Chptr 1 prt 2: Swift watched the pack leader the pack leader from high in the tree. "come on! get closer" she wispered through gritted teeth. The huge tracker warded off a few other clan members before comming into attacking range. Swift jummped from the tree and by the time the tracker noticed her, it was too late. She rammed into the trackers head with all her wieght and smashed its scull on the rock hard ground, painting it red. "That'll teach you to come near our city and attack my my clan mates!" she growled at the carcass. The rest of the pack saw thier defeated leader and scatered leaving Swiftshadow and her clan victorious.
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01 Jun, 2013, 11:51 pm
I like the details!
02 Jun, 2013, 12:16 am
Wow lookin good!
02 Jun, 2013, 12:17 am
The contest ends June 11th, so people who have finals have a little more time. :D
02 Jun, 2013, 12:48 am
Chptr 1 prt 2: Swift watched the pack leader the pack leader from high in the tree.
"come on! get closer" she wispered through gritted teeth.
The huge tracker warded off a few other clan members before comming into attacking range.
Swift jummped from the tree and by the time the tracker noticed her, it was too late.
She rammed into the trackers head with all her wieght and smashed its scull on the rock hard ground, painting it red.
"That'll teach you to come near our city and attack my my clan mates!" she growled at the carcass.
The rest of the pack saw thier defeated leader and scatered leaving Swiftshadow and her clan victorious.
02 Jun, 2013, 12:50 am
Some of the words somehow were repeated ignore that. :D
02 Jun, 2013, 2:55 am
sickk *-* great story too :D
02 Jun, 2013, 3:09 am
Flamewolf: sure :D
02 Jun, 2013, 5:00 am
Awesome pic! The graphics are really nice.
02 Jun, 2013, 6:52 am
Awesome
28 Jun, 2013, 11:14 am
....Do your pictures really have to be so blo.ody?