Tears by Miss8Cake

I know who I am,
Well at lest I did.
I became nothing
When my soul went and hid.

He took my soul
When he took part of me,
I begged him to stop
But he silenced me.

When life becomes so pitch,
What is there to do?
But to stare into the black
And wish there was undo.

I know ill never find peace
And there's only one thing to do.
But all those people out there,
I'll end up hurting them too.

They beg me to fight
But all I say is no.
If you really loved me
You'd let me go.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
04 Jul, 2013, 2:32 pm
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Miss8Cake

04 Jul, 2013, 2:38 pm

Today is the day,
I have given up hope.
You begged me to live
But I just can't cope.

I take my knife,
As I have in the past
And start to cut down,
Hard and fast.

This time there's no help.
All I feel is pain.
I've entered a new darkness,
One where im sane.

I whisper a good bye.
To fall on silent ears,
A good bye to the people
I have known for years.

#poem #sad #goodbye #crying #eye

NGE und AC fan

04 Jul, 2013, 2:47 pm

wow. very good. i like the 3d

VMC

04 Jul, 2013, 3:51 pm

ur poetry is jst soo beatfull:'/

i hope ur all right...u seem2b down....plz dont...idk...r u ok ?(question mark)

darkstuff

04 Jul, 2013, 4:14 pm

Wow beautiful poem,, your a tallented artist and writer! :)

NorkWolf

04 Jul, 2013, 9:51 pm

Nice poetry,and I really like thr tear the best.

NorkWolf

04 Jul, 2013, 9:51 pm

*the

OokamiAniyou

05 Jul, 2013, 3:48 am

The poem and work as always is beautiful..
And I really don't want you to go.... but if you did I wish you peace.

xIPh0enixxxPvP

05 Jul, 2013, 3:50 pm

ohh nice ! ;)

unicorn4675

08 Jul, 2013, 3:08 am

I know what your going through. Please talk to me. My fc is 3394 three eight two zero nine zero two four. We cam swapnote.

Birdwings

14 Nov, 2013, 5:45 am

You have great writing and art!

You have very much accomplished what I have been dreamed to accomplish my whole life. :)

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