umm his bang on his right hand side is uneven to the left it shouldent be visable sence it should be leaning back behind the head. whats that in the background a new foe? other than that its pretty good considering ya do stick figs mostly!
upon rereading my last comment it looks like i wasent very great on my wording and it came out sounding incredibly negative more so than wanted. just know twas not ment to be.
you know what ill just post it [X]'s past an original backstory written by Deathsain This is a story of a young man who grew up to do great things. But im getting ahead of myself. I'll start at the beggining. [X] was a lonesome child. He had no ambitions no dreams or anything for his better future. He was always picked on in school. He didn't do anything about it. He never wanted to. [X] always sat at the back of the class never talking or getting up. One day though when he was at the age of twelve, he was walking home from school as always. When he got home, his parents and siblings were lying against the wall, kiiled terribly. A "man" was still in the room but dissapeared. Every last day [X] moarned over his lost parents. He carried on with his life living in fear and doubt. As he grew to the age of fourteen he started having the the same strange vision. It was showing [X] a forest put behind many trees a sword was placed. He did not know what that meant at the time. So he carried on with life. [X] was still rejected by many people at school and was hardly able to keep in the feeling of his parents death. Every day [X] grew stronger, faster and smarter each day. He grew to the age of nineteen to where in which a stange figure guided him to the forest behind his house leading him to the legendary sword known as the blood katana. [X] now wielding this legendary weapon shall use to eliminate the one who eliminated his family.
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20 Jun, 2013, 2:47 am
dude that is an awsome style that i plan on trying out right now
20 Jun, 2013, 3:07 am
ill tell you a backstory for X i just need to know his place of birth
20 Jun, 2013, 3:28 am
umm his bang on his right hand side is uneven to the left it shouldent be visable sence it should be leaning back behind the head.
whats that in the background a new foe?
other than that its pretty good considering ya do stick figs mostly!
20 Jun, 2013, 3:32 am
upon rereading my last comment it looks like i wasent very great on my wording and it came out sounding incredibly negative more so than wanted. just know twas not ment to be.
20 Jun, 2013, 3:40 am
:3 i say it's a very unique style. Color looks bright and clear too. Nice job! :D
20 Jun, 2013, 3:42 am
lol, this is fantastic... i saw what you did in the playback X'D lmao
20 Jun, 2013, 3:48 am
i just did to lol fun time!
20 Jun, 2013, 4:26 am
woah! i think your getting better and better on anime.
20 Jun, 2013, 4:41 am
yeah what she said
20 Jun, 2013, 5:03 am
Bro from a distance, i thought the chin line was the mouth xD im sorry
20 Jun, 2013, 5:05 am
Still a rad azz pic bro
20 Jun, 2013, 6:30 am
Awesome, but why is he old looking? Or is that just my perception?
20 Jun, 2013, 6:51 am
omg wow Danbo XD
20 Jun, 2013, 6:51 am
Idk mav im still workin out the kinks : /
20 Jun, 2013, 10:36 am
Very nice! X looks like a boss!
20 Jun, 2013, 10:36 am
P.S. WTF is that black thing in the background.......
20 Jun, 2013, 1:41 pm
dat noes
20 Jun, 2013, 5:22 pm
Hey, congrats into getting in kyro's comic. :D
20 Jun, 2013, 8:08 pm
The thing in the back is a Blood Beast -__-
20 Jun, 2013, 9:13 pm
hahaha i thought his jawline was his mouth XD
20 Jun, 2013, 10:57 pm
The head looks a bit too big compared to his shoulders. Other than that excellent! :D
23 Jun, 2013, 7:32 am
you know what ill just post it
[X]'s past an original backstory written by Deathsain
This is a story of a young man who grew up to do great things. But im getting ahead of myself. I'll start at the beggining. [X] was a lonesome child. He had no ambitions no dreams or anything for his better future. He was always picked on in school. He didn't do anything about it. He never wanted to. [X] always sat at the back of the class never talking or getting up. One day though when he was at the age of twelve, he was walking home from school as always. When he got home, his parents and siblings were lying against the wall, kiiled terribly. A "man" was still in the room but dissapeared. Every last day [X] moarned over his lost parents. He carried on with his life living in fear and doubt. As he grew to the age of fourteen he started having the the same strange vision. It was showing [X] a forest put behind many trees a sword was placed. He did not know what that meant at the time. So he carried on with life. [X] was still rejected by many people at school and was hardly able to keep in the feeling of his parents death. Every day [X] grew stronger, faster and smarter each day. He grew to the age of nineteen to where in which a stange figure guided him to the forest behind his house leading him to the legendary sword known as the blood katana. [X] now wielding this legendary weapon shall use to eliminate the one who eliminated his family.