Storm by D.kirby 64

Storm is a very c.ocky and ignorant stallion. He is enemys with Blazing Heart, they hate each other guts to the point Blazing Heart and Storm ended up injurying eachother. his eye and ear for example Blazing Heart did that cause he was stealing and try to force a mare to like him.Blaze abd Storm use to be friends best friends until that one incident....
-Flash back-
Storm: Come on Blaze I found this awsome place to get stuff from.
Blaze: Sigh make it quick Storm....I have things to do

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
16 Jun, 2013, 12:11 am
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D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:15 am

Storm: Blah blah blah do you ever get happy?
Blaze: -chuckles- Shut up and so me what you want......
Storm: -opens chest- look.....
-a thunder gem inside-
Storm: This will make me stronger....no longer will i be pushed around -grin-
Blaze: you shouldn't mess with stuff like that Storm come on throw it away....
Storm: Why!?
Blaze: Because your gonna get yourself hurt....Give it to me...
Storm:..........No.....-crushes it-
Blaze: -eye widen- FOOL!

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:18 am

-Blue electricity surrounds Storm-
Storm: -glowing blue- Sweet.....
Blaze: -Exhale flames-
Storm: -turns around- And you call me the fool.....id.iot i have the magic and strenght of a alicorn! What damage can you possibly do!?
Blaze: Calm down storm......I don't want to hurt-
Storm: -back hands Blaze-
Blaze: -flinches- Geh?!
Storm: -takes deep breath, mouth glowing-
Blaze: -eye widen-

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:23 am

Storm: -exhale a burst of electricity-
Blaze: Ngh! -gets eletricuted- Agh -falls- What the heck is wrong with-cough- you!?
Storm: Nothing.....your in my way of getting revenge......so im gonna have to get rid of you -points hoove-
Blaze: -Exhale fire-
Storm: Agh-flinch and burned-
Blaze: -bites a piece of Storm ear off-
Storm: Grah! -cries in pain-
Blaze: Sorry Storm but that gem is driving you crazy.......Im taking you to twilight.....-about to pick him up-
Storm: -grins- -glow-
Blaze: -eye widen-

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:28 am

-explosion of electricity-
-smoke-
Blaze: Ugh.....-rub head-
Storm: Your not stronger then me anymore Blaze......im the most feared now ME NOBODY ELSE!
Blaze: idio.t......You lost it your a theat to everyone......-cough blo.od-
Storm: -stomps on Blaze- Shut up you.....like your gonna do anything about it.....-grin-
Blaze: I guess were not friends anymore....?
Storm: No....besides I never did like you Hey Storm lets go help people, lets train, BLAH BLAH BLAH IM DONE!

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:38 am

Blaze: Well since were not friends....and your crazy...I don't need to hold back-hair,tail lits on fire, eye glows red- YOUR ON MY TO ki.ll LIST!
Storm: Ngh!? How can you still get up!?
Blaze: Its called training your endurance Idio.t! -Exhale a giant fire ball-
Storm: Ngh!?!
-Explosion-
-smoke-
Storm: -In pain- Agh.....-tears running down-
Blaze: you brought this upon your self.....Storm...
Storm: -cough- Blaze T-time out -cough- I- I don't want to go to the dungeon......
Blaze: Do you realize how much trouble your in? your unstable, you attacked me!, and you took Celistia Royal element gems.....those are a one of a kind Storm......Get outta here....I'll tell her that somepony nabbed it and he injured me badly.....
Storm: T-thanks you Blaze-
Blaze: Don't come back here......-limps away-
Storm: -grin- ( idio.t i'll come back to ki.ll you........) (Nobody....makes a fool out of me.....) -walk towards Blaze, eye glowing) -grin-

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:46 am

Blaze:-turn around- What?-
Storm: -Head bu.tts Blaze-
Blaze:-cough bl.ood- Ack....-limps back- Y-you......
Storm: -Kicks Blaze-
Blaze:-fall on back- -trouble breathing-
Storm: -picks up rock- You are done......
Blaze: .......-close eyes-
Storm: -panting- ..........-looks at hooves with blo.od on them- -eye widen- W-what did I do......?-backs away-
Blaze: Eh? -opens eyes-
Storm-shaking with fear- -run away-
Blaze: (Hmph) ........-pass out-

_goodbye_

16 Jun, 2013, 12:46 am

0_0 cool....

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:48 am

Thank you bro :D

D.kirby 64

16 Jun, 2013, 12:53 am

Derp just realize the story sucks XD I was rushing on that cause I had to go to walmart with mah cousin but. Der yuh gu xD

manehattan stallion

16 Jun, 2013, 2:35 am

nice^-^
ill try to read it on my spare time

oldawkward

17 Jun, 2013, 1:27 am

This Is Good! :D I Like This Story Alot! Contiue Maybe Please? :]

D.kirby 64

17 Jun, 2013, 1:45 am

you want me to continue? i'll try XD didn't think the story was good.

Hontea

18 Jun, 2013, 3:08 am

Very entertaining! Do another one, b/c you have some talent, sir.

D.kirby 64

18 Jun, 2013, 4:44 am

Thank you starhooves ^_^

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