New Oc: Jack by MysteryUsername

Jack was abused. Everyone in his pack hates him. The pack leader gave him a scar so deep it blinded him. He ran away from the pack and decided to be a loner. But his blind eye is not helping. He can't catch food that well, he keeps running into trees, he almost got run over by a car once.
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#Wolf #Blind #Alone #Abuse #Scar #DerpingDogs

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12 Jul, 2013, 12:31 am
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MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 1:03 am

(It's alright)

Jack heard the howling. His senses told him to do the same. So he did. He looked at the moon with his good eye. It was full.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 1:16 am

Jack stopped howling when the others stopped. He walked in the moonlight, trying to avoid the trees.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 4:07 am

Jack ran into a tree. "Ooff... I should of knew that I would run into a tree..." He sighed and went around, being more aware of the trees.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 10:30 pm

Jack turned towards the voice. "H-hello?" His good eye finally saw the wolf. He was confused why the wolf didn't attack him.

Blizzard Blitz

12 Jul, 2013, 11:17 pm

Breeze darted towards a tree and saw the brown wolf jack.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 11:26 pm

Jack's ears moved around to pick up sounds. "Someone else is here..." Jack stood still, even though he was scared if the wolves will attack.

Blizzard Blitz

12 Jul, 2013, 11:40 pm

Breeze peeked out of the bush 'Dont worry i wont hurt you.' she could smell his fear scent.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 11:48 pm

Jack jumped and turned around. He could see half of the she-dog. He turned his head so he could see the wolf fully with his good eye.

Blizzard Blitz

12 Jul, 2013, 11:50 pm

(im a she-wolf) 'you ok??' she asked.

MysteryUsername

12 Jul, 2013, 11:54 pm

Jack's eye flicked nervously. 'They could attack any moment!' He thought.

Blizzard Blitz

13 Jul, 2013, 12:00 am

'hello??' she looked at him confusingly.

MysteryUsername

13 Jul, 2013, 12:02 am

"Erm..." Jack turned around, where his blind eye was facing the moon. He started to run. Tripping from time to time.

MysteryUsername

13 Jul, 2013, 4:54 am

Jack ran into the wolf. "Ooff! Ow..." He turned his head to look. It was one of the she-wolves. He quickly stood up and backed away. "I'm-I'm sorry..." He yaped. Getting ready to be attacked.

MysteryUsername

14 Jul, 2013, 1:47 am

Jack trembled furiously. He's never gone this long without the wolf attacking.

MysteryUsername

14 Jul, 2013, 7:04 pm

Jack shut his eyes tight. 'Just get it over with!' Jack screamed in his head.

Blizzard Blitz

14 Jul, 2013, 9:21 pm

Breeze steps forward and slightly opened her wings 'Like we said we wont hurt you.'

MysteryUsername

20 Jul, 2013, 12:33 am

Jack was startled by the contact from the she-wolf but calmed down slightly. 'They're nice Jack. Don't run.' Jack thought. Jack couldn't see the she-wolf that was putting her head on his shoulder. Her head was on his blind side. That made his sad but scared. 'She could attack because I can't see!' Jack shivered at the thought. He was scared of everything ever since his pack abused him and kicked him out with v!olence.

MysteryUsername

20 Jul, 2013, 6:50 pm

"You can't help me! No one can! Everyone hates me! My eye is forever scarred!" Jack yelled and started run. Making the she-wolf's head jerk forward from the sudden pull. Jack ran and ran. Letting tears form and run down his muzzle. He was scared. But he kept running and running until he noticed where he was. He heard alarming howls. The smelled the power. The wolves here probably smelled his fear. One-by-one wolves appeared. "Nice to see you again, little brother." His brother snarled. "Jack, what are you doing here?" A she-wolf growled. Before Jack could answer her, the leader appeared. The wolves split away so their leader could pass. "Well, well, well. Isn't my little boy Jack." Jack trembled even more than before. "Get him." The leader ordered. Jack turned around and started to run, the pack following him. "Ah!" He howled when a wolf pulled his tail, making Jack fall down. Jack didn't know what to do or what to say once the leader pinned him down to the ground.

