TiM Chapter 1 by petetownshends

FANFIC WILL BE IN COMMENTS! #mlp #fanfic #fanfiction #crossover #victorystar #TiM #MLFTiM #TeamworkIsMagic #TiMChapter1 Notes: I've never written a TF2 or MLP:FiM fanfiction. This is my first time writing one, so don't judge me! And the little thing in the middle is Icicle Breeze's emblem.

So kick back, relax, and enjoy the fanfic! -Victorystar

DO NOT COMMENT UNTIL THE CHAPTER IS TYPED UP.

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07 Jul, 2013, 8:13 pm
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petetownshends

07 Jul, 2013, 8:36 pm

Icicle Breeze woke up to a knock on her house door. "Ugh, who could be up at THIS hour?" She muttered. She groggily flew downstairs and opened the horse door. There were two alicorns. These alicorns were Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight Sparkle. "P-princess Celestia! What are you doing here?" Icicle Breeze asked, her mouth gaping. "I have come here with Princess Twilight Sparkle; she'll explain why." Celestia replied. "Greetings, dear Icicle Breeze," Said Twilight. "Hello." Icicle Breeze bowed to the princess. "I have come here with Princess Celestia because we have a special mission for you. A mission that we know you could complete." "R-really? What is this mission you speak of?" Icicle Breeze asked. "I have one train ticket that will take you to the place where the mission is located. You will interact with humans that are separated into two teams, team RED, and team BLU. Celestia and I have chosen which team you're going to be on in this envelope," With Twilight's alicorn magic, she lifted up the envelope. "And in this box," Celestia pointed to a box, which said, 'CLOTHES' written in marker. "contains your outfit to wear." "Please refrain from opening the box and envelope. Wait until you get to your destination." Celestia said sternly. "I will." Replied the pegasus. "Wait..." "Pardon?" Said Twilight. "Can Frosted Lightning come?" Celestia sighed, and gave Icicle Breeze a sympathetic look. "I'm afraid not. I only have one ticket, and with your great a.ssistance, intelligence, and trustworthiness, I think you are the one. You are the Element of Intelligence, and I trust you. But, you can go bid her farewell before you leave." "Thank you Celestia, but she lives in Cloudsdale!" Icicle Breeze wailed. "Don't worry. We saw her at Sugarcube Corner. She should be here in about," Princess Twilight said in a long tone. Suddenly, a mare with a nicked ear and wings with splits landed on the ground. "now." Twilight finished. (cont. in next comment)

petetownshends

07 Jul, 2013, 9:01 pm

Suddenly, a mare with a nicked ear and wings with splits landed on the ground. "Frosted Lightning!" Icicle Breeze gasped in astonishment. "Icicle Breeze, I heard..." Frosted Lightning began to cry on Icicle Breeze's shoulder. "It's alright. I'll be back." Icicle Breeze wiped her shoulder and gave her friend a faint smile. Frosted Lightning sniffed. "You better!" The two best friends gave eachother a hug. "Goodbye!" Icicle Breeze yelled as Frosted Lightning flew back to her home in Cloudsdale. "See you soon!" She yelled back. Soon Frosted Lightning became a small speck, getting smaller until she found her way to Cloudsdale. "We better hurry. The train's almost here!" "You're right." Celestia nudged her head to the train station. "We'll help you with your bags." Twilight said kindly. As Celestia and Twilight began to carry Icicle Breeze's bags, she thought about what'll happen to her. She felt a jolt of shock in her, just thinking she could get hurt, or get k.illed. She then heaved a sigh while walking, turning around to get one quick glance of Ponyville. She then started to run to catch up with the two princesses. "Are you ready" Asked Celestia. "I'm ready." Icicle Breeze replied. The train started to slow down, causing a huge commotion of mares, fillies, and colts reuniting with their parents after a long trip. We put your bags in already." Twilight said pulling Icicle Breeze's saddlebag onto the train. "Do you have your ticket?" Asked Celestia. "Yes!" Icicle Breeze got on the train, with her ticket in hoof. She plopped into her seat and waited to show her ticket. "Ticket?" A male pony asked. "Yep." The pegasus pony replied, showing her ticket. The pony nodded his head and walked away. The train then took off; Icicle Breeze knew this from the rumbling of her bags. She looked out the window, and started to wave goodbye to Celestia and Twilight. Now the train was moving at its regular speed; it was drifting away from Ponyville. (cont. in next comment)

petetownshends

07 Jul, 2013, 9:11 pm

Now Icicle Breeze was frantic to get where she had to be. It could be a matter of hours, days, maybe even weeks until she would get to her destination. Her only solution was to sleep. She slowly became woozy, then drowsy, then sleepy, until she finally fell asleep.

FINALLY. I FINISHED. My hand hurts. I AM NOT ACCEPTING OC PONIES. Stay tuned for chapter 2, and constructive critisism is reccomended!

Owletumel

07 Jul, 2013, 9:19 pm

Awesome! I can't wait for the next part!

1quire

08 Jul, 2013, 12:25 am

Really creative! :D I can't wait either! Nice job.

-Super Blast-

08 Jul, 2013, 4:32 am

Vonderfull! :)

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