jst as befor 2 orderloes came down, one with a seringe and the other to hold Lucas down in case of a struggle.
But this time the seringe held a very different liquid.
It was a thick clear blue liquid, and even though it would ususlly feel painful due to how thick and cold it was Lucas felt no pain exept for the slight pinch of the needle piercing his skin.
3 more doctors with clipbaords came down and he could make out the taller of the 3 say
"it should start any second now".
Lucas was about to question him when he was nearly sent into shock as his body siesed in pain.
Lucas cried out as the doctors watched him writh and struggle.
He grit his teeth and grpped the leathery fabric covering the bed he was strapped to.
What was only about a minute felt like an eternity as the pain became nearly unbarable.
Then just as suddenly as it began the pain went awayand left Lucas laying there trembling and breathing heavily on the bed.
The doctors nodded aprovingly to one another and the tallest walked up to Lucas and said "you did well"
Before injecting him with yet another sedative and causing him to black out once again.
End of part 4 :P

dun dun duuuuuunnn

Thanks! ^^
Oh, and you know hoe i said the story would be short? Yeeeaaah....well i lied X3

I hate it when i spell sh!t wrong though >XC

Your art is amazing... :0

need moooore...story.....

omg omg omg! Ono i fuc'king love the story so far! OMG!

;v; heheh thx uuu xD

oh fuuuu i´m too lazy to read the story eAe i´ll read it after i´ll wake up xDD

luscence iz awesome c: cute eyes xDDDD yesh cute.

Which version of him? XD Thanks by the way :D

Yah, I just took a break :)
It would be rude to leave it there just like that XP

After my computer break we continue Xb
Beginning of part 5-
When Lucas awoke he was in a different room. It looked like one of those rooms they take you to recover from a surgery.
This room had a large window and he wasn't strapped down anymore.
Lucas looked out the window at the clear night sky, the moon cast a black sillouette over the vast wilderness below.
"Its night time? but then how long have i been here, and where is 'here'?" He inquired to himself.
Even though the room must have been pitch black he could see very clearly in the dark.
Almost to clearly.
Lucas then noticed that there was a mirror on the wall opposite of his bed.
He could only fiently see his reflection and desided to turn on the small lamp on the nightstand next to the bed to get a better look.
Opon turning the light on however nearly blinded him, as dim as the light was it singed his somehow overly sensitive eyes.
To his supprise however his eyes adjusted almost instently to the light and he was able to see himself in the mirror.
Lucas gasped at what he saw, the figure in the mirror looked nothing like him.
His skin was an eerie, pale gray and his hair that was once a golden brown was now white and silver with only patches of its original color remaining.
But what supprised the young boy the most were his eyes.
The only good eye he had left was drained of its honest blue color and was now white as snow and was surrounded in a dark black, blue color instead of the normal white of the eye.
He could only stare at the abnormal reflection that matched his gaze.
The boys breathing began to speed up, his body aced with a soreness he had never felt before.
Someone must have been watching because just when Lucas was about to loose the little sanity he had left a cold liquid filled his IV that was still strapped into his arm and he passed out once again.
End of part5
Stay online because theres more to come :)

Poor guy no wonder he so crazy are u going to continue this story and make it like a comic book like others here on colors or tell the whole story on this on pic cuz i would love to c a graphic novel kind of thing this is so awsome im hooked

oops ment one pic :p

I can'y do comic strips for some reason, so i'm just going to tell his story on here :)

Besides even if i tried to draw a graphic novel style of this, it would take way too long Xb

true thanks for responding I know lots of peps have said this already but THIS STORY IS AWSOME

Y U STOP TELLING MEH STORY. -_-
NOW IM BORED D:.
eh.

