Awesome idea, looks great :D

Awesome! (I'm jealous...XD)

Shadow.B: she reminds me of you abit shock is she your sister or something?

yeah

Shadow.B: heh stupid question i didnt read your description, Hi Saturn im Shadow the Black Jinouga, one of Shock's Battle Brothers(team mates)

saturn: hi! shock has told me alot about you mister primal prince *playfuly pokes shadow's belly*

Shadow.B: heh good things i hope, i didnt know shock had a cute lil sister, i have one too.

Shadow.B: i'd sure like to get to know you better saturn, do you like to battle like your brother

saturn: heck yeah! but ill warn you im realy fast!

Shadow.B: hmm agility is a good perk but if you were to say run fast straight into me i'd be able to stop you dead in your tracks, try to run into me at your highest speed and ill try to stop you*digs his foot claws into the ground bracing himself* ready

Mora: *walks in, falls over* Stupid.. Monkeys... TT^TT
Naru: Mistress, its ok. :<

saturn: ok *gets in running position* ready....set,GO! *bursts twards shadow creating a sonic boom then stops right i n front of him and lightly touches his nose making him blush and fall over*

shock: *walks over to mora then hugs her* hey babe, id like you to meet my sister, saturn. saturn: nice to meet you!

Mora: She better stop flirting with Shadow...
Naru: THAT'S MY HUSBAND, YA HEDGEHOG!! D<

saturn: im sorry, i was just having some fun...

Shadow.B: *tries to hide his blush* how come you never do anythin like this naru? i like it in girls and not to mention a fighting spirit....saturn is just so wats the word fun kinda like ty li from legend of aang.

Flame: whats all this i havent seen shadow this giddy since he got his first set of claws..... heh i get why.

Flame: oh btw im shadow's brother the bad one always startin fires and also the partner and boyfriend of a certain hot criminal Sam the hedgehog, idk what it is but the way she works just sets my heart alight*goes wide eyed* bl00dy heII did i just say that out loud? dammit, fck it, sam is my soul mate we're perfect for each other, i love you sam! now back to shadow, for once shadow you find yourself stuck between 2 girls, your wife you met while on a love match site(naru) and your best friends sister, stop bein a wuss and man up.

Shadow.B: i cant if i hurt naru ill feel so guilty but i feel guilty anyway cos it feels like we're drifting apart i don't know what to do*shakes his head and lets out a roar through frustration* why am i such a wuss when it comes to girls?

Shadow.B: ive had this feeling for awhile now naru, seeing shocks sister pushed me over the edge and now im going nuts.

Naru: Well, I don't usually get riled up. Yhur the first guy I've ever liked, so I've never had a REASON to get mad... BUT IF THAT BIT.CH TOUCHES YHU AGAIN, I'MA GO CRAZY ON HER!! ..She'd screech, lunging at Saturn, but getting held back.. MORA LEMME GO! D<<
Mora: Not until you calm down!

Mora: NOW do yhu see why Naru never flips out?! Last time she did, SHE KIL.LED HER OWN PARENTS! I'm her mistress on command so I make sure she NEVER does that! Shadow, an eagle's rage has DEADLY consequences. ..She'd be struggling to hold back Naru, who, by now, was extremely pis.sed off..
Naru: LEMME AT HER!!! ..She'd screech again, her eyes without anything but pitch black in them..
Mora: SEE WHAT I MEAN?! NARU, CALM THE FU.CK DOWN! >A<

-Shadow gets between naru and saturn with a dark shade looming over head-
Shadow.B: Naru do not take this the hard way ive been like this for ages, if we did break apart completely atleast you'd still have me as a friend to whom you can rely on to help keep you s-s-sane....saaaa*shadow falls to his kneas and both primal and primordial appear in spirit form*
Primordial: this is making me sick so im stepping in, Naru if you truely loved shadow then why arent you supporting him in every way a friend can, haven't you noticed hes been off, his power has increased hes had to adapt i havent seen him do that since he was 10
Primal: i agree though im not as incredibly agitated like primordial, even i see whats been happening, *shadow steps in and puts his hands over their mouths*Shadow.B: i think she gets it boys, Naru im truely sorry but as much as i'd hate to agree with them, they're right we've drifted apart and i just don't feel the same way i did when i first met you, i was already guilty from keeping it this long know how you'd handle it, but im still here you wont lose me as a friend, i trust Shock as if he was my brother and im will to do the same with his sister and perhaps get her a aura gem....

