Who wants to play its time u heard my storyOne day when the sky was clear i was walking to my friend Maggies house i kept walking we were going to help the animals in the park that always starve & get hurt I finally saw Maggies house when i walked up i heard scr.eaming it sounded like maggie & her mom dad & brother just in case i had a knife and loaded pistol in my backpack that my dad gave me before he past away I was scared i rang the doorbell suddenly the #bloodymist #bloodylilRose :3
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18 Jul, 2013, 7:14 pm
scr.eaming stoped then i heard footsteps coming to the door and whispers in my head saying run dont save maggie and her family u r the only one that matters i said NO! Maggie needs me she is my BEST friend! I got my phone and texted my mom she should come to maggie's house just in case... the door slowly opened i coul hear my heart poundind in fear then i heard the famileir voice telling me to come in it sounded like a male i told the person to let me see them then they said No! just come on in! i said ok i trust u i walked in the room the door shut behind me i was scared i looked behind me there was red eyes not blinking i said who are u what do u want he walked in the light i stared at him and screamed my mom was at the drive threw and heard my scream she ran to the door and said open up!!! she called the police I slowly walked away from the man i said GET AWAY FROM ME! I started to Run! into a room i saw maggie and her family on the floor died i screamed louder the red eyed shadow came back and said whats wrong my love? he laughed i fainted after 4 hours i was awake crieing i heard the police calling the Person to come out with me! he said to me he would make me suffer for something i did i thought to myself he was crazy.....Was he? i told him what did i do he told me i was the one i didnt understand what he meant
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18 Jul, 2013, 7:43 pm
'_' great story!!!
18 Jul, 2013, 7:46 pm
He told me that he was waiting all these years of my life to get to me i was crieing even more he put two pictures infront of me Maggie and her family the next picture was him w/ my dead sister Jade i cried even more! Stop it! Stop it! Get it away from me! do u miss her? Did u think i wouldnt know her?! well u were wrong! i've been watching ur evert move i was the shadow in the window i am ur FEAR! u cant get ride of me! i live to stay! I felt pain and just stared at him u-u-u took her didnt u! yes i did she crushed my heart when she said no to me from marrige i never felt this way before but u sound just like her! i told him UR SICK HOW COULD U S-SHE LOVED U! U took her from us and im going to do the same to u! he laughed like he was insane
18 Jul, 2013, 9:07 pm
wow gen o_o
18 Jul, 2013, 9:24 pm
He got His knife i screa.med! & looked at my backpack I kicked him And moved to the back pack to get my knife & pistol he knocked them out of my hand and carved a smile into my face! I cried in pain i couldnt move, he put something in my eyes which made them black and with my green in the middle I screamed grabed my knife and cut him i tried to escape i really did but...........he came back he cut me everywere i bleed i was set on fire last thing i remember was seeing his HORRIBLE face! i then woke up in the hospital the nurse said ur awake my name is selena i will help u do u want to see ur mom i told yes i would love to i cried selena told me to settle down my mom walked in she just stared at me & started to cry then she hugged me i asked her whats wrong i asked selena for a morrior she gave me one i cried my face was sewed in I cried and cried i went home w/ no more friends by my looks my mom was the only one that stilled loved me a few years past my mother died..........
18 Jul, 2013, 9:53 pm
this kinda reminds me of jeff the k.iller
18 Jul, 2013, 9:56 pm
I was homeless they brought me to a orphanage everyone was scared of me i would sit on my bed alone everyday crying One day a new girl came in the orphange She was like me Injured w/ no friends, i walked up to her one day and i said hi she wasnt afraid of me she said hi to me We became best friends i told her my story she told me hers, her story was kinda like mine
18 Jul, 2013, 10:45 pm
But mine was a lot worst She told me she was sorry i told her the same thing we both smiled that night we fell asleep in our room we shared, that night the same man who did this to me was in our bedroom i shreeked my friend woke up and shreeked to h-he had a knife and stabbed me that was the LAST any one saw of me until today
18 Jul, 2013, 10:57 pm
Heyyyyy
18 Jul, 2013, 10:58 pm
I awaken in my grave to come and try to save u from them.........The people I come to u at night and steal ur blood and soul but thats better then my story........IM COMING FOR U! who wants to play w/ me? u didnt care im coming the light wont help u im watching u right now.........
Goodnight, Child
18 Jul, 2013, 11:09 pm
Hello ^-^ -zero
19 Jul, 2013, 12:19 am
I wanna play!!!!!
19 Jul, 2013, 12:51 am
Ok! lets start by hide and seek >:D
19 Jul, 2013, 2:49 am
How about hot potato! :D
19 Jul, 2013, 2:51 am
ok thats good to! :D
19 Jul, 2013, 2:53 am
hot patato,hot patato,hot pa.......Holy **** it's freakin hot!!!
19 Jul, 2013, 3:11 am
*laughs* yes indeed!
19 Jul, 2013, 4:44 am
i play too!
19 Jul, 2013, 5:54 am
Ok! X3
19 Jul, 2013, 8:07 am
wow makes me wish there was a movie for it xD so interesting gen nice job c:
19 Jul, 2013, 5:33 pm
yeah i might send it to Mr.Creepypasta for youtube X3
19 Jul, 2013, 8:41 pm
do it do it :D
20 Jul, 2013, 12:02 am
:3 i might i wonder if he'll do it! ;D
20 Aug, 2013, 7:53 pm
who is i have a story similar to yours you never gave out the name of your friend in the orphanige when i was at the orphanige i met a girl like you do u think are stories are linked?
31 Oct, 2013, 12:23 am
yeah
04 Dec, 2013, 12:43 am
wow nice story and do u think its possible we were the girls in the orphanige?