Don't push me i'm thinking, this story is an accumulation of bits and pieces you know DX<
Ok Beginning of part 6-
Lucas awoke in the room once again, and was beginning to get anoyed at all the sedation they were useing on him.
He stared once again at his reflection, wanting nothing to be back home, normal again.
Lucas was still under the affects of the drug and hadn't noticed Dr.Canis step into the room.
"Well good morning Lucas, did you sleep well?"
He asked with that plastic smile.
"You b.astard! What the h.ell did you do to me!?!"
Lucas demanded.
"If you would wait i was getting to that" Dr.Canis said, anoyed.
"We gave you a sertain DNA substance we created that alters the human senses".
"Human...senses"? Lucas choked
"Yes, you already seemed to notice how your eyes could see in complete darkness last night, yes?" Dr.Canis noted
Lcas glanced at his eyes in the mirror once more and flinched at his own cold gaze.
Dr.Canis chuckled
"I wasn't expecting your hair and skin to change color like that though, that was an extra i guess".
"Extra..?"
Lucas asked
"Yes, you see your skin, even though its alot stronger now, we also gave you some very special healing abilities as well".
He exclaimed.
Lucas looked down at the gray, blue skin on his hands and rubed them together feeling no difference.
"What is the purpose of this?"
Lucas asked.
"The purpose of this, is to expieriment, and see what happens.
If you live then its a win for us and for you too, if you die, we find someone else".
He smiled a dry, cold smile as he said those words.
Lucas was speachless at the mad scientist.
"So,...What now?"
Lucas asked
"Oh, just one last thing...A surgery, a very delecate surgery".
Dr.Canis said in a low, dark, and cold tone.
So cold.
End of part-5 :3
Can you guess what happens next? >:)

They are going to replace his arms and legs with mechanical shi't! O_O OH NUUU! D:

^ Yah, X3 Oh, and Alice, its only his arms and hands >X3

oh really? oops X)

aww thx c:

omg dat story is so awesome *o*

OMG! amazing! :D

This is freaking lovely!

EERGGBFASFKKOPINBC! IT EARASED MY ENTIRE PARAGRAPH! WTF! DX<

IT F.UCKING DID IT AGAIN! AWVBDBHHJJIJK:LJGGDGDSSTTJ,HNNNMK,KKK,*explodes and dies* XUX"

lol X3

^ Sc.rew you....DX
Its not funny thats the second time it earased my very long paragraph DX<

Fine, but if this fails its the last try for tonight DX
Part7
Lucas was about to ask the doctor more questions when he then steped out of the room.
A few minutes later 2 more orderlies came in and just like the last few times the first held him while the second injected him with a sedative. This sedative was different however. It was the kind that alowed you to stay awake. Although his his lack of visibillity and depth perseption made it hard to tell where Lucas was he could tell he was now in a surgical lab.
The doctors proceeded to inject countless unknown liquids into his IV. The last of which was a numbing sedative, which took affect in seconds as both his arms and shoulders went completely numb, and Lucas feel deep into sleep.
Lucas reawoke in his recovery room, it was daylight and the sun warmed the room with rays too pleasant for the currant sittuation.
As Lucas reached to adjust his covers, he was suppriesd to hear a soft clicking sound comming from his arms.
Apon looking down, to his upmost shock and horror, his original arms weren't there anymore. They had been replaced with accurate and intricately desinged biomechanical replacements.
End of part 7
To tierd to write any more. -_-''

How dare u ask da question!?
D:l

I'm sorry, i got tired because my other tries got erased and the one you read was my fourth try, and it was 1:00 am -_-''

And please dont push me to write, of caurse i made my character and his story up, but seriously, you try wrighting a long biohist for your own character in detail D:<

I stay up till 4. you went to bed early. l:3

^ Yah, she understands, shes just overly humerous :)

btw it has taken me four months to perfect Luscence's history, so it would make sense, and one month to make the starting bits and pieces :)