Shadow.B: Naru Please just respect this and be calm i dont want to hurt you further.

Naru: !! S-So.... Y-Yhur.... ....I-I..... .....I'M SORRYYYY! ..She'd fly off, crying, as she threw the ring to him... JUST MARRY HER THEN AND LEAVE ME TO MY DEATH!!
Mora: .... Great job, Shadow. This is EXACTLY what I didn't want to happen!! ..She'd walk off.

Mora: IS IT HER FAULT SHE SPENT ALL THE TIME SHE WAS MISSING IN HELL?! NOW SHE WANTS TO GO BACK. Shadow, you used to be my role model. Now you've lost my respect. Shock, I'll be back in a bit, I gotta find Naru.

saturn: woa, naru calm down im not trying to steal your man or anything. i know that u guys are married and all.... but i wuz just playing around! deal with it! *hair starts to fly around and eyes glow* shock: oh crap, *runs to saturn and hugs her trying to calm her down* shock: sis calm down, please for me. saturn: ok, *saturn calms down and the lightning around her goes down* shock: better? saturn: yeah, thanks bro

Naru: ..She'd be in a tree not so far away, crying..
Mora: ..She'd climb up, then hug Naru tightly.. Everythings gonna be ok, Naru... It'll be ok..
[...Wow, I'm close to tears! o_O Naru's kind of me, And I guess her being married to Shadow was kind of my way of.... O-Oh, forget it...]

[My heart-And Naru's heart- are BOTH in denial... Naru's because she's so depressed, and me... Because I can't feel this way, t-there's no possible way. I-I'm not allowed to..]

Shadow.B: the truth hurts but it will heal, im sorry, i feel guilty as it is i didnt want to drag this further, origionally i did love naru, its just slipped and hasnt been the same for 6 months now, i just want to be friends, if relationships don't work they don't work, Ive had few girl friends back on draknos that havent worked due to differences or problems...
and if she'll have me i would be honored to be by your side Saturn the Hedgehog and if its alright with your brother*bowing before them with his aura gem in hand showing hes the real deal*

[....FU.CK IT. SHADOW, IN THE TIME NARU AND SHADOW HAVE BEEN TOGETHER... I'VE DEVELOPED FEELINGS!! >A<]

[I-I've been in denail until now, because Naru was a way o-of expressing it, in a manner... B-But I'm not allowed to feel this, i-it's not right! I'm with Retro, and I love him to death... B-But I can't help how I feel about you... W-Which is why I almost cried when I saw yhur oc leaving Naru.. I felt like you were leaving behind all those memories... A-And I grew sad.... ...I-I'm sorry... Forgive me if this ruins our relationship! I-I just couldn't keep it in anymore!!]

[I'm sad because now, I'm scared you'll start hating me, I-I can't take that, I felt that Naru was the only thing keeping yhu such a close friend... I-I'm starting to cry because of this... I'M NOT SUPPOSED TO FEEL THIS WAY!!]

[....D-Dam.mit... I ruined everything.... Now I feel awful...]

shock: of corse it alright shadow, your the only one who i can say realy is a challenge to fight! saturn: oh yes! *jumps into shadow* though im only 17 so were just going to have to be dating

[.........]

and i think i speak for everyone when i say.......0_0

[Shock, shoot me...]
Naru: ..She'd watch, then start sobbing..
Mora: Naru... I'm sorry. ..She'd pull out her dagger, stabbing Naru in the heart.. But I can't see you in pain!
Naru: ...T-Thank you, M-Mora... ..She'd smile, then fall to the ground..
Mora: .... ..She'd keep her head down.. 'Tis better to have loved and lost then to never have loved at all.
[Forgive me...]