MysteryUsername

20 Jul, 2013, 7:32 pm

The leader looked at the she-wolf. "It's none of your business." Jack's brother snarled. "Easy Valkey." The leader said with a low voice. "Yes Ryan." Valkey obeyed. "R-Ryan. I haven't heard your name in forever, Even though I fear all of you!" Jack dared to speak. "Quiet Jack!" Ryan growled and swiped his paw at Jack. Jack squeaked in pain.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:14 am

Jack didn't know why the she-wolf was helping him but no more no less he didn't want her hurt because of him. "Get out of here! I don't want you hurt because of me!" He told the she-wolf. "Jack got a mate?!" Howled his mother. "That's impossible!" Valkey laughed with the pack. They continued to laugh. "N-no!" Jack struggled. "Listen Jack," Ryan said after the wave of laughter from the pack. "I'm sure you already know this and understand but: You're weak, helpless, scarred. You came petrified after that scar I gave you making you blind. You're a coward! You ran away once I scarred you! The whole pack as scars from me but they didn't run away, now did they?" Jack shook his head no. Ryan nodded and stepped off. "Now get out of here and NEVER return." Jack stood up and ran away clumsily and fear. He ran into a tree but continued around it as the pack laughed at him. The whole pack turned and left, leaving the she-wolf alone.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:30 am

Ryan turned towards the she-wolf. "What do you want?" Ryan snarled. The rest of the pack was standing behind him. They looked like they had red glowing eyes, they all stared at the wo.f that had called their leader.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:41 am

"That's it! I had enough! You're making fun of OUR leader!" A wolf snarled and came out of the dark and landed on the she-wolf. "Please me Micheal." Ryan order. "As you wish, Master." Micheal swipped at the she-wolf.

Jack was 2 yards away from the pack, he was under a rock. Crying.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:48 am

Mysterysong im giving him a new name:Cursednight

cursednight walked for hours even though she lost her leg she kept on going she then saw other Cursednight stopped she was in fear

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:49 am

Micheal howled in pain. Ryan's eyes widen. "Micheal! No!" He howled.

Jack's ears were flooded with howling, he quickly knew who it was: Micheal. He got up from his hiding place and ran towards the pack and the she-wolf. When he was in reach he pushed Micheal off and turned to the she-wolf, standing in front of the pack protectivly. Ryan ignored the protests of Jack's presences instead he nodded to Jack and picked up Micheal. He turned and led the way as his pack followed. Once the pack disappeard, Jack felt light-headed and fainted.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:50 am

Cursedstone then fell off the rocks she tried climbing up but couldnt she had 3 paws left

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:51 am

"HELP!'Cursedstone said [lotsof paks say cursedstones cursed but shes not]

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:53 am

Jack didn't move. He was out cold.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:54 am

Cursedstone fell to the ground bruised 'maybe there right..i am cursed'Cursedstone said as she tried getting up with her remaining paws

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:56 am

Cursedstone got up but then climbed 'i must howl to the MOON!'Cursedstone said as she finnaly got up and howled beautiflly to the moon she saw the two other wolves

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 1:57 am

Jack layed limply but he was still breathing.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 1:59 am

Cursedstone then walked off the rok 'y cant they see me?do they think im cursed?'she thought

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:00 am

Cursedstone began to sing lullaby for a prinncess [by celestia]

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:01 am

Stone layed on a rock. He was left behind by the pack to keep guard, once he saw Ryan he waited for permission before zooming off into the woods. He froze as he saw Cursedstone. "He-hello?"

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:03 am

Jack soon felt reality wash over. His head pounded. He tried to sit up but fell back onto Moonstone's chest. He didn't open his eyes. He was in pain but Moonstone's chest was fluffy and inviting.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:03 am

Cursedstone looked at the wolf limping 'hi.Dont worry i wont attack!'She said

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:05 am

Cursedstone layed down but wondered if she was cursed

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:05 am

"C-calm down. I wasn't planning too." Stone studdered. He walked towards the she-wolf. "I'm Stone. You are?"