Eh. :3 okay! l:3

Part8 -_-'
Lucas just stat in shock and stared at the whire and metal appendages that were his new arms. The muscles were made of thick bundles of whire and tenced as he moved and his fingers, are whhat scared him most of all.
Each one was jointed combination of 2 glass seringes that each held either a medicine, toxin or deadly chemical. Such as the sulfieric acid that was held in the pointer "finger" of his right hand.
The needles were the most horrific that Lucas had ever seen, razor sh.arp with se.rated edges, and were retractable and long.
At that moment, Canis walked into the room.
"So how do you like them, your arms?" He mocked
"You....F.ucking...B.astard!" Lucas c.ursed at the doctor
"Why have you done this to me?!" He demanded
"I already told you." the doctor replied calmly
" We'er just testing things on you. You're the only one to survive the surgery so far."
Canis added with a cold smile.
Lucas felt light headed, his rage toward the doctor began to biuld as the little sanity he had left fleeted him, and with one swift move st.abed the needles into the doctores neck and dragged downward, des.imbowling him.
End of part 8
Its getting good X3

I had to make it shorter due to the fear of it being erased again D:

^ >X3

such a cute story l:3

omfg! Lucas i NOT amused! XD awesome story so far! X3

^ Thanks, it getting hard though since the comments section is being a little sh!t and erasing my paragraphs DX<

^Ikr! XD if it was a living thing, it would'nt be alive any more >:)

You hav to go on the browser to see all coments l:3

Meh, it happened to me a couples times too... it sucks! DX Good luck with part 9 though, i can't wait!

Dragony thats not what i mean XC
It erases the paragraph right after i type it :/

You can probably guess what just happened -_-''

^Your not the first to find my character cute X3

Oh no she's not the first one... ^//w//^ <3 He's such a sweet heart!

Nooooooooo, Luscence is obviously real and is running around somewhere k.illing people.. *sarcasm*
Yah, i made his story up, hes my character isn't he? X)

3rd try -_-''
Part 9
B.lood splattered onto Lucas from the from the gapeing w.ound he gave the doctor, who was no b.leeding and d.ead on the floor. Lucas was both shocked and satisfied with what he'd done, but his currant sycopathic state of mind wouldn't let him care. Six orderlies rushed in suddenly as expected and etempted to hold him down and sedate him but Lucas was having none of it.
He jumped up and began to slash v!*lently at thier necks, decap.itating a few of them and sprying b!ood everywhere.
He the ran out of the room and into the hall, Where staff of every kind was comming towards him from both sides. With an insane grin spread accross his torn face he ran full speed to the right, slashing v!*lently at the group and again causing b!ood to spatter the walls
v

Lucas kept running until he reached the main machinery room. Everyone screamed as they saw him, thrilling Lucas even more as he proceded to draw his needles through the computer pannels and the staff.
"You really don't need to worry!"
He said, completely insane.
"You'll only fell a slight PINCH!Q"
He yelled as he sl*shed and st*bed, covering the floor in a thick layer of b!ood.
Alarms began sounding as the computer was set on fire, Lucas kept running untli he say a window at the end of the hall.
He braced for impact, then with a loud sh*tter of glass he jumped through.
v

Lucas fell 3 stories before hitting the ground hard with a loud th*d. He sustained no injury, got up and ran untill he reached the safety of the forest.
"They'll never catch me now."
He breathed, exausted, but he new he had to keep running.
Lucas was covered head to toe in a thick layer of b!ood. As refreshing as it felt, it made his cloths heavy and sticky, just as he was about to stop and rest, a deafaning boom sounded behind him followed by a emense burst of heat. The Valor Instetute had exploded.
End of part nine.
Its not over yet >:)

Apearantly the problem was it thought a bunch of words were inapropriet. like thud and sh*atter.
Thats why I wrote it in 3 short paragraphs XP

STOP DELETING MY COMENTS
-.-

omg so intense! O_e

^ Never XD

Meanie l:(

^Yah...he kinda did.. :l

^ Idk, the rest is just history, nothing really important X)

But i like history! Come continue it! Pretty please? *Puppy face* OwO PWEASE?

GOD LOOKS AMAZING! :)