Indifference by Texabella

Random wolf. :T Feel free to keep him as a char, but do ask me first. ^^ Tried to make the 3D realistic for the mist-serpent-thing. .3. Please give my honest, constructive criticism on this.

#wolf #enveloped #emotionless

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
16 Jul, 2013, 11:47 pm
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Caracal-Bear

17 Jul, 2013, 12:03 am

wow, I love it! its so beautiful! :3
okay, constructive criticism.
i'm not good at giving it, but oh well.
The only thing i can say about this is, cats and wolves have 5 toes in front feet. like your hand... 4 fingers n a thumb. 4 are at the edge of the foot and the 5th one is up the leg a bit. and it needs to be on the inside part of the leg.
Thats it, everything else is great. c:

Caracal-Bear

17 Jul, 2013, 12:07 am

oh and the 3D.
when the mist stream kind of wraps around the wolf, it should be on a lower layer when its behind the wolf, and on the same or higher layer when its in front.

Icewing_EM

17 Jul, 2013, 12:13 am

Awsome, i like it!

Texabella

17 Jul, 2013, 12:26 am

Thanks, guys! ^3^ And Caracal, you're right about the toes. I just didn't feel like drawing them. xD Probably should have, though.. -3-

NishaNashoba

17 Jul, 2013, 12:53 am

(Reply) Thank you!! ^w^

This is really nice! Although, I could give you a bunch of tips. But I don't want to over whelm you. ^w^ You already know the paw and 3D thing, but I think you should also try making the ears smaller and less pointy. Maybe make it a little fluffy. 0w0 Just trying to help give ideas on how to improve. Try looking up pictures of the thing you wish to draw, it might help. It would also help to try drawing a picture. (Your own picture, 'cause stupid copyright stuff.) You could use stuff like a grid. Well unless you only want to practice digital art. I don't know. X3 Helpful? Eh...

-NW N

Taojat3D

17 Jul, 2013, 1:13 am

I would be absolutely fine friending you! You don't seem like a stalker. .3.

Caracal-Bear

18 Jul, 2013, 5:23 am

yush, what everyone else said.
also if you want to draw 3 toes for a cuter style, make the feet really small. :3
and pics like this might look a bit nicer on a lower 3D setting. you should almost never upload a picture with full 3D.
Thats it. :D

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