Mora: ..She'd leap down, then pick up Naru's body, walking off, crying silently, shedding tears for only the second time in her life.. S-Shock... I need to bury Naru. Maybe she'll be better off in heaven... ..She'd then walk to her house..
[Yep. Naru may not be used now... And I should get out of Shadow's life...]

[...Dangit... I'm crying now... I'm so friggin weak...]

shock:*hugs mora tightly* im sorry that had to happen. saturn: oh man, did that just happen?

Mora: ..She'd look at Shock.. It's fine. Sure, I lost the only friend I had in my childhood... But I'll be ok. ..She'd force a smile through her tears.. Naru was better than us all, she never deserved this... ..She'd then bury Naru's body, and fall to her knees, tears falling.. Naru... I'm sorry I wasn't there for you.,. I'm so sorry... ..She'd continue crying..

shock: man, i remember when life wasnt complicated. back when me, you, and amp all lived on that island.....

Mora: Shock... ..She'd look at him, with tear-filled eyes, then run to him and hug him tightly..
[The only other time she's EVER cried is in joy. At her wedding.]

shock:thats pretty sad. hey, cheer up. she might come back like how you did when amp kil,led you

Mora: ...She wanted to go... She's not coming back...

shock: oh....

Mora: ..She'd start sobbing quietly, burying her face in his chest..

Shadow.B:*holding saturn* mora im sorry about all this, but its just one of those things you can't help but let happen, im sure she'll come back and be good as new, so shock would you mind if i took saturn to my mothers castle to show her my heritage?

Shadow: i'd also like to give you something if you do want to come Saturn

Snhadow, wee need to talk, on pokemon. NOW.

It's not only about this, but also about things I've said. please get on pokemon.

Mora: SORRY doesn't cut it, Shadow. She's gone, and yhu can't stave off the blame. YOU hurt her bad. And now her line is gone... Which means I have no job anymore.

Shadow: *puts his hand infont of mora while looking away* please i already feel guilty about this we dont need to make it any worse than it already is....*takes aura gem out and looks at saturn* we can go anytime you wish saturn

Saturn: ok, lets go. sounds like a lot of fun! *touches aura gem and they both teleport to the draknos gardens*

Mora: Hmf... I'm not inviting you to Naru's revival or coronation as a Gate Guardian...
Meiko: Hey, that's MY job. ..She'd stand in front of them..
Mora: Q-QUEEN OSIRIS! I-I apologize...
Meiko: Quite alright.

Meiko: I heard the news... Naru's soul is safe with Cackle.
Mora: AS IN CACKLE THE CROW?!

Shadow: a queen? small world im the primal prince of Draknos, *sets up a bench and sits for awhile*

Meiko: Queen of Lekotia. Is a planet. :3

Shadow: i forgot to mention, im an ally to the grim reaper due to me taking care of a rogue necromancer, i gained an ability like primal except its hot boney armor and is called Pitch Black.

Saturn: wow, sounds exiting!

Shadow: so saturn wanna go see the castle i grew up in? i also have a gift for you.

Saturn: sure, I cant wait

Mora: Meiko, is it ready?
Meiko: ...Psuchic link with Amp established, Mora. Speak now!
Mora: -Yo, Amp! Been a while. Look, I know you're mad at us and all, but Naru is alone now. She likes yhu, and when she comes back, she wanted to see if yhu still cared for her.-

amp: yeah, i still like her. its about fukn time she broke up with shadow.

Mora: -Then go to Cackle's Palace, we'll revive her there!

-flame shashes amp in the side of the head- Flame: bad mouth my brother one more time and ill show you what 1Oth degree fires can do to you*shows a fire ball in his hand* you're lucky i get where you coming from.

