Hopefully this is da pic your talking about... and I'm suprized you wanted me to give you a crique (XD however you spell)
First thing first that ANNOYS me to de.ath... the hind legs don't have that extra toe (only the front has 5, back only has 4 toes) You have a nice sholder line, hind end should come up just a tad more, the neck is a little too thick (coming off muzzle) but not too much right under collar the fur should be a little more poofed out or the belly fur needs to be slimmer, they don't line up right, just a little off but not bad The paws... er... they are way to curved out from the leg... the toes, the outer 2 should be smaller than the middle 2, yours line up with eachother, body could be a tad longer, the ears look nice, your tail ishh so puffy hehe ewe lol you could of had one more fluff thingy before the long line on da bottom... sorry didn't know how to explain that
other than that looks good...
You said to lay it on you but I still feel I went too harsh... give me your feed of what chu think, I'm not the greates at giving Criques
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28 Jun, 2013, 6:48 am
Hopefully this is da pic your talking about... and I'm suprized you wanted me to give you a crique (XD however you spell)
First thing first that ANNOYS me to de.ath... the hind legs don't have that extra toe (only the front has 5, back only has 4 toes)
You have a nice sholder line, hind end should come up just a tad more, the neck is a little too thick (coming off muzzle) but not too much
right under collar the fur should be a little more poofed out or the belly fur needs to be slimmer, they don't line up right, just a little off but not bad
The paws... er... they are way to curved out from the leg... the toes, the outer 2 should be smaller than the middle 2, yours line up with eachother, body could be a tad longer, the ears look nice, your tail ishh so puffy hehe ewe lol you could of had one more fluff thingy before the long line on da bottom... sorry didn't know how to explain that
other than that looks good...
You said to lay it on you but I still feel I went too harsh... give me your feed of what chu think, I'm not the greates at giving Criques
28 Jun, 2013, 5:39 pm
No prob ^w^ I'm happy I was help to you... if you ever need another critique just ask
28 Jun, 2013, 9:15 pm
Thank you for entering ^^ He looks amazing <3
01 Jul, 2013, 3:06 am
can you update with the tag #GasW0lfcontest
22 Dec, 2013, 3:44 pm
OH WHAT THE FAQ