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:07 am

"I'm... I'm Jack..." Jack finally said but weakly. He started to trust this she-wolf but not fully.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:17 am

"I'm sorry for leaning up against you..." Jack said nervously. His eyes still closed, trying to ignore the pain with the help of Moonstone's fur.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:19 am

'im Cursedstone...every1 says im cursed....u see my leader said i was cursed that he tore my leg off.....i had to run away'Cursedstone said shly

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:20 am

[DIGIMON IS AWESOMER THEN POKEMON #Digimon ]

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:21 am

"Oh..." Stone said, eyeing her missing leg. He sat down. They were greeted with silence.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:22 am

Cursedstone smiled 'i brought a deer in case i was hungry but we can share'Cursedstone said

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:25 am

Hunger was present in Stone's eyes. "I'm starving." He replied.

Jack sighed in relief, glad that the she-wolf won't attack him instead he got more comfrontable. His body pressed against Moonstone's and his head on her front paws.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:35 am

[AWWW MOONSTONE LIKES JACK!Stone should like Cursedstone!]

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:36 am

Relax by Moonstone's comfront and protection, Jack fell asleep.
-Jack's Dream-
Jack ran and ran. Ryan following him. "Run Jack!" Ryan ordered. Kirk was chasing them. They both feared Kirk. Kirk was the most terrifing leader you would ever seen. Soon Ryan was caught. Jack heard a "Run Jack" before the voice of Ryan was gone. He kept running. He got to a deadend and he trembled in a corner as Kirk came closer and closer.
-Reality-
Jack shook and shook. He whimpered and cried. His fur was damp.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:44 am

Jack screamed and woke up quickly. His eyes blinking. He stood up and stagered backwards before falling backwards. His head rested between his paws. He breathed heavily. 'Why is Kirk so scary?' Jack thought but quickly dismissed it.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:46 am

Stone quickly located the food and drugged it towards Cursedstone and began to eat.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:46 am

Cursed looked at Jack

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:52 am

"Ye-yeah... Just uh, just a nightmare..." Jack replied. Acknolging the concern in his er, friend's voice. He trembled at the thought of the nightmare but quickly left and made himself calm down. Only a little shaking was present. He shakily stood up and layed back down next to Moonstone, pressing up against her seeking for comfort.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:54 am

'oh thanks'Cursed said

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:55 am

[no!piper u cant tell me wat 2 do]

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:56 am

Stone only nodded. He chewed a piece of meat.

Jack still shook, even though he was in Moonstone's care. His trust for her has increased rapidly.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:56 am

Cursed began to eat

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 2:57 am

(...)

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 2:58 am

Cursed began to eat

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:01 am

Stone and Cursed ate in silence, which Stone didn't mind. He always ate alone so he was used to silence.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:05 am

Cursed looked at stone blushing a lil bit

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:07 am

Cursed then ate and stretched then began to sleep by Stone

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:07 am

"Moon... Moonstone. We can go back to my den, if you want. I don't feel comfortable being in the open space and I don't want to be alone so can we go?" Jack dared to ask. He knew Moonstone was tired but he didn't like this place. It was way to close to Ryan and his pack.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:09 am

Stone looked at Cursed. He smiled at his new friend. He nudged the left overs away and rested his head on his paws before falling asleep.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:13 am

Jack got up before nudging Moonstone to get up.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:14 am

Cursed followed them but stayed outside there cave

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:15 am

Cursed looked at Stone

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:16 am

Stone opened his eyes seeing Cursed getting up. "Where you going?" Stone asked while getting up. He knew Jack was here, he didn't want himself or her near him.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:18 am

'relax its me Cursedstone'Cursed said shyly and scaredly but stayed outside

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:20 am

"M... Moonstone? Who's there?" Jack shakily asked in the depths of the dark cave.
Stone meekily stood away. He turned to leave, he wasn't gonna tell Ryan where Jack was then that would be too mean for his little brother, he was in enough pain.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:21 am