Shadow: sry to report shock but the user ''saber'' has taken your name for his new OC, anyway -shadow holds saturn in his arms and takes out his aura gem* hold onto me tightly*teleports the two of them to the gates of Draknos castle, a beautiful castle with gleaming blue bricks with a sapphire encrusted gate*
Royal knights: Prince Shadow it is great to see you again we'll inform the queen immidiately *the gates open, shadow takes saturn by the hand and leads her onto an energy based conveyor belt that takes them straight into the thrown room*
Queen S.Serenity: my Son you have returned and who is your pretty friend there?
*shadow bows on one knea*
Shadow: thank you mother the feeling is mutual, this is the sister of my battle brother Shock, her name is Saturn, i was hoping to lead her to my section of the castle *leads her off as the queen nods and waves*

Mora: Flame, I'm trying to keep Naru happy. Do you LIKE living? Then make sure Naru and Amp are together!
[TIEM SKEEP!]
Meiko: Cackle, we're here.
Naru's soul: Mora?
Mora: N-Naru.. <:3

Flame: Cya losers*vanishes in a medium sized burst of fire teleporting to his unknown location

-its ok i took care of that little name situation- saturn: oh wow, shadow this place is beautiful!

Shadow.B: it is but i gotta say its not as beautiful as you saturn, *holds her hand and shows her a big door with the title ''shadow's domain'' on it* Ladies first*the doors open showing all sorts of different things, leads her out onto the window lounge over looking the starry night sky and the moon* i chose this section for this view.

amp: wow, wat a hothead. ok mora, lets go. shock: wait ill go to *gets beetween amp and mora* amp: heh, wat shock ya dont trust me? shock: no *they all teleport to naru's destination*

saturn: shadow, it's been really fun hanging out with you *moves closer to shadow*

Cackle: Already done, Meiko helped.
Naru: Mistress!
Mora: NARU!! *hugs her tight* Naru, I'm so sorry!
Naru: Mistress, it's ok! I'm just happy, we can all go home together! *looks at Amp, smiling happily*

Shadow.B: im glad you've enjoyed it i also have alittle something for you, wait here *walks off into his bedroom and comes back out with a medium sized case* close your eyes saturn*with her eyes closed shadow puts a necklace around her neck with a cyan coloured gem that shows an engraving of us holding each other* Ok you can open em up saturn

saturn: *gasp* oh, shadow its beautiful! now i have somthing for you *kisses shadow on the cheek* i gotta go, ill see you later ok *hugs shadow and backflips off the castle and skips into the forrest cheerfully dancing* cyrus: *appears from nowhere hanging from a tree* hey,sis. saturn: WAHH! jeez cy, i know your a ninja-assasin an' all but try not to startle me like that! cyrus: i know, but im not here for that, on your "date" with that jinouga ive never seen you so happy. are you sure he is the right one? saturn: yes i do. cyrus: ok, if he does anything to you please tell me, it is my duty to keep you safe. saturn: ok, i will. cyrus: good, lets go home *they both teleport back to eva in a cloud of smoke*

amp: im glad your back,naru *smiles happily for the first time since the darkness*

-blushing shadow watches saturn skip off into the forest- Shadow: she is defeniatly the right girl for me,-flame appears- Flame: what makes you so sure?
Shadow: ofcourse she is, shes the kind of girl i'd fight for, beautiful, fast, talented and ofcourse very sweet.
Flame: w.e im goin to bed all this sappiness is making me tired, farewell.
Shadow: rest easy brother*the two then go to their bed chambers ready to dream about their girls*

Naru: *hugs Amp, smiling* I missed yhu, ya know... Mistress, can we all go back to our island so nothing bad happens ever again? :3
Mora: Of course. ^v^ Shock, I think yhu deserve a special surprise. ewe [PERV ME IS PERV.]

amp: hehe ^///^

shock: SHUT UP *shocks amp*
amp: yow! i was kidding!

-the next morning shadow wakes and ventures into his part of the castle gardens, then sits while thinking about saturn, imagining dancing with her under the moonlight, so he begins to create a gazibo with an area inwhich he can dance if she comes round again, once finished he positions cyan coloured jewel fragments around the inside of the gazibo, in a way that it reflect off the moon and creates a light on the floor in the shape of saturn*

Shadow: hmm now to test it *shines a light on it and it works fine, he then takes a photo of himself infront of the gazibo and on the back writes '' to the most beautiful princess in the lands, a gift from your primal prince, something i hope you'll see in person'', then uses his gem to send it to her*

