Part:4 Chapter:1 by Smarty_PantsCC

I was 5 stories up in the air.
Suddenly, I heard a crunch. My head shot up and the limb I was hanging from started to give in.
"No no no no no..." I pleaded.
The crunching stopped.
Then somthing snapped. The wires of my parachute popped and I started to fall. I screamed and hit the ground. It was pins and needles all on my body. I couldn't move.
I couldn't stay awake.... I shut my eyes and gave in.
To be continued

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
19 Jul, 2013, 2:54 am
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PegaseGamerish

19 Jul, 2013, 3:14 am

:o cant wait for the next part >w<

Smarty_PantsCC

19 Jul, 2013, 3:26 am

Really? Thanks! ^u^

xXJa3Xx

19 Jul, 2013, 4:54 am

HOLY PENGUINS U FOLLOWED! Thank You! ^u^

Sid Squid

19 Jul, 2013, 5:41 am

Thank you for the follow ^-^

Smarty_PantsCC

19 Jul, 2013, 6:20 am

Thanks all-! ^u^ Glad you guys liked it! :3

i_ate_your_donut

19 Jul, 2013, 9:45 am

I can't wait to see the next part! x3

Smarty_PantsCC

19 Jul, 2013, 5:56 pm

Aweshum, and thanks all!!! ^u^

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