Cursed looked at stone deciding to stay with him or oytside the cave

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:23 am

Stone knew he shouldn't leave his new friend so he sat down with his back turned.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:25 am

'i knowj-jack'Cursed said then saw Stone

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:26 am

Jack sighed in relief. But he kept in his corner. The darkness covering him like a blanket.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:26 am

'tell him its Cursedstone...he'll know me maybe...'She said shyly

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:26 am

Cursed looked down scaredly

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 3:28 am

Cursed sighed then returned to Stone

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 3:31 am

Stone turned to see Cursed and he stood up. He padded along side with her.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 8:39 pm

Cursed woke up by Stone wondering how Jack was

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 8:40 pm

Cursedstone realized she was sleeping by Stones side se blushed'um...um...'Cusedstone said shyly

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 8:42 pm

Stone still slept.

Jack felt more protected with Moonstone close to him, so soon he fell asleep.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 8:55 pm

Jack opened his eyes. "What... what?" Jack said weakly and tiredly.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 8:58 pm

Cursedstone stretched and got Stone a rabbit before she got her own rabbit she left a note in the dirt saying:
im getting my own rabbit to eat!ill be bak
-Cursed

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 8:59 pm

Rabbit filled Stone's nose. He woke up quickly. He read Cursed's note before eatting his meal.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 9:01 pm

Jack tried to stand up but quickly fell back down. He shook his head and stayed where he was.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 9:03 pm

Cursed then returned with a rabbit

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 9:04 pm

"N... Nothing." Jack said weakly. He curled up for another rest.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 9:05 pm

Stone has fallen back to sleep after eatting his rabbit.

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 9:13 pm

Jack fell asleep in a matter of quick minutes.

moved-to-karasunos

06 Aug, 2013, 9:14 pm

Cursedstone smiled 'oh stone'Cursedstone said then secretly liked him and said to herself 'i luv u'

MysteryUsername

06 Aug, 2013, 9:16 pm

Stone flipped to his back, the sun beaming down on him. His white stomach brighter than ever. His grey fur on his back pressed to the ground.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 1:11 am

Jack woke up. He pulled his head up and yawned Moonstone's name. With no answer Jack started to panic. He started to whimper.

Stone yawned as he woke up. "Good morning Cursedstone. Thank you for the rabbit." Stone flipped back over to his stomach, letting the sun beam down on his grey fur.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 1:22 am

Jack jumped to his paws. He ran into Moonstone's chest. "Please don't leave me..." His voice muffled in her fur.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 1:56 am

"Thank you..." Jack said and backed up. He shook his fur lightly.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 2:29 am

Jack looked at Moonstone. Then at the rabbit. Hunger filled his eyes. He grabbed it and pulled it up to Moonstone. Nudging it towards her. "Eat..." He simply said.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 2:38 am

"N... No. You have it." He said shyly. He pushed the meat more towards Moonstone.

MysteryUsername

08 Aug, 2013, 2:50 am

(Kk)

Jack walked back to his corner of the cave and curled up, resting his head on his tail.

MysteryUsername

01 Oct, 2013, 2:29 am

Jack breathed slowly as he fell asleep for the 3rd or 4th time that day.

MysteryUsername

01 Oct, 2013, 2:36 am

Jack woke up and jumped to his paws and stumbled out of the cave. "I'm-I'm use of staying in a c-cold cave. Dark and in the cold is what I use to hide." Jack said shyly.

MysteryUsername

01 Oct, 2013, 2:49 am

'No reply... Great. She probably ran away.' Jack thought and turned his head to see Moonstone laying in the grass. Jack walked backwards but slipped on his own paws. "Ooff! Ow..." Jack whinned. His back dug into a sharp rock as well.

MysteryUsername

01 Oct, 2013, 2:55 am

Jack rolled off the rock to reveal a bloody cut near his right shoulder blade. "Ow... Ow... Ow..." He mumbled over and over again.

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