Naru: Mora, yhu know my coronation as a royal guard to Meiko is coming up!
Mora: I know, but I wanted to.. ..She'd whisper in Naru's ear..
Naru: Why yhu wanna start a family?
Mora: .... -///////-'

saturn:oh wow, this neckalace is soo cool, i gotta go meet up with him *runs down to the first floor and into the garden to meet shock and cyrus sparing* saturn: HEY GUYS! shock: hm? cyrus:*smashes shock in the back sending him flying* yeah? saturn: im going to see shadow! shock: ok,be safe! saturn: alright *gets on extreme gear and rides to draknos* cyrus: *gets a call on his ear peice* hello?....ok,where?.......fine, i'm on it *starts to walk away*. shock: hey where are you going? cyrus: im cutting this training class short for today, i've got a job to take care of in draknos. shock *sigh* ok, wait WHERE?! *cyrus disapears using his ninja techniques*

Mora: Shock, yhu ready? ..She'd be in her best dress.. Amp and Naru be waiting at Meiko's castle.

shock: sure, lets go *goes half-super and he flies her to meiko's castle*

-shadow can hear saturn getting close to draknos and he quickly covers the gazibo to show it when she arrives-
Shadow: i hope she likes this i poured my heart into its creation*saturn arrives and shadow greets her with a friendly hug and soft kiss on the cheek* saturn i made something in my garden for you i hope you like it*hes uncovers the gazibo revealing it to saturn* What do you think?*takes her hand leads her into the centre of it* i used the same jewels as the one in your necklace, this gazibo is all yours for when you come to enjoy the weather here.

Mora: ^v^
Meiko: Hey guys!
Naru: Mistress! Looky! *spins around in a red dress* Amp had it special tailored! He's so sweet! X3 ..She'd coo happily..

saturn: wow, its even more beaautiful in person! shadow you the best guy a girl could ever have *spins around happily*

amp: yeah, only the best for you naru. *wispers th shock* hey, no hard feelings about what happened before in the dusk zone right? shock: *wispers back* no, but i will get you back. thats a promise.

Shadow:*smiles* im glad you like it, i wanted to impress you with it so that if we ever danced together it'd be in this gazibo, oh i forgot, the moon's up in couple of hours it'll make this gazibo shine*puts his arm round her* im glad you're here with me saturn, when im not with you all i end up doing is missing, so what im gonna do is, for whenever you're over here, ill create an area in my area for you to sleep in, unless you prefer to sleep in my room with me, thats up to you...

I really do like saturn, like like^^

like You*

Naru: X3
Mora: Amp, I'n really glad you're with her now. I haven seen her so happy in ages. :3

saturn: ^////^ thats nice

amp: yeah, me too

Shadow: so what you want to do miss saturn, i have shown you my mothers castle and all it promise, maybe you would be so kind as to join me in the dining room for some dinner?

saturn: that sounds great, lets go!

Shadow: awesome,*takes her by the hand and as we arrive in the dining hall a table laid with cloth and candle light, lies in wait* what do you think?

Naru: ^v^
Meiko: Naru, I'm glad to have you as a royal guard. :3
Naru: Thank you, Meiko! X3

saturn: this place is amazing

-the two sit at the table and while eating their meal shadow looks up at saturn eating hers noticing how beautiful she is in the candle light-
Shadow: saturn the time we've ben dating so far has been the best time of my life, i enjoyed making those bit and pieces for you, i've really come to respect you, you're cute charm your lovely personality, you're an angel of a hedgehog, i really like you maybe so much as to love you

Naru: ..She'd bow politely, as Meiko gave Naru her weapon of choice, which was a dual whips.. ^v^

saturn: i think i feel the same

-shadow smiles- Shadow: i was hoping you'd consider me as your boyfriend

saturn: hehe *wink* your a little late!

Shadow: really? so you've decided that already?

saturn: of corse, silly!

Mora: ..She'd pat Naru's head.. Congrats!

Shadow:*shadow gives saturn a big hug* so im officially your primal prince?

saturn: yep, and im your evon princess!

Shadow: im honored to be your prince *the moon shines on the gazibo, lights up the crystals and the image of saturn shows ona mist that raises up from the floor*

[Shock, mind doing a NaruXAmp Pic? :3]

ok, but itll be a wile before i start drawin

heh too busy playin AC lol