As you may have noticed if you read the bio for my O.C., Hash, you may have noticed a character by the name of Elijah. Well, here he is. (I will write bio later...) The second-spirit of Hash, a rather timid and calm character. -Az
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Comments
02 Jul, 2013, 4:28 am
Awesome paiting you made ^-^
02 Jul, 2013, 4:32 am
nice pic, i like your drawing style!
02 Jul, 2013, 5:05 am
The pic of him on his hind legs is adorable!!! (yesh I love the other pic as well lol)
02 Jul, 2013, 10:55 am
Ohh my God,it's wonderful! *-*
02 Jul, 2013, 2:42 pm
*facepalm* *sigh* IT'S NOT SUPOSSED TO BE CUTE!!! It's how the species stands and walks, unless running; then they revert back to all fours. Does that make sense to ANYONE?! -- Sorry, Moocow.
02 Jul, 2013, 4:59 pm
[Bio]
"Huh? Oh, hello. We don't get visitors often, expecially humans...sit down, I guess..." Elijah signals you to a nearby chair in the corner of the room. "My...backstory? Is that what you said...?" Elijah turns suddenly away from you, almost shuddering. "F-fine. I'll tell you, but Hash may be mad with me afterwards..." you ask why. "Why? Well... you already let Hash tell you his story, so he...might not want you to hear mine..." You seem confused. Elijah notices and quickly dismisses the fact, "J- Just let me tell it, alright? I've been plaqued with the task of stablizing Hash's spirit, so if at any time I seem out of it, run away from here. I don't want to risk you getting hurt; you are a guest, after all..." Elijah finds a comfortable spot, and takes a breath before speaking, "*sigh*, as you already know, Hash and I were both humans in our past lives, but, unlike Hash's, mine was much more saddening. It was my fourteenth birthday; the caregivers at the orphanage had gotten me the most joyous of gifts; a black-and-red kimono. I had wanted one for years, but the orphanage was too low in money to be able to afford one. I was overjoyed, and wanted to show everyone. I mindlessly ran around, yelling, 'Look at my kimono! Look at my kimono!', but everyone seemed to busy to notice. I realized after popping into a few rooms that no one really cared at the moment, they had other things to do. I quietly tiptoed back to my room, as some of the kids were still asleep; it was early in the morning. I slumped onto my bed, wondering what to do before breakfast was served, and everyone was awake. I had my sketchbook on my nightstand, and decided to draw for a while.
---Later, after breakfast, I was left sitting at the table, staring blankly at my empty plate. I didn't have any friends, besides the nicest of the workers; Jill, Samantha, and Greg were the best to me, but the rest ment nothing to me. I was virtually oblivious to Amanda, the new girl, and Jane, who seemed like she
02 Jul, 2013, 6:18 pm
wrote the rest on the computer, check the other comments w/ 3ds browser, please.
02 Jul, 2013, 6:55 pm
His colors are simply beautiful, especialy that blue! Elijah's wings are sweet and I especialy like his name! I also noticed how oposite his design is from Hashes. Thats pretty a nice idea! Yes. username was inspired from the band ( Its called After the Fall or something like that. ) Its also the name I chose for my saga that I came up with concerning my species of anthropormorphic creatures ( A.K.A rogs ). I'm still deveoloping it.
02 Jul, 2013, 9:09 pm
Thank you, After Fall. anyways, here's some more of his bio--
Jane, who seemed like she wanted to K!ll me every time I looked at her. I guess that's because...well....to keep my suspicion's low, I kept on the act of a quiet, uninterested child. Does that...make sense to you? During the time I was rather...uhm....ant'i-social? Yeah. People took on the impression that I was an AUTIST'IC QUIET PERSON. Definitely not what I was hoping for, so...the only reason I did was to see if people would accept me for who I was, but...people in this society, I've found out, aren't that open to people that are different than them. Moving on....Right after lunch, we have reccess, where we all go outside and stuff. Well, I was the one kid, besides some of the workers, who stayed inside. I had this weird fear of going outside.... This only added to the act I was putting on. after a while of that, putting on my act, many days had past before this happened one night; For the past few days, i'd been having this dream; I was in an unusual forest, It was completely dark, except the full moon above me. I was being called, by some unknown force to go deeper into the forest. I kept walking, far'ther, far'ther, until I found myself in the hear't of the thing. all of a sudden, the trees started to glow, with an amazing, golden light, and this figure-- a strange, golden fox-- came up to me. It said: "Be warned, Your f'ate is unesca'pable." each time this had been said, I was filled with a growing fe'ar, that the en'd of my life was fast approaching. I awoke each morning, to a sweaty forehead, my hea'rt rate and blOOdpre'ssure through the roof. I was shocked to see, that every morning when I uncov'ered to get out of bed, my feet were covered with dirt, bla'des of grass, and bits of leaves. My kimono, which I en'ded up wearing everywhere now, was dirtied, and even some of the caregivers claimed that they could hear groans and even sc'reams coming from my room at night. I didn't know what to think of this, but I took it as they were af'ra'id of me. The next night, the same thing happened, me waking up to a but'tload of dirt on me. Amanda, the worst of the caretakers, in my opinion, woke me up that morning. "Well, Elijah, it looks like i'll have to wash your bedding---again. Thanks alot for this, b'itch. I didn't want to have to do any work today, I have a date tonight." She took my bedding, and ripped off my kimono, leaving me with a black teeshirt. Amanda didn't necessarily like me, but swearing at the orphanage was against the rules. She stomped out, slamming the door behind her. That's basically all that happened that was actually exciting that day, so I won't go over the details. What happened that night, was what caused my last day as a human. When it was time to head to our rooms for the night, I had finally gotten my kimono back.
02 Jul, 2013, 10:31 pm
Thanks, Scalchop. I haven't heard from you in a while. here's more. (Nope, it's NOT over just yet!!)
It was still a bit damp, but I put the thing on, anyway. It was colder outside tonight, making my room slightly colder, as the orphanage didn't have the best insulation in the walls, as usual. I got into bed, and fell asleep. I had the same, re-occuring dream, I was getting a bit sick of it, actually, and as you can imagine, everything happened the same as before...except for a few things. The forest wasn't glowing, and I saw a few animals that were different-- A calico cat, with a scar on it's face. I crouched down to pet it, it purred, but then ran ahead of me. I was again, le'ad to the he'art of the forest, I saw the same fox, as before, but then, the forest caught on fire, but the animal didn't move. It said, "You're fate....is tonight." My lungs filled with smoke from the fire, as I was stupid enough to breathe in, and I fell to the grass, dead. -- In the morning, I didn't wake up. The rest of the kids wondered where the, "Weird kid" was, and they checked up on me. My body was there, but they saw I wasn't breathing. The workers were shocked; they didn't know what to do. Later that day, they buried my body out behind the building. my spirit, that's a different story. (To be continued)...
03 Jul, 2013, 3:51 am
My friend from school thinks that the name Elijah is stupid, or weird-sounding. He suggested the name, Eli, but I blankly said, "No." We were writing a story about the characters at the time; a collab, if you will-- and the next time it was his turn to write, he switched out 'Elijah' for 'Eli'. He told me to type the story on the computer over the summer, but, I've never really had the motivation to continue typing it. Do you have even the slightest idea how busy I've been?! (He's getting sorta frustrated, though...) should I finish typing it? -Az (More of Elijah's bio in the morning/afternoon)...
03 Jul, 2013, 3:53 pm
(Cont.)
My spirit had moved on, as any normal persons' would, except for one small difference; Instead of going either straight to the gates of He'aven, or down to the pits of H*ll, my spirit stayed in the middle. My spirit was allready glowing, but after a few seconds, I was over'whelmed with a blinding white light. I almost passed out, it was literally that bright. Suddenly, though, I saw this ho'rrible thing-- it looked like a man, but-- a spirit like me, but-- I can't explain it...he seemed...d'ark, ev'il, almost. He just, stood there. Staring at me; his ga'ze was ice-co'ld, but still...human. He hesit'ated, but then came at me, as if something sho'ved him towards me; I was un'able to move, so I couldn't do anything. The man; he looked about in his twenties; flew at me, before I had any time to react. I'm guessing we both pas'sed out. When I awoke, I wasn't in control of my own body-- the other person was. I saw what he saw-- but...b- but... It fright'ened me. This, other spirit... he seemed...con'fused, like he didn't know where he was. Well, I didn't know either, but,at least I was calm about it. It was years before I was able to regain con'trol, and yet the other man's spirit seemed un'stable. I had to fight to stay in con'trol, almost doubling over in pa'in for a few months-- I had gotten used to it. I had finally found out that this person's name was Ha'sh, but he den'ied it. I didn't bother to ask." Elijah looked at you with terror and pa'in in his eyes, "Remember that war'ning I gave you? Run. Now." you don't budge from your seat. "GO! NOW!" he warns, just before falling on his knees, and his fur changing color from blue to red around his neck and tail. -Az
03 Jul, 2013, 3:54 pm
me too, Scalchop. me too...
03 Jul, 2013, 4:10 pm
His story is simply marvelous! You have quite a talent for cliff drop endings!
03 Jul, 2013, 7:32 pm
You mean cliff hanger? Yeah, I...hadn't really noticed until you said that...thanks. Did. You. Read. The. Computer. Comments?
03 Jul, 2013, 8:24 pm
Ofcourse! Thats how I knew it was cliffhanger ( the cliffhanger I'm talking about is the one where we don't know what happens to the poor soul that has been listening to Elijah after he looses controle over Hash ).
04 Jul, 2013, 1:53 am
*Cries* After Fall, you make me smile and cry all at the same time--mostly because I'm emotional, but...You've been really encouraging the last few days to me, and you don't realize how much it's meant to me...just...You've actually inspired me to do better at drawing and writing-- you actually understand my writing and drawings, and truely appreciate and enjoy it in my eyes. Thank-you....just...thank you...
15 Jul, 2013, 8:26 pm
You could have done better thats for sure i think my idea is better.
16 Jul, 2013, 1:45 am
Eli is better and thats what im always going to call it sierra!!!! ^ ^ °
16 Jul, 2013, 2:04 am
DUDE. Just... shut up. XD Why....where did you come from?!!
16 Jul, 2013, 3:52 am
@darkwolf14
Dude, don't say my real name on here are you frikin stupid?! Call me Azuel or AzuelZorro. or Az, if you wish. -Az