Next week came, and i saw jane. However, her short brown hair was now shaved off and she was completly bald and she look awfully sick. Trying not to be rude i ignored it and approached her. Her dull face turned into a smile when she saw mine, and we battled. Her older brother came to pick her up again, and i said my goodbyes. That evening, i heard my mum and dad yelling and my dad came into my room in a lift of rage, slamming the door and taking a deep breath.
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17 Jul, 2013, 2:05 am
"Ian. Your mother and I dont love each other anymore. Your mother is moving back to New Zealand, and i want you to go with her, so at least giving her company. You understand right?" He asked and i nodded. We left the following Staturday morning, and i didn't say get a chance to say goodbye to Jane.
17 Jul, 2013, 2:15 am
We started our new life their, and I forgot entirely about Jane. A few years later, i moved back to Australia with my fiance. We moved into a new house near my old one and even started our own family. It wasn't until i went to the attic and found a old box that i found. My old Pokemon Diamond game, safely tucked into the blue pouch i always kept in. Memories of the previous years came back and i remembered everything. The class room, Jane, our battles, her address, everything.
17 Jul, 2013, 2:25 am
I rushed out of the house, game clenched into my hand and I found her house. I knocked on the door and to my relief, Janes older brother awnsered. "Ian? is that... you..?" He ask. "Yes! Yes it's me!" I said "Jane, is Jane ok?" I asked. He swallowed and sighed. "Jane... Passes away several months after you quit the club, Ian." He said. "I... I'm sorry." I said. "She left something for you, though. Was really persistent that you and only you recieved it. Wont be a minute." He said, entering the house then coming back out and handling a small package. "here, take it."
17 Jul, 2013, 2:31 am
I took and opened it. Inside was a black Nintendo DS, with a game Pokemon Pearl inside. It was janes. There was a note attached to it.
"dear Ian, I know this will never come to you but so just want that whenever you come back to the club my world felt like maybe, just maybe, I have something to live for! I love you Ian. Always will. love, Jane."
17 Jul, 2013, 9:19 am
I hold the package tightly as tears run through my face. "Thanks." I said. I came home crying about Jane. She said "whats wrong?" She ask. I tolled her everything about it as tears still goes. She wiped out and she let my head to her lap and fell asleep... with one a small tear falling from me. THE END hope you like it
17 Jul, 2013, 12:10 pm
srry i had to delete comment so the story wont get cut off.