you asked so I will. I don't know what this is. It almost looks like a soccer ball on a heart on a footbal field and some wierd background stuff. My tip for you, Spend more time on doing indvidual drawings, clean up the work by straightening everything, make it clear so people know what they are looking at. And the biggest tip of all! keep trying you will get as long as you practice and watch how other drawings are made good ones of course. Try different styles and try people, buildings, landscapes, whatever just find what you enjoy the most and do it! I hope to see more of you in the future getting better and better until you are right up with the greats.

thanks